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Jack is still troubled by the visions the thing showed him. Probably false. He should use his cards and see what they say.
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Tommy getting to Orel, then calling in his parents was perfect. Now we know Tarquin’s going nowhere. There exits are all covered, and the show is about to begin. I’m curious about what the butterflies are going to do? Did hey have something on Tarquin that will attract them to him and get him all flustered?
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They all survived physically. Nathaniel has no idea how big a sacrifice Aaron made for him to survive. It really seemed like Aaron was being honest when he said he loved him at the end. Hopefully the wolves will give Nathaniel a clue.
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Grumpy old man sees something in the newcomer and decides to help. Looking forward to this story.
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Very funny, would be a great frat to have joined.
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Maybe they can train while traveling. If Fenn takes some books with him he can test out things he has not done, and maybe fine tune his control.
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It seems like the other guys were just feeling Jody out to see if he was ok being around gay men, but really wanted to be with each other.
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Although the murder scene was clearly a gang hit, Shaun was involved. He wanted to protect his family, but at a huge risk. Fortunately Kenny was too caught up in his kissing Shaun and not being outed to remember anything else, but that does blow up Shawn’s alibi of being at the house all night. That nightmare was scary.
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Loved the ending, best friends still.
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Orel is fully prepared to defend his man. The reveal of the geko named Orel, now named Orel Jr was cute. The entire clan is now prepped and ready to take the town bully and take back the stolen money!
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The image of the princes was beautiful, and real. That will bring in an entirely new demographic to the election that people are probably not even counting on. Will is troubled by having to put his sons out front like that, to be attacked, but they already were. It’s good Will has amazing people around him that understand the modern world. He uses email and thinks he’s using the internet…
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Saturday, June 28, 2025 (II)
VBlew commented on Celian's story chapter in Saturday, June 28, 2025 (II)
It’s interesting that during the discussion Kellen has nudges to possibly something in his past. Maybe some ritual that robbed him of his power? All of this seems connected. -
Awesome time helping out a brother in law/ hero.
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Ain is actually paying a lot of attention to Fenn’s mood and went out of his way to publicly announce their relationship. Ain is so supportive of Fenn helping him with his insecurities.
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Better to have the infection cut out than loose the leg. He didn’t call for Sakis during any of that ordeal…
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They are growing to know each other more. Damian now seems protective of Elian.
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That was a nice surprise twist, they are on the mend. And Jasper is now thinking of having children…
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One conversation two different interpretations. Very fun chapter.
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Fenn is so self-conscious of his powers and the stigma that goes with them. if they ever catch her again, she needs to be gagged. Using peoples prejudice to get her out of the troublesome situation was not a good thing.
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Chapter 1 - Confession
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Confession
This is a great start to the new relationship with Alex. Took him long enough to agree. Hopefully going back home and discussing the past with his and Jamie’s family will provide some more healing. -
Maybe the caught assassin was not lying and they didn’t have a soundsmith officially. Could they be a rogue going around stealing other’s powers? Glad Ain broached the topic of his affection for Fenn, that worked out well.
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It was good to see Irma help Slav through his jealousy at Rory‘s friend being around. And it’s very good that they had an open discussion about it. It seems like Gavin and Jason‘s proposal for Rory to live with them. Will generate some good discussion.
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Very nice chapter and a rather good discussion on transitioning.
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Accepted, Absolutely Unprepared
VBlew commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Accepted, Absolutely Unprepared
Very interesting motivation technique Rick. -
Ain finally confessed his feelings, hopefully he’ll remember this when he’s sober. The palace was infiltrated and the spy tried to get Fenn off by himself, possibly to kill him, fortunately Ain caught him. Then Fenn came to Ain’s rescue. Palace security is not good or has been compromised.
