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Chapter 5 - Challenges
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Challenges
That was a big surprise, boom you’re taking over the project…. And staying until it’s done. That may be good for their relationship for now. More communication. Occasional visits, and Evan is still in school, so he needs to focus on that too. -
So, Ricky was the person behind the door at Joyner’s store. And he had convinced Alexander to be the one to come back to the site after hours to get the artifacts to sell. Bridget was an accidental shooting. Still did Ricky have others involved who would have killed the professor. We do now know it was two different killers.
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Success, failure & a challenge
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Success, failure & a challenge
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So glad Petre changed their mind. Also maybe they can make an antidote for the green potion. And once he’s off the influence, remove his control collar and bracelet. Maybe they could get that green potion to the queen and control her?
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Ben has an interest in Riley beyond what he had for Kier. Hopefully this trip will teach Riley he is valuable, and possibly cared for. Much beyond being beaten or molested as a 10 yr old. The stepfather’s in for some real pain, and possibly death, if Ben’s past actions are any indication. But that would not be good for Riley to witness…
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Why is Brant asking for testing? Seems like he wants more than simulated sex…. And wanting to have sex with a man is definitely not straight….
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This thing trapped Jack once before the veil, and he escaped, maybe he can get them out of this again. This all seems like an illusion to trick Theo into doing something that will really kill his pack, it’s like they are trapped somewhere just out oh reach, and whatever this trickster is is trying to manipulate them into taking some action, that would not be in their best interest.
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Kent is not surviving very well. Dumbass seems to really apply. Marines are supposed to be smarter than that. He needs professional help with his trauma.
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That was scary for everyone, seems like the portal’s malfunction did not transport Trillion and Sev to where the Helmsfirth people went. The corruption put them in a limbo space. And Trillion is continuing to notice that Sev knows things no ordinary boy would have known. Ember was brave and kept going even through the disruption in the bond.
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So, Mr. Hartley speaks Latin too. That is something he has in common with his grandfather. Sabrina is done. Slightly sad that Taine and Charlie are not becoming boyfriends, but then again Tyler doesn’t like sharing, just gave them space to figure it out.
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Kent has an amazing friend in Marvin, who seems to know exactly what he needs. And is definitely interested in his body.
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The Mole That Burrows Deep
VBlew commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in The Mole That Burrows Deep
So it seems Karsa had finally a vision of his mother’s murder. -
Chapter 5 Boy Meets Her Again
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 5 Boy Meets Her Again
Maybe he’s bi, but leaning gay… but at that age just the idea of sex at all will get one hard. He didn’t use a condom… bad boy. -
Lynix was awesome at finding out the info on Sabrina. Getting the contract. Now they can turn it all back on her. Wonder if her father knows about this? Matt is going to be hilarious in this new job. Selling mystery meet to demons.
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This well may save Declan’s leg but it will come at a price of the knowledge being revealed. Michael apologized. He is still a friend.
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Oh, voice control… Maybe she can use that to stop Fenren from killing more people and capturing him long enough to get him back to himself.. I keep rooting for the foolish boy. But especially for him and Ain to get back together.
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Wow, you led me right down that trad that Jakob went down, then flipped it completely. Awesome story.
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Anna got jealous and threw Arno’s thing in the hall, with a stupid bigoted note. Hopefully he gets his money back. Fernando is a sweetheart and asks him to move in.
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Louis didn’t even recognize Sakis. That was really sad.
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Good on Neven for finally seeing reality. Now to get to the rebels, and Save Ain, then hopefully Fenren if they can detox him from the drugs he’s taking to get him back to reality.
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Anna needs to get over herself. And with as much time as Arno is spending at Fernando’s place. The move may make sense.
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If the car had been tampered with then Noah was not the intended victim…
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Killian’s interviews don’t seem to be pointing to anyone who really has financial motive to steal from the dig…
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Beautiful ending, Charlie got up the courage to come out at the award show.
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What a fun day at the lake for the reunited boys. Although now we have a ending timeline for Cianán to be in this world before he returns to where he came from
