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I’m thinking Tyler really messed up his chances by bringing Daniel along.
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Amazing chapter. They are really getting to know each other. The bit about their mothers being exactly the same is very interesting, that they took opposite paths to cope.
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Lennart found an alibi for Danny, who is bi, and liking younger men to his wife, seems like good cover for that triangle. Does Joyce know or suspect Danny may also be having sex outside their marriage?
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Kamyk was grateful for the warm clothes, and practical about it too. The dead don’t need clothes, and he would thank Patryk in the afterlife.
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So the question is, could they be a thruple? Don’t know if that would work for them at this point. Glad Jake and Danny are back talking with each other and being mostly honest about their feelings.
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Part 10: Spilled Wine & Slipped Words
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 10: Spilled Wine & Slipped Words
This seems like the place where Adrian pushes Mateo away to make sure it’s real…. -
Robert, you’re an idiot thinking Chad won’t see what’s happening with you….
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Damn, Ash, coming from a father who is a minister, and thinking people are trash… not a good role model. Now we know where the animosity came from. Maybe now they are away from home they can reconcile…. But with Noah being firmly in the closet, that may also be a challenge.
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I voted this chapter, taking the time to bare themselves to each other, with the basis of truth to build a good relationship on. They were both discarded by their fathers. Although they have very different financial circumstances. I doubt that will make any difference to them. Hopefully on this ship they don’t see any bigotry aimed at them. It seemed like the captain recognized what was forming with their friendship and won’t tolerate any crew misconduct. Looking forward to landfall and where the go together.
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CXLIII. Paper anniversary
VBlew commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in CXLIII. Paper anniversary
Loved this little extra bit. Being nurse to a sick grumpy husband is not fun for either one. Congratulations in the 1 yr anniversary of this story. Crazy how fast a year goes bye. Do what you need to take care of yourself! -
Chapter 15 The Bond Between
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 15 The Bond Between
Damn. Dale is truly evil, is he going to get Jamie to walk in on he and Connor? Trying to break them, up? -
The first part of this was confusing. Jessica is completely correct about working and school. Glad his father set him up for free college. Why didn’t he tell him though?
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@drsawzall had to look up chuntering. Never saw that word before. Very apropos for Uncle Edwin. Interesting discussion about different clubs.
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Chapter 5: Recomposition
VBlew commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in Chapter 5: Recomposition
It feels like a good place for a pause, these guys are very likable. Going slow. Getting to know each other. And now have each other’s contact info. -
The reality of where they are broke through their almost normal life. Kent and Randy have a special bond. Will it lead to more? This is so well written, enjoy every chapter, making me feel as if I’m right there with them.
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Jasper and Ryan got some much deserved time alone together… what a great surprise. Ryan is a little jealous of Leo. But Jasper states his position on that. And he has been faithful.
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Justin comes over and apologizes, and is invited to stay for dinner. I’m sure chef Andy will approve of this.
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What did Lawrence put in Bastien’s picket earlier? Something that made him want to go back to the school rather than go into the disco. The twins will have to find their own way back…
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Theo is making room in his life for Elliot because he was asked. They both need som sleep, then dinner and the roof…
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Luca has a very strong family who loves him and protected him, once they found out what happened to him.
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Chapter 4 - Negative Space
VBlew commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Negative Space
Arun was trying to be more “normal” and Kale is a no show ☹️ Brad at least apologized for being angry in the morning. But he did set boundaries. Maybe he didn’t have that at home with so many sisters. -
It’s good Austin went back to sleep. Or Xavier would have been fully mated. We know it’s going to happen, but it will be better as a conscious act. Very strong Alpha to take on Aaron.
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Chapter 2: The Ministry, the Massage, and the Mollusk
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2: The Ministry, the Massage, and the Mollusk
Cecil seems to like Pip well enough, so he may be ok to make advances on Charlie, unlike Marcus.., this crew can’t seem to go anywhere with some supernatural tragedy happening around them. -
Beautiful chapter, the timeline confided me a little with what I thought was the evening meal with the captain, then them eating again later in this chapter. The anticipation was palpable, Jillian reassuring himself multiple times that Sam was coming to his cabin tonight. It did happen delightfully.
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Christopher is remembering more, but current reality is slipping away.
