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Wow, that’s brutal but seems like it could be life for lots of kids kicked out of their home.
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A very tense escape with the weapon,,, although it will run out of ammunition unless Bobby can refill them. Jack is an amazing horse, got his job done, the warning is out. Very glad Tommy is stable.
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Is this the God of the Skai? Is one he Jacob’s fathers? Or was that a reference to Jacob being Skai? The club was a lot of fun. Since Jacob chose not to get connected with the mind link he still is missing out on a lot of history. What does this god want from him? We know what Q’s father wants. Are these two gods competing with each other for something?
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Those numbers were insane for a live feed 250K viewers. Shaun handled that so well, and that song was a perfect reply. Bobby needs to get fired from his job, but that kind of hate will lead to more trouble…. The aftermath, staying in their new house??
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What an ending to this chapter. If they get out of there with that gun, they will have something to negotiate with..
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Baby steps. Jesse is in unknown territory. Hank is being gentle, giving him options.
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Happy belated birthday. I love this story, it’s so sweet. The nerds are in charge!
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Running away without a phone. Hopefully he remembers Matt’s number to be able to call and let him know he is ok.
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Results, Celebration and More
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Results, Celebration and More
Beautiful ending to a fantastic story. -
This beautiful chapter, shows they are in love. Is the broadway show going to mean more time apart. Does it mean Ryan dropping out of the band, if it happens? He was brought in to help them dance better together, and had a big influence on their videos.
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Real life, with children, in the midst of work. Interesting ending. Rick can improve his welcome home messaging. Words matter.
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Interesting ending. Aaron’s beginning as a vampire.
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Fantastic chapter. They got the house. Shaun came out a little more. They have the guys coming to replace the carpet. A little paint and some TLC and they should have a good place for a while. I hope they got the rent to own option. Putting in the equity just to have the landlord take advantage of that would be a bummer. New school for all the younger guys. The issue of the cutting by Shaun is still troubling, especially that he wants to cut Jesse.
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Loved this chapter, what a delight after all of the drama of the last few. I was laughing out loud at Henry. Timmy took his bravery and got his sweetheart out on the ice. Methinks the plan to smear the reputation of the Harding men is not going to go anywhere… if the townsfolk had no problem with the boys kissing on the ice today.
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Brandon seems to be taking more care of Jody. Even though it was his initial warning not to fall in love, it seems like feelings are growing.
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Great ending. Now they can be together for as long as they want.
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Finally Killian has someone who can possibly help him with his gifts. Both Jacy and Fletcher, even though Jacy is the only one who offered so far.
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So much going on. Jesse is proving he can get things done. Now hat he’s doing it for his family, it’s different than doing it for Monica. Shaun had a bad day. So if it was just a karma thing, that was a fast response by the universe. He still thinks he needs to hide in the closet. The Hispanic crew had his back when they saw what was happening.
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Lovely banter, Jack reads the cards, and gets kissed.
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So sad that Ace doesn’t feel like he deserves to have a relationship with Leo.
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This was a great school project, and they helped Caleb’s dads find a shortage in their production. They keep finding mysteries to solve.
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Great ending to this story.
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Lovely ending. This was my first story of yours about realms. Will need to look for others.
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Chapter 10: Peak Coaching (Jonas)
VBlew commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 10: Peak Coaching (Jonas)
Great story, loved the growth in both men instruction can be very good. Great place to end it as well. -
Interesting introduction to a new character.
