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Loved his story. It raises a lot of questions about where we are headed in the not to distant future it seems. Love that the family and friends are all together and getting along for this New Year’s Eve celebration.
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This scene fo everyone calling home and narrowed in on Kent was hard. This would seem to be one of the hardest things for families to deal with. Glad Randy was just there as a reassuring presence.
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They hashed out what was going on with Jasper and Leo, nothing, and are now back on good terms as friends.
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Act 2 and 3 : The other bit
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Act 2 and 3 : The other bit
Lovely short story. Ryder and Felix remain, when the chaos settles back to “normal” -
Was it really deep chasm or an illusion? Hopefully something good happens and he survives. It’s hard to have the main character die…
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Chapter 7 Cowboy & The Date
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 7 Cowboy & The Date
What a fun date. Being asked out properly, then learning something new, riding a horse. Seems too cold to go swimming in the stream. There is a big difference between the two brothers who still don’t know they are chasing the same man… -
This was a lovely day making memories. What were Marco and Vale digging for? Trying to find something to break the curse? Has Vale lived long like Marco, or is he reborn like Christopher? And does he remember too?
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Blake has a beard that he can’t disappoint… damn. There is also that photo to pick up from the street photographer. Not the paparazzi that has been following Greg around… hopefully Justin comes back and apologizes.
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Chapter 3: Strays And Gays
VBlew commented on Thightide45's story chapter in Chapter 3: Strays And Gays
The situation must have been really bad to jump out of a moving car. Thankfully he wasn’t more seriously injured. Wyatt has a huge heart. I’m thinking Skylar is going to be on the farm for a while. -
Damn, Elliott, it took a kiss and a sorry, to get you to face yourself, and get back in the elevator. 9 days… now you need to stay in that revolving door and go back in to that starving man…
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Flambae was off his game on his first mission out. Coupe is back and Robert has the backup of his crash saving Flambae. Suspicion abounds.
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Very selfish people wanting to break up Jamie and Connor. Maybe one will grow a conscience.. but not betting on it. Maybe back into the ocean the water would be healing, and there is something good about that orca.
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Love their dynamic. Cian is very direct again. Evan is receiving what he seems to never have received before, the staying.
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Jake is a tremendous person managing the ranch and taking care of this expanding chosen family. The mystery of who the attacker was is revealed. Surprised the sheriff didn’t already know him. Prime suspect for a bigoted assault.
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This was a huge growth chapter for Levi. Telling the truth to his dads. Father Costas is a steady positive influence in his life. There it the lingering feeling for a boy that he is still working out. He doesn’t want Casey, but he could be interested in another boy in the future.
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Building tension, would be interesting to read Noah’s perspective. Seems like he’s deliberately giving Ash attention.
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Richard is still so enamored with Nicholas that he can’t see he’s being used, or abused as a friend. Harriet is really a good friend, and Stu is amazing, but Richard isn’t even seeing his interest in him.
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Chapter 29: The Reckoning
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Reckoning
The great escape, will Jason even remember any of this. The drugs really got him out of himself. Marcus got really lucky Jared called and stopped him getting shot. Back to jail now. -
Julian is doing well on his first day at sea, no motion sickness. And he is curious about how the ship works, and Sam is an excellent teacher. Then the one of the crew wagers about the lines, and Julian performed spectacularly. Looking forward to the next days aboard the ship.
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Ok, Elliot did a great job on his origin story after the word games. Theo still has not seemed to have named himself. The ex-wife figured it out and let him go. Now he is interested in Elliot but not sure what he is doing. Hopefully one of them has the courage to ask the other out on a proper date.
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Thokk has manipulated his way to getting Henry close to him under the mountain. Hopefully they grow their friendship before moving on to something more. They bot seem to be attracted to the other, even if Thokk is still denying his sexuality.
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Static is amazing, and the level of tech they are using is not typical civilian either. I say they move a lot of money out of the companies into something very philanthropic, like gay youth shelters or something like that, just saying it should be doing some good in the world. Not facilitating more of the abuse that it has been supporting. And then release the blackmail material to whoever can best use it to prosecute the perpetrators.
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I get Elliott’s personality, having to talk to people then they are around him, It he was working alone late at night. Theo is the strong silent type. Maybe a good listener. They have broken the ice. Interesting Theo has a son he wants to be there for so he’s working nights. Theo said his mum had him nights, not my wife had him nights, like they are not together. Looking forward to reading the rest of this story.
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What an interesting group at the party. Richard apparently has not developed gaydar yet.
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The runes may hold the human Lucas, but whatever the mages will have no effect, might even backfire on them… Esca hurting Andy just to get to Lucas was a mistake.
