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Skarg was instrumental in saving Jack and Vince from getting hurt in the fall after getting the noose off of Jack. He is a funny character. Theo learns his family and pack are not dead, it’s an illusion. Now to find the real wisdom tree and restore them, and reunite the trio.
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When Ryder was late and not responding to his phone something felt really wrong, glad it turned out well. They each got their own moments with their special people. Aunt Beth was an absolute blessing for going to Owen and supporting him. She had seen the struggle. What’s going to happen next? Will Eric be an ally? What about the parents, losing control of their son? Can’t wait for the next chapter. This story is really working with the shorter length chapters. Leaving me anticipating the next one.
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@Philippebeat me to it. Rebecca mentioned something that another firm had about if something happened to Taggert before the trust finalized. This may affect other trusts that Zane has control of, or more of Yoder Ranch itself. Tag did what he needed to reassure an uncertain Ash about his intentions with the cowboy. Not going anywhere without you. Money doesn’t matter, you do. That’s very strong.
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Chapter Eleven : Miguels Big Day Out
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Eleven : Miguels Big Day Out
Miguel was awesome. Caleb is lucid, which is likely very bad for some people, like his mother… the fact he remembered getting a boner, and Tyler riding him was something too. Glad it was before Billy was official. Is he going to remember who his real father is? That’s going to be disturbing. -
Chapter 2: MY SISTER'S HUSBAND
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2: MY SISTER'S HUSBAND
Warren had a realization that he loves Tom, and Chet gave him the motivation to tell everyone. Chet was a mess, his sister was a mess. They got pregnant trying to avoid their lives and are trapped in a marriage that may or may not last, but is definitely not built on a good foundation. -
Part X. Static and Steel
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part X. Static and Steel
Nice cliffhanger. Invisigal’s deception in this seems duplicitous. Nobody has really spoken to her after Chase was injured. What is her motivation for what she has done? She was helping Robert with the Mecha suit when it failed, did she sabotage it? Chad and Robert need another sit down conversation to work out how they are feeling and if they can apologize and move forward. -
I agree this AI is telling a story from the outside looking in, it’s not really a first person perspective. Curious if that could be added to the prompt and know if it makes the tone any better?
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Those stores do tend to have hunks in them, the guys got a little distracted, and that nearly destroyed the porch. They make a great team. Barnaby saving them as usual.
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You brought these guy back to life for me. Glad you are picking this up to finish of the story.
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Kent now has someone to hold the space his brother had in their room at home. Not the same but still someone there.
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This is a brilliant diversion. It’s funny how people we are interested in can totally derail our brains.
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I vote for the lazy summer day at the hidden swimming hole.
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The discovery of the brand by Ash really explains a lot about Taggert’s behavior. And that Ash doesn’t care an loves him anyway. The trust is going to change a lot of things. It may end up owning some of the debt that is holding up the auction. And more… Tag seems more like his grandfather, not afraid of hard work, and that was seen. Looking forward to more, no matter the timing.
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Chapter 29: The Truth That Buried Us
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Truth That Buried Us
The truth is there, maybe she kept the knife and the phone together. Police need to search the house. Hopefully Sebastian is found. -
This suppressor seems to be on purpose disrupting his abilities, and right now that’s a bad thing.
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Chapter 22 Boy Meets Revelations
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 22 Boy Meets Revelations
Damn, the rapist was the same for both Sam and Kade. Manipulating bastard. -
That was amazing, from the mind blowing sex scene through the documentary. They have had an amazing life. Looking forward to what happened in 2021. Was that when the rehab happened?
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Love the way you tied this up. Atreus still needs to kiss Casimir. But for now finding his friends together was a great thing.
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It is a lot to wrestle with, Becoming a hero, from a scared child, looking up to your mentor only to find out he is the reason you lost body parts.
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Seems like the deciphering book is not in the library, but who has it?
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Interesting getting to know you session.
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Everyone got to have fun in this story.
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So we learn what skill Aleena has. They fought well an.d only one was seriously injured. Malik and Rhaelce are getting closer again.
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Part 14 - Acceptance Ceremony (Finale)
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 14 - Acceptance Ceremony (Finale)
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Riley is a trip. Love his, interaction after Caleb started talking to him. May start to bring some memories back.
