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Chapter 15: From Boys To Men
VBlew commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 15: From Boys To Men
Cody got into College that he was trying for. Silly straight boy not using protection. -
Good news under the dome, no other missions had been sent. Now it’s all destroyed.
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Shawn is humbled a little by the professors. He got info but at what cost, seems like Steven was terminated, not transferred. Eitan has been spying for director Green for a while. Good thing gAI read the screen, and warned him. They need to work together better. Maybe they can do something to use Eitan to send false info, and possibly find his motive.
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This seems really quick for a barely trained Fenn to be going on a reconnaissance mission. If they both need to be invisible what are the going to do with the horses? Interesting to know Ain can’t use his powers at night. What about moonlight? It’s reflected sunlight… Ain has been flirty all along, if he wants a romantic relationship with Fenn, it’s probably going to require a commitment.
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Beautiful ending, recovery and a trip to Hawaii…
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Interesting, gaming seems the basis for connection, while doing other things in the chat.
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Shawn got his answer, but at what cost? Did gAI notice the bracelet connection? It could have broken he communication. Did it even notice Dr Durand come into the area? Seems like he has more control than the director…
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The training of Fenn is fascinating. There are abilities he didn’t know he had, and Ain is stretching him to do even more. I can see how being someone’s shadow could be used to harm them. It will be interesting to see how they compliment each other. Fenn needed more light for the puppet show which Ain provided. Maybe they can use their entertainment abilities together, that would be interesting.
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Tommy’s performance a new world record! Glad to see that even though it all, he’s been able to skate. Even if the others weren’t able to play hockey…
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I think he will find people in the navy like himself, but they have to be very careful.
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Ain seems to be very loose with his relationships, is his past going to get him in trouble. He also seems pretty flighty. He does like Fenn and wants to get to know him more intimately… Fenn is concerned about using his powers, when he saw how others like him were seemingly bad people. So they can both become invisible with their powers… that should be interesting.
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Tarquin’s character is a malevolent blight on their family. A truly despicable individual, manipulating both of his brothers for so long. Can’t wait to see it come tumbling down. Hopefully Oliver gets his heart back. Pining for something that could have been with Finn, they never even got started, like Garret did, so it’s hard to see why he fell so deep and got jealous.
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Just started this one, hooked me right away.
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Yes, Mr. Rhodes was primary cause, but he can’t see that. That was a bad prognosis, hopefully not accurate. Miracles do happen.
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Chapter 69: Professor Petrov Makes Three
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 69: Professor Petrov Makes Three
So now Heath knows about the powers. Did he get let in on Shawn being versatile? That by itself is mind blowing in this world. -
So there is some history between the Herald and Ain. Are they related? Fenn seemed to come out of this encounter on good footing.
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Dean should have just kissed Julian, and he would have known he was serious about the marry me…. But that would not be your style. I really don want to see Dean get hurt.
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This was very deep. First the physical contact. Than the emotional openness. Adrian stated what he wanted. Liam made a decision, for now. He needs to dig into himself, maybe with professional help, or his friends.
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Yes, they are going to be together and fight for each other. Loved the first approach of intimacy. Orel is so sweet. Garret did the right thing informing Lydia.
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I especially loved the part where Will requested the ability to travel and be out of the guided cage, and the order miraculously appeared. Get ready for the campaign….
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Asset Protection: A Hulking & Wiccan Tale
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Asset Protection: A Hulking & Wiccan Tale
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That was some heavy lifting. Shame that Brad was so used by his supposed friends. And he is right Aaron needs to get Carl’s side of what happened, maybe it will stop the nightmares.
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So leveling up in Matter manipulation then just walking through a wall… that’s going to take some explaining…
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Jasper was the F up… you were supposed to be there for Ryan’s birthday! Did you even call?
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Lovely chapter of falling in love. Loved the woman in the store, the flirty barista, the movie theater was perfect.
