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Yes, confidence coming back slowly. He took the test, and a short wait, then to apply to university for Kitt. Matt will get the scholarship. Things are looking up.
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Having been burned like he was Graeme was hiding behind a mask of his, to preserve his dignity. This was a huge step in giving trust to their friendship. I believe this will bring them closer together.
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The dance begins. The are both feeling things through their bond. The family send off is something. Has Sev left ahead of them. I don’t trust him, but he may be a good guy in the end.
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What was in the meat that made the werewolf change? Simon’s quick thinking probably saved the wolf boy and other students.
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Know your strength and exploit the other’s weakness. The count had never had a street fight in his life. If all of the other knights are like this, they’re going to get slaughtered when the have to fight in actual battle. Darian was injured, but lived, and now has all of what was the counts, someone needs to keep track of the winnings. I’m betting the armor won fit Darian, but could be traded for better fitting armor for himself.
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Neven is almost as bad as Fenn blindly following the country’s leader… Yarima is a decent person wanting peace, and a place where her brother can be open about who he loves. Hopefully Zain isn’t tortured too much. Maybe Fenn will get there to rescue him?
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Matt’s Morning After the Game
VBlew commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Matt’s Morning After the Game
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I wondered about the connection of Cianán to the vial, or is it just his distance from the mounds? Seems like he belongs in that area more than the city.
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Great ending, especially knowing there is a sequel coming.
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Zac can see Skailer, because he has so much of Q’s essence in him. At least Jacob won’t be all alone in knowing about him. If they are bound together then does Jacob have more power because of that? Interesting twist about his parents. Can he help get Q back?
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And so begins the hero’s journey. Trillion’s parents had a similar journey. Trillin better wear his ring, or this is going to be really painful.
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Trillion is so anti-God, anything in his life. That seems to be a big mistake in this magical world.
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Interesting that the site keeps getting looted. And White Deer wanted what was taken returned. Was Bridget one of the ones stealing, and got shot by a partner? Or is the looter acting alone? The antiques dealer is one of my suspects at this point.
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Sounds like Daryan is going to finally get demoted. Hopefully Fenn will be released from whatever spell that he is under causing him to forget Ain.
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Wait, you mean the are not cheating now. What about during the love apocalypse? Or is that forgiven because of the pink magic? They have not had a conversation with the three of them discussing that time.
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Which life is the dream? In this chapter he is human and back at home with his parents. What a twist. Is someone playing tricks on him? Is this a April Fools chapter?
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Wylan was good at finding his king was to be humiliated, and found a plan to thwart it. But the consequences are proving difficult to deal with. Here’s hoping Val’s constant training is enough for Darian to prevail against the count.
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An Unexpected Confrontation
VBlew commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in An Unexpected Confrontation
That was an unexpected reconnection. The apology from his father was huge. Now some more decisions. -
Chapter 2 Boy Meets Discourse
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 2 Boy Meets Discourse
So he’s learning, his roommate isn’t quite what he thought he was. -
Another awesome chapter in the story. They’re having fun in the rapids. looking forward to the amusement park.
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Love the comedy of the role reversal Wylan becoming a Lord. And Darien becoming the bodyguard it’s crazy how the rumor mill spreads misinformation and then it just grows. I wonder if the King even remembers giving him that sword that started it all.
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Great ending. Still some unresolved feelings even if they did talk about it. Ellis granting protection seems very out of character… looking forward to the next book
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Trillion is having a tantrum, and taking it out on everyone around him. And he doesn’t believe in the god? Or just in the belief about the marriage? Ember knows more. They are both very special beings. Looking forward ronEmber’s POV.
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The first story is amazing. This one is starting with a bang.
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Great evening of 2 couples meeting and having a good time.
