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Mantown, Part Two of Three
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Mantown, Part Two of Three
Jesse really had this worked out and his wife unsuspectingly gave him permission to explore. Looks like she may regret this soon. -
Is Mark having feelings he can’t express except in what seems like anger? Seems like he is the one who walked away from their friendship.
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The reunion of father and son was great, the healing room was interesting, seems like the injured will heal. Zenial could sense something else going on with Jacob, but he’s not ready to reveal Skailer yet. Soullen was hilarious, wanting to spar again. He was trained by Q after all, so it could be good. Ow for a story about Jacob’s fathers…
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So someone was playing with the lifesize chess pieces before the murder? Very interesting.
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Chapter Three - Ben's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Three - Ben's POV
Julian was designed specifically for Ben. How much more data did the company dive into for this design? -
Looking forward to this. The family dynamic is a mess. Looking forward to the companion arriving.
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I think that Marty’s nose would know the difference from a typical dog bite and a wolf bite… The question is why was Lucas targeted?
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Chapter 11: The Gearhead's Leverage
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11: The Gearhead's Leverage
Andrew took to the shark outfit pretty well. This chapter really gave him confidence. Problem is he’ll need more suits… -
Great chapter, being alone walking on a trail gives a person a lot of time for reflection. And being physically active makes one pay attention to their body. He is growing internally.
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Is it too late to stop? Is there anything Gary can do? He knows the location. Poitr does not want his love to be sacrificed.
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The nervousness about the awards was palpable, winning for best actor and best picture is huge. That may give them clout for making the next film.
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Patrick was traumatized from seeing Sakis, and instead of talking with Marcus decided to be angry with him…
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Part XX. Reduced to Cinders
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part XX. Reduced to Cinders
Robert, man, talk to someone, even Chad about what is going on mentally. Using sex as a drug is not good and has been ending badly for both guys. -
Awesome ending. The auction scene was tense, then Taggert started bidding and Zane tried unsuccessfully to outbid his son. Back at the ranch Eric is surprised that he not only has his homestead back, but is a multimillionaire. Thanks to Taggert. Ash is surprised to learn that Taggert used almost all of his wealth to buy into Nasser so that he could stay at the ranch and be with him… then the dancing at dinner in public. What a lovely ending.
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Fun podcast episode. They have plans to meet during the tour so it won’t be all of that time apart.
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The trek to see Bastien, just to tell him to not come over tonight turned into sex in the hall… Ali’s poor eyesight is a huge clue. Is he farsighted, he seemed to be having trouble writing…
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Greg is not a morning person. He is a man of action when he saw the man of the couple who jumped not come to the surface after the cliff dive. A literal cliff hanger. Will Justin follow or call for help?
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Aleela was almost killed by the winged creatures before Kalloh saved her. All of them with powers have been shunned in some way. And have also made friends. They are a chosen family now.
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This was beautiful, such tenderness.
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The outfitter knew what she was doing, he’s setup for success. Although I didn’t see a description of packing any food. The sunset scene at the beach was fantastic, and the waiter helped him gently.
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Chapter 4 Cowboy & The Picture
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 4 Cowboy & The Picture
It’s going to be interesting when the brothers figure out they are chasing the same guy. The sex was delicious, but Marcus is still grieving. It’s good he is getting counseling. -
Great beginning, love cowboy stories. Morgan had a rough start to life, but things are looking up.
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Wonderful winter story in the middle of summer, at least in the Northern Hemisphere. These guys really needed to meet and connect.
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The acting in town went well, once the boys got together they talked and agreed to help out their friends who were in trouble. A good decision. Roland had news about switching to beef, much easier than daily milking, and the market being what it is would be better for them financially. He is a great father.
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Chapter 24 Boy Meets Aftermath
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 24 Boy Meets Aftermath
Sam just could not imagine that Emory would want to be anywhere but with him… not considering what an opportunity he would be passing up not going to Columbia. And now meeting the parents. When is he going to tell Sam about his decision? And Peter already knows… that’s not going to end well…
