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    Home

    VBlew commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Home

    They were going to be separated again and probably longer than 3 months. The kiss was needed.
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    Track 23

    VBlew commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Track 23

    Taylor is flirting and trying to seduce Ryan to get a better role in the production. Jasper and Ryan really connect between takes for the music video.
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    I shot the Sheriff

    VBlew commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in I shot the Sheriff

    That was a trip literally. Shiloh mind linking and giving him the whole story. The predator going after his prey, then getting killed by a ghost. Damian was distraught. Hopefully he tells his father enough to get help.
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    Damn, this was an excellent chapter, I just don’t get why they are each torturing themselves… but it is moving the story along.
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    Chapter 5

    VBlew commented on Celian's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Thokk has a delima. Is Harry having a similar problem? Are they both attracted to each other, is this resonance something they both feel. Thokk certainly was able to see something in the girls selected, but was not attracted to them.
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    Chapter 18

    VBlew commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 18

    Levi is learning and growing. His visit with Father Costas gave him more to think about than being given an answer directly. Matt didn’t know Levi had never seen his birth certificate. That seemed to make their relationship more real. Now about this upcoming birthday. If there is a celebration hopefully they will invite Levi’s friends too.
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    Dead Man's Switch

    VBlew commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Dead Man's Switch

    Taggert’s timing of fully revealing himself to both Ash and Branford it telling that he is comfortable enough to move forward. Ash’s saying I Love You after that was important. This is very interesting that Taggert owns the Yoder Homestead. There may be an eviction coming, or some amazing rent due to keep Zane living there… who will Taggert name as successor? Ash? Will they get married and have a child by surrogacy? Will Taggert partner with Bert to buy the Flemmings ranch? Looking forward to the next chapter.
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    Reading this, knowing their future is very interesting. Love their interactions and this is filling in some gaps in their histories.
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    Chapter 3

    VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Great chapter, everything came out ok, including Ariel to his parents.
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    Sam’s confession to Emory led to reconciliation and some hit make up sex. Then Emory got some advice and named the perp who had done similar things to others. Hopefully he is arrested and tried for his evil doings. Sam and Emory are stronger than ever.
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    Robert is running away and it’s not working. He is in better shape, but still not willing to get back into his Mechaman suit… Chad is miserable too….
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    By his own doing

    VBlew commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in By his own doing

    The sister was interesting, not really wanting anything of her deceased brothers. Basically got rid of everything. But was certain it was not suicide.
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    This seemed like a really nice date. Bowling can be fun.
  14. VBlew
    Love this chapter, mix of coming of age and angst teen rom-com vibe. Throw in the supernatural vampire mix and this world is forming.
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    The smoldering from the earlier chapters turned into fire in this one. Looking forward to what they get up to after the next session.
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    Chapter 22

    VBlew commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 22

    Great chapter? Violet was getting into the script. I thought they had a party to be at? The physical things happening seem like a prelude to an earthquake.
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    Chapter 3: Josiah

    VBlew commented on irivera's story chapter in Chapter 3: Josiah

    It seems Roger got hit by a car, damn bad luck all around tonight.
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    Chapter 6

    VBlew commented on KKirk's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Loved the ending, seemed to have more personality in this chapter.
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    The taking care of each other’s wounds was exactly what they needed.
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    Chapter 17

    VBlew commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 17

    Another awesome chapter. There are supportive people all around, even letting the negative people exist and taking less offense of their comments. Catching Tim and Guy being intimate was an eye opener. He is gradually getting used to his new home.
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    So Webb knew when he brought the information to Archer about Tyler, that they were half brothers. But didn’t say anything to Tyler about that. Did he think Tyler already knew? Diana is more despicable than previously known. Caleb now knows for sure about his biological father, and that he has money for his education. We also learn why the counselor was so interested in talking to Caleb about Vicki…
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    They have an interesting dynamic to their relationship. Kind of playful. Not nearly as angsty as some of the other couples in this town.
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    Becoming

    VBlew commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Becoming

    This seems to be the first time they got to know about each other.
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    Track 22

    VBlew commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Track 22

    What a shock for Jasper going to the bar to tell Harley about his song, and finding he is in a relationship with Damian…
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    Excellent ending to this book.
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