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Jasper really seems to be struggling. And he was oblivious to the interest of his PA wanting to get into his pants..,Ryan is missing him too. Ryan really needs to figure out where they can meet. Maybe he and Beth can go together. That would make both their boys happy.
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I also wondered if they somehow got the original statue instead of a replica. Ali spent the night an slept in his pajamas. Did Bastien already know he was there?
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Poitr is in love, and apparently more powerful than previously known. Flynn is safe with Gary. And the whole of Flynn’s goodwill got called on.
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Lovely short story, but left me wanting more of these guys.
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Beautiful writing. They don’t seem to talk a lot. The discussion about the business is interesting. Cian is very straightforward in his communication. Clearing the way about his health status, and Evan responds with his own. The sex is initiated, and Cian need to know what Evan wants, before ho does it. Seem like Evan is at least staying the night.
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After putting it all out there, the creature they are after that Rhaelce believes lives in the mountains. They are all moving forward even though they all have some fears about what they may find. Malik is in love and says it out loud, does Rhaelce have a similar word?
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Interesting banquet and an invitation that may have been more than an invitation.
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Chapter Eight - Julian's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Eight - Julian's POV
Ben is efficiently using the available ingredients in the apartment to feed the humans in his care. Loved the response to Grace about the pancake shape, giving her an option. Rachel was irritated with Jillian for pointing out etiquette for asking for childcare.. Looking for to the interaction with the other couple coming over tomorrow. -
The driving lessons are really coming along. The fair seemed like a lot of fun. Brooke seems to be the aggressor in their undefined relationship. Casey is still interested, and did apologize for his crude language, about Matt. Levi still wants to explore his feelings for Casey… hopefully he doesn’t get too hurt in the process,
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Chapter 25 - Awesome Adolescents
VBlew commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 25 - Awesome Adolescents
Seem like more mental healing for Nathan as he steps into action doing what is needed for their clinic. Seems like with Liam moving to Sydney, Nathan’s practice in Adelaide will be closing. The young ones are more healing than they know. This coming out lunch was very easy.- 19 comments
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Yes, finally. Glad Chad is recovering well. Robert needed the little push Alice gave him to go to a Chad’s and get cleaned up. Looking forward to the next book.
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This is interesting, way to make new friends. Seems like a lot of trauma has gone on in this community.
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Chapter 10 Deep Blue Feelings
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 10 Deep Blue Feelings
What a freaking dysfunctional relationship these two have. How opportunistic for these other two showing up. Where did they come from? how long have they been on the island? are they friendly? Hopefully all will be revealed. -
Part XXII. Freezing Point
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part XXII. Freezing Point
What a battle. The Mechaman suit failed again. Robert finally realized what he needed to do but was late in getting to Flambe’s position and is now begging the man he loves to come back from being frozen. Nice cliffhanger. -
Interesting how in the middle of the story, Troy said he liked Morgan. So they got that cleared up. Troy must have felt really comfortable telling about what happened with his twin, maybe wanting to be in front of someone else saying something and Morgan disliking him for it. The steer horn seemed more like a steer came up and attacked Tyson, rather than he went over the cliff and got impaled on the horn with the fall. Either way, seems like good riddance.
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Chapter Seven - Ben's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Seven - Ben's POV
Julian makes quesadillas on the stove, not in the microwave. He can cook better than Ben. Then is an observer during the movie. And willingly gives up his room to Sophie. How long can he go without charging? -
Chapter 15: The Writing on the Wall
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 15: The Writing on the Wall
Now we know the motivation for a lot of this, money laundering. Quite the business if structured like mentioned. Glad Darius is having a good conscience break, but if Merrick finds out, it will not be a good thing for him. -
Marks wall are hurting both of them. Stubborn arrogant brats. Hopefully they get into a situation where the actually talk to each other.
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Chapter 26 Boy Meets Future
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 26 Boy Meets Future
I knew Sam couldn’t stay away. The baby at the end was a surprise for the boys. Great ending. -
This is getting interesting. Feelings about these visitors and the dreams are becoming more vivid.
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Chapter Six - Julian's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Six - Julian's POV
There are feeling’s happening that Julian was not prepared for. Hopefully even though it wasn’t requested, he can also be a romantic partner. Ben really needs that, in addition to emotional support that he is not getting from his bio family. Rachel needs to seek out a sitting service instead of jus dumping her kids on Ben, expecting him to always be there. -
The perfect ending to this book. Looking forward to what they do with Krakatoa.
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Chapter 14: Thirty Pieces of Silver
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14: Thirty Pieces of Silver
Maybe if he takes Peter’s advice, that will clean up part of his life. Anxious about what Merrick really wants Jason for… this whole real estate thing was a smokescreen… -
It’s getting thick. Noah is going to be a hero, but finding a bunch of buried bodies is not going to be fun. Did Jack give Damian the necklace?
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Glad you’re back, looking forward to this story continuing, fun banter on the way home from the airport.
