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    Dead Man's Switch

    VBlew commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Dead Man's Switch

    Taggert’s timing of fully revealing himself to both Ash and Branford it telling that he is comfortable enough to move forward. Ash’s saying I Love You after that was important. This is very interesting that Taggert owns the Yoder Homestead. There may be an eviction coming, or some amazing rent due to keep Zane living there… who will Taggert name as successor? Ash? Will they get married and have a child by surrogacy? Will Taggert partner with Bert to buy the Flemmings ranch? Looking forward to the next chapter.
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    Reading this, knowing their future is very interesting. Love their interactions and this is filling in some gaps in their histories.
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    Chapter 3

    VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Great chapter, everything came out ok, including Ariel to his parents.
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    Sam’s confession to Emory led to reconciliation and some hit make up sex. Then Emory got some advice and named the perp who had done similar things to others. Hopefully he is arrested and tried for his evil doings. Sam and Emory are stronger than ever.
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    Robert is running away and it’s not working. He is in better shape, but still not willing to get back into his Mechaman suit… Chad is miserable too….
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    By his own doing

    VBlew commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in By his own doing

    The sister was interesting, not really wanting anything of her deceased brothers. Basically got rid of everything. But was certain it was not suicide.
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    This seemed like a really nice date. Bowling can be fun.
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    Love this chapter, mix of coming of age and angst teen rom-com vibe. Throw in the supernatural vampire mix and this world is forming.
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    The smoldering from the earlier chapters turned into fire in this one. Looking forward to what they get up to after the next session.
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    Chapter 22

    VBlew commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 22

    Great chapter? Violet was getting into the script. I thought they had a party to be at? The physical things happening seem like a prelude to an earthquake.
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    Chapter 3: Josiah

    VBlew commented on irivera's story chapter in Chapter 3: Josiah

    It seems Roger got hit by a car, damn bad luck all around tonight.
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    Chapter 6

    VBlew commented on KKirk's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Loved the ending, seemed to have more personality in this chapter.
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    The taking care of each other’s wounds was exactly what they needed.
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    Chapter 17

    VBlew commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 17

    Another awesome chapter. There are supportive people all around, even letting the negative people exist and taking less offense of their comments. Catching Tim and Guy being intimate was an eye opener. He is gradually getting used to his new home.
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    So Webb knew when he brought the information to Archer about Tyler, that they were half brothers. But didn’t say anything to Tyler about that. Did he think Tyler already knew? Diana is more despicable than previously known. Caleb now knows for sure about his biological father, and that he has money for his education. We also learn why the counselor was so interested in talking to Caleb about Vicki…
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    They have an interesting dynamic to their relationship. Kind of playful. Not nearly as angsty as some of the other couples in this town.
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    Becoming

    VBlew commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Becoming

    This seems to be the first time they got to know about each other.
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    Track 22

    VBlew commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Track 22

    What a shock for Jasper going to the bar to tell Harley about his song, and finding he is in a relationship with Damian…
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    Excellent ending to this book.
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    Lightness

    VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Lightness

    Skarg was instrumental in saving Jack and Vince from getting hurt in the fall after getting the noose off of Jack. He is a funny character. Theo learns his family and pack are not dead, it’s an illusion. Now to find the real wisdom tree and restore them, and reunite the trio.
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    When Ryder was late and not responding to his phone something felt really wrong, glad it turned out well. They each got their own moments with their special people. Aunt Beth was an absolute blessing for going to Owen and supporting him. She had seen the struggle. What’s going to happen next? Will Eric be an ally? What about the parents, losing control of their son? Can’t wait for the next chapter. This story is really working with the shorter length chapters. Leaving me anticipating the next one.
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    The Trust

    VBlew commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in The Trust

    @Philippebeat me to it. Rebecca mentioned something that another firm had about if something happened to Taggert before the trust finalized. This may affect other trusts that Zane has control of, or more of Yoder Ranch itself. Tag did what he needed to reassure an uncertain Ash about his intentions with the cowboy. Not going anywhere without you. Money doesn’t matter, you do. That’s very strong.
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    Miguel was awesome. Caleb is lucid, which is likely very bad for some people, like his mother… the fact he remembered getting a boner, and Tyler riding him was something too. Glad it was before Billy was official. Is he going to remember who his real father is? That’s going to be disturbing.
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    Warren had a realization that he loves Tom, and Chet gave him the motivation to tell everyone. Chet was a mess, his sister was a mess. They got pregnant trying to avoid their lives and are trapped in a marriage that may or may not last, but is definitely not built on a good foundation.
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    Nice cliffhanger. Invisigal’s deception in this seems duplicitous. Nobody has really spoken to her after Chase was injured. What is her motivation for what she has done? She was helping Robert with the Mecha suit when it failed, did she sabotage it? Chad and Robert need another sit down conversation to work out how they are feeling and if they can apologize and move forward.
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