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Why do they keep having car crashes? Noah back in the hospital? Meeting his father who had been MIA.
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Bearding the Lion Part 5
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Bearding the Lion Part 5
Redemption, forgiveness and a very strong desire to spend some seed…. Love the ending. -
“Melancholia (Part 3)”
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in “Melancholia (Part 3)”
Will Malik be found? That service was quite deliberately hiding everything from their clients to not have this happen. The night with Max opened Daniel up more to himself. Can’t wait for more. -
Lewis & Charles in colour
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Lewis & Charles in colour
Very fun chapter. Was the color drawing, just one page as a gift for Charlie? Seems like, but could not tell for sure from the description. Tom seems to have had a good interaction with the potential clients. The description of Tom in his leathers gave me images of Tom of Finland drawings.. hot… -
Great beginning to the story, opened nicely, but turned very serious with the physical abuse. Hopefully that is resolved. They have become really close.
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Fenn has been so groomed into thinking that what he is doing is best for the country, he can’t see any other perspective. It’s so sad. I wonder if he will die because of all this or will Ain be able to save him in the end?
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Now we know how powerful the CB radios are. Crazy the could use a camera in a smoke detector for surveillance. I was right about it being a reality show… looking forward to the fireworks!
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So he has two guys now interested again. He should listen to Bryan’s side of the story, seems like there is a very different version from his perspective….
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Bearding the Lion Part 4
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Bearding the Lion Part 4
Damn, why was he drinking in the first place? So fing stupid. He got exactly the wrong guy mad at him. Is it possible to fix it? Once something like that is out, it’s hard to retract. The whole gym is going to be pissed at him, he better not show up there any time soon. -
Determination and Misunderstanding
VBlew commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Determination and Misunderstanding
One little hint was all it took. Kitt still has all of the trauma his father inflicted on him, and thought he was protecting Matt. Matt’s admission of loving him hopefully helps. Time and space but at least now Matt knows he’s alive. -
The tech and the secrecy is interesting, Will the younger boys be learning about all of this from their daily feedings? Glad Brian is awake and seems to be recovered. Interesting take on the different kinds of blood. Needing to know the family’s favorites is on the Staff to know. Also to possibly know for visiting dignitaries. I agree it seems like the Prince initially withheld info on Vampire Tech, but this household seems to be getting the most advanced toys now.
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Love the way this team bonds.
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Wow, just when it seemed like things were getting good Theo seems possessed.
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Back home and things are running well. Good that Darren and Kerry spoke up about wanting to be in charge of the new Yacht. The guys love promoting from within and this couple has been there since the beginning.
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The city doesn’t like Septimus but they may pay for hiding the children in some way. Dark magic that Septimus uses to destroy the captain of the guard. Do the knights have something to battle the magic with?
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Who is paying to watch all of this? If it’s a game show, which it seems like, who is benefiting? It’s all still really cruel. Is it an alumni game? Tim’s initial dive into the web to find out about the game, found it had been there for a while. Was it recently revived, or were they just unaware it had been going on around them? Maybe they could find earlier pieces and find out more? The level of monitoring them seems way above current tech, but I could just be naive about that.
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We still aren’t sure who the shooter was other than it wasn’t Tom. The intel on Gabriel was way too quick, I think Fred new Gabriel just by seeing his face. Was he possibly a friend? Or Foe who knew about the hit? Sean is excited to have a date to the fundraiser, is that going to raise some questions from his band mates? I could see these characters in a longer series. I think there is a lot of chemistry going on between Sean and Gabriel, and based on that inner dialogue of Lonnie’s about how brilliant Sean is, I can see them as a team in the future. Will Sean let Gabriel know he knows about the homeland security agent aspect, and tip Gabriel off to someone else looking for him?
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Wow, first we get Brody shot and dying at the end of the last chapter, then Parker regretting his life choices in this chapter, only to be pulled into whatever that call was to get him back to where his Brian is currently located. Someone pull some strings for that to happen. What is a Tier-1 Army guy doing on a navy ship, especially one that was Parker’s ship before? Can’t wait for the reunion.
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So Halloween started off really nice, then the news of the sex video burned up Shaun’s attitude.. he handled it much better than ever. So much drama around everything they do. Can’t wait for the show, it’s going to be epic.
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Very funny chapter mixing up all of their relationships with love spell explosion. Charlie and Taine seem so be the only ones who had sex which broke their spell. Is Tyler still in love with Matt, and that’s why he’s not angry with Charlie for having sex with his boyfriend or is he just amused at the situation. How is Simon doing, since he wasn’t affected because of his being possessed?
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Seems like Fenn is now compromised as well letting Ain know he was aware of the faked assault on the Hearald…. Now the people know the truth.
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It’s very good that they had the father and son talk, no more secrets. Now when the other guys approach Edward it won’t be a shock, but Gran may get a talking to about being so nosy, even if it was for the boy’s best interest.
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Kitt finally shared his truth with two people, and is beginning to heal. Seems like Steven is being kept alive for some kind of redemption. Not sure that Kitt will give it to him. Matt needs a glimmer of hope, and he will shine. Can’t wait for them to reconnect.
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That was an interesting twist. Nice cliffhanger. Sean and Gabriel need a rematch, flipping the script, maybe after the concert.
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"Melancholia (Part 2)"
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Melancholia (Part 2)"
Wow. That was intense. Daniel let himself out, his brother was right about the room inside.
