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Chapter Six - Julian's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Six - Julian's POV
There are feeling’s happening that Julian was not prepared for. Hopefully even though it wasn’t requested, he can also be a romantic partner. Ben really needs that, in addition to emotional support that he is not getting from his bio family. Rachel needs to seek out a sitting service instead of jus dumping her kids on Ben, expecting him to always be there. -
The perfect ending to this book. Looking forward to what they do with Krakatoa.
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Chapter 14: Thirty Pieces of Silver
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14: Thirty Pieces of Silver
Maybe if he takes Peter’s advice, that will clean up part of his life. Anxious about what Merrick really wants Jason for… this whole real estate thing was a smokescreen… -
It’s getting thick. Noah is going to be a hero, but finding a bunch of buried bodies is not going to be fun. Did Jack give Damian the necklace?
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Glad you’re back, looking forward to this story continuing, fun banter on the way home from the airport.
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Chapter 3- The Mark's Call
VBlew commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 3- The Mark's Call
Cal is big on assumptions, Nos was being honest and was not believed. Orion is a problem, but at least Nos has told Luc and Sven about it. -
Part XXI. Where the Smoke Settles
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part XXI. Where the Smoke Settles
Finally it seems they have a breakthrough. Hopefully they survive the battle tonight and can really work through their feelings after. -
As noted earlier, many different manufacturers had manual with the shifter on the column. I had a 39, and a 42 Studebaker like that. Not sure if they shipped them to Australia. Matt was correct learning on a Manual Transmission, you can drive anything. Still hesitant about Casey, but Levi certainly has feelings about him, that are not resolved.
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Fun how things for the Dresden festival are working out. Neil want to make it a proper vacation too. Funny thing about driving on the “wrong” side of the road. I’m American so my first trip to England and driving on the Left side of the road, with a manual transmission was quite something. Good thing my first few cars were manuals. It does take a focused effort. Then you get a handle of it. Had to go back and think about Neil not being able to drive a car. It’s about his license, not that he can’t, right.
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So is Mark still hating himself six months later? Seem like it. At least we know what started it now.
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Chapter Five - Ben's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Five - Ben's POV
We finally meet the slovenly Mason. Jillian was a perfect gentleman. Refusing to give up his seat, and attempting to help Mason, who really didn’t want help. -
Jasper is a mess.. What was Grace thinking, rifling through their bedside drawers?? Ryan was being strong.
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This just opens us up wanting more in this series. Nice teaser.
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Jack is still emotionally fragile, and that dream of Theo not recognizing him was harsh. Theo asks the moon for help and she does come to him. Now he is off to get his companions.
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Interesting, I accidentally read chapter 11 before 10. It takes both of them together to make sense of this. Which of these new wolves but Lucas? Seems like Declan. But they have no idea Andy is a vampire they’re messing with. And with the gargoyle on Andy’s side it’s going to be very interesting what happens to this three pack.
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Jared is a very good friend. Getting Will out of his head and having fun. So, axe throwing? And Will is good at it? How did Andrew know Will was up?
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Chapter Four - Julian's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Four - Julian's POV
Hopefully Jillian will be the companion that Ben deserves, because nobody else in his life is interested in Ben, just what they can do for them. Where is the mother living? Seems like she could be doing things for Mason, rather than pestering Ben to do them… -
Chapter 25 Boy Meets the Hortons
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 25 Boy Meets the Hortons
I have a feeling they are not going to be apart for 3 years, if Jude has anything to do with it. -
The writing is amazingly captivating, pulling the reader into the action. I could really feel like I was there right beside them on patrol.
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Chapter 15 ~ ‘Breach of Peace’ ~
VBlew commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 15 ~ ‘Breach of Peace’ ~
The chapter was doing well right up to the end. Wonder if the attackers are related to Daisy Mae. That could be trouble for her son as well.. -
It’s getting real now, being deployed. It’s the small things that people remember.
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Mantown, Part Two of Three
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Mantown, Part Two of Three
Jesse really had this worked out and his wife unsuspectingly gave him permission to explore. Looks like she may regret this soon. -
Is Mark having feelings he can’t express except in what seems like anger? Seems like he is the one who walked away from their friendship.
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The reunion of father and son was great, the healing room was interesting, seems like the injured will heal. Zenial could sense something else going on with Jacob, but he’s not ready to reveal Skailer yet. Soullen was hilarious, wanting to spar again. He was trained by Q after all, so it could be good. Ow for a story about Jacob’s fathers…
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So someone was playing with the lifesize chess pieces before the murder? Very interesting.
