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Chapter 2 - How It's Going
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 2 - How It's Going
Communication is so key to a relationship, even if it feels a bit transactional for a bit. Loving this story. -
Chapter 21: Are some relationships too broken to fix?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 21: Are some relationships too broken to fix?
Damn, one ploy twist after another. Dean and Julian are together. Nathan grows a pair, an the mystery that Sebastian brings to the cliffhanger. -
Scott wakes up. It seems whoever the attacker was didn’t really wasn’t him dead, just access to the apartment that he got. Scott’s more terrified that Gabriel will want him dead…. I think not, but he will be angry. Tomorrow will be an interesting day.
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Ember is more powerful than they knew. That battle with the wolves was fierce. Trillion is feeling the bond more, the the discovery of the weapon cooled that.
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“The Room You Were Built For”
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in “The Room You Were Built For”
Max is very good for Daniel, he is real, he is accessible and he loves him and they have known each other for a long time. He is not Malik, never will be. Malik was the catalyst that opened Daniel to who he truly is. Alec and Nora are good for each other. Will be interesting to see where it goes. -
Chapter 3 Boy Meets Dreams
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 3 Boy Meets Dreams
If it’s real, where has the missing boy been? He seems like a player, but could have let his roommate know something. Those dreams were pretty vivid. And the professor. Does he have the same issue? Or just realize he has a group of horny teenagers that are in his class? -
A Family Reunion In Italy pt. 1
VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in A Family Reunion In Italy pt. 1
After a loving morning, the boys find out they may have an inheritance coming… hopefully that’s true. -
This gets more interesting, John can’t remember anything of his life before gettin through the mist. It seems like Sneth did something to him before the first battle, and the Elves did something to him sending him back. I think he needs to get the amulet back before proceeding back to the fight…
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Is Charlie going to confess about finding the butcher shop and what happened? That would be an important clue as to what they are fighting.
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The Dark Inside Your Heart
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Dark Inside Your Heart
Theo is getting memories back of how he was tricked before. The noose around his neck matches the card Jack absorbed. Vince is keeping them on track. Hopefully they reconnect soon, and figure out the mystery.- 17 comments
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Glad Kitt made the decision to go home. The send off for Mateo was good. Maybe thy will have a joint family Thanksgiving.
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Scott was not a spy. And unfortunately got killed by a bad guy. DJ is a slut, Michael might be better off without him, might. They at least need to talk. Sean’s now working overtime on cracking Gabriel’s alias.
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Sir Veillance Gets Busted
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Sir Veillance Gets Busted
An interlude on the way to the beach. Karen was very demanding…. AJ got a 2 for 1. -
There is at least the beginning of a conversation about Taine feelings, and Tyler is aware of something.
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Wylan is learning more from the book. It doesn’t seem to be Braille like we have today. It is teaching him, inviting investigation, which started as a spark in his palm. Very interesting.
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An antidote to the drug would be good, and Fenrin should get the first dose…
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Great start to this rivalry story.
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Kitt was all anxious about passing, the guy who thought a B+ was like failing. They are both moving towards the same goal. University.
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I still don’t trust Sev, he continues to come between Trillion and Ember. He is Helmsforth after, if there is any long there is still unknown. He was able to stay at the castle because he’s friends with Trillion. I agree Trillion is acting a lot like Kieran in the first book. Those bonds are powerful. The question will be if they get attacked, what will it do to them?
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Thanks for sharing, this is a deeply emotional piece of writing.
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Interesting conversations in this chapter, male nude anatomy studies… who to ask to model. Could be surprised at who might volunteer.
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Chapter 4 Edge of Tension
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 4 Edge of Tension
Connor brought Jamie right to the edge then walked away. What a tease. They will still need to share body heat at night to sleep. I’m sure that will help -
From the description it seems like the palm fruit were dates, not coconuts. They are still surviving
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Daryan is truly evil. Whatever this tonic is, it’s very powerful.
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The sleepover is going well. It’s interesting that the play has this love triangle, and Charlie’s dad had a love triangle in his youth. Will be interesting to see what happens in the play. Sounds like divorce is coming, since Charlie’s mother is so adamant about Charlie not being like his father.
