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Lauren needs to be taken to task for this abuse. It’s very upsetting that he is getting away with this activity.
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We still don’t know why Luke was so upset. And what was he trying to do? Kiss Lyn? Why does Brad need 3 hours alone with Lyn? Will Lynn fall into the trap? Does Brad want a last fling before the Marriage? Why is Alexander being so cryptic, still. Lyn is oblivious to a lot going on around him.
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Chapter 21: Battle of hearts
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 21: Battle of hearts
That was a huge twist in that cliffhanger. No one is happy. Will Jace survive? Who will be at his bedside when he wake up? -
Beautiful chapter, love the rules, the negotiations, the willingness to be there for each other.
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It’s pretty amazing that both fathers are loving and accepting of the boys as they are. One even had his own boyfriend when he was young! This bodes really well for their growing relationship.
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Great ending.
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Lauren is an asshole, and basically raped Rokus. Stupid Rokus needs to stop taking piss that he doesn’t know what they will do to him. And find a nice guy, maybe not at a bar?
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The possession was something. Lovers from a past, tied to an enchanted bracelet. Fleur’s prophecy is disheartening. The battle lines forming on Zain’s homeworld. What was it that blew up the psychics? Antinous using all of that magi’s could have attracted the wrong kind of attention… Garth is an excellent protector. Hadrian’s rant and hurtful speech seems like just trying to run away from his feelings.
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Lauren wants another try, hopefully this time without the drugs. Was Lauren the mystery man who got him home?
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What a wonderful day of adventure. Making memories. Will be interesting if they paint the things they saw.
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Nice first date… they are getting more comfortable with each other. That motorcycle ride was magical.
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Beautiful day of work and friends. No pressure, whatever you want to do that’s consensual….
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Yes, Killian and Micah confess they love each other and want to make their relationship work. What is Jake doing to make this money to buy better clothes and electronics? He may not be taking drugs, but could be involved in other ways…
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Beautiful ending. Loved this story.
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Fantastic fight scene in the old steel mill. Darius got shot, so will need medical attention. Carmine is in custody and said enough on the wire that they have him do a lot of things. There may even be incriminating files in that office? Ronnie died after saving Joey who’s is sad, but he was not a good guy. Now to find out what is on that USB drive, and some alone time for Josh and Zeke, who was crazy to get shot at such close range even with a bulletproof vest on. That’s going to hurt later on.
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Good to see where everyone is a few years on from life in London.
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What an awesome flip of scenario. Steve is a genius and a sales shark. He and his sister accumulated these businesses starting with his initial investment of selling candy bars for a profit… he admits to not wanting to go back to not having his own time from an over controlling mother. And that is why he acts the way he does and is purposely falling tests… now that he has shared this with Kenny, will he also come out and say he’s attracted to him as well, soon? There is definitely chemistry between them.
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Drugs and strangers are not a good combination. At least he didn’t get raped. But that ending at the River is not looking too good.
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Mom is fantastic, Nick seems to have a lot of anxiety. Great chapter. They really got serious about how they feel about each other. And are progressing into the level of sex they are comfortable with. Coming out to Tommy was a really good thing, even if nail biting for not knowing how he would react.
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Great beginning. Seems like much more than a religious zealot with a following, although they can be bad enough for their followers. The preacher is releasing the spy. That’s a good thing. This is quite different from the others in this series.
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[Memory, March, Sophomore Year] – You Are My Friend
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, March, Sophomore Year] – You Are My Friend
Even back then Brad and Alexander were posturing over Lyn. How was he so oblivious?- 36 comments
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Wow, what an amazing ending. Still so much more to go with all these characters. Maybe Billy will realize that Hugo had to kill Dottie before she had Alec killed, and was protecting himself and his husband from a whole lot of pain.
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Excellent story, love stories about cowboys.
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Yes, another Killian story! Micah is right to ask for a commitment to move forward together. Seth was a little cryptic about why Killian needed to learn more about his gifts, and soon. Looking forward to this book.
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Joel is such a great man. He is being the leader that he was chosen for the mission to be, even in his grief, he is thinking for the best of all humanity. Helping to rebuild Earth now that Gaia is fully operational.
