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  1. VBlew

    Chapter 21 S3

    It will be interesting to find out what the baseball cards are worth, cataloging them now. They have enough funds from the treasure found in the cave that they could hold onto them or just sell a few now.
  2. VBlew

    Chapter 12

    Ben seems like a very slow burn.. heating up to something momentous if that kiss was any indication.
  3. VBlew

    Chapter 24

    Loved the house tour, it does look like the text of the Master Bedroom is duplicated.
  4. VBlew

    Chapter Thirteen

    The swimming lessons were awesome, Joey is a very fast learner. He is visual, so just having someone pay attention and help him, and he’ll be reading in no time. Zeke seems cool with everything. His father was seriously into weed, and he seems to be too, so there is some aspect of being under the radar of the authorities that he is familiar with. Hopefully that Facebook call did not get traced, and Josh keeps quiet about it. What did Nina say to D?
  5. VBlew

    Track 27

    The bomb scare is not good. Was this another of Chris’ lame attempts to mess with the band or just some random occurrence? Their apartment was the target according to authorities.
  6. VBlew

    Chapter 18

    Why did Noah lie to Jace about the 2nd child?
  7. VBlew

    Chapter 4

    Nice, the two boys run off together.
  8. VBlew

    Chapter 36

    Wow, what a chapter. The interrogation, Ms. Cynthia is very straightforward, an eye for an eye… wow. What was that with Zac and Q’s feather at the end? Maybe giving back some of the life essence to Q?
  9. VBlew

    Chapter 3

    Hugo is in a safe place to get himself clear. With the knowledge of the aggregate calmed down some. The bride can teach him groundhogging, but first to Find and get to know Alec before they met the first time.
  10. VBlew

    Chapter Twelve

    This was a good chapter, Darius told Zeke enough to bring some closure to their relationship, then at the end of the day, they’re all having fun on the beach being real. Interesting about the safe house that they didn’t see anything unusual with the drone, but there as a feeling something wasn’t right. Nice time before sleep…
  11. VBlew

    29: Finley

    Love these guys, still looking forward to Finley letting his dragon form out and Emmet’s reaction to that. They are still tip toeing around things. Finley doesn’t want to hurt or scare Emmet away, especially since he is part of his hoard. Looking forward to more.
  12. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    Will Clark keep his appointment with Lex and save him from this tickle torture? Interesting premise.
  13. So he does get a bite. Does he become a shifter too after this. In other wolf shifter stories the bight and orgasm seem to happen at the same time. This seems like the bite was separate, because the jeans are coming off afterwards… this seems likely that there may be an all night session happening in this magical place.
  14. VBlew

    Chapter 4

    Showing up to be better for the person you want to impress is heavy motivation. Jack needs to do the breakup too. Or that will be a problem on Saturday.
  15. VBlew

    Chapter 3

    Why did Tav stop coming? Was he having feelings for Freddie? I wonder if he lied about what happens when he gets stabbed. I don’t think this is really all play, seems like it may be real.
  16. VBlew

    Chapter 10

    This was a rough chapter. The thought that so much abuse as a youngster that comes back later to destroy relationships, and lead to depression periods is beyond my comprehension. But reading that this happened and he had help from his friends, there is hope for a better life after.
  17. VBlew

    Chapter 2

    Dottie’s first error is thinking that Wojciech is still thinking in linear time. Maybe keeping Stoker in that one location will be his saving grace. Even with all the subterfuge of using agents to try to obscure his whereabouts. Love Stoker’s thinking that a pawn can become a Queen.
  18. VBlew

    Chapter 22

    Sweet chapter. This intervention for Jonah is a good thing. He’s not being his normal self, so something is off. They are good friends for caring like this.
  19. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    Can Wojciech come back and overlap himself? ie Paraxox, then step into the booth right after the woman gives him his watch and he left with his watch, and give Stoker another watch and they both get out of this time stream? so many possibilities!
  20. VBlew

    Chapter 13

    Great ending, sorry for the injury to Eddie. But they all came through it better off.
  21. VBlew

    Prologue

    I was thinking the same thing Wojciech with two watches gets back to Stoker and they escape together. We’re the agents in that scene with Thomas, the ones that took the original watches from Dottie, Wojciech and Stoker? Hopefully trapping Dottie in 1953? Time for a new more likable Ambassador!
  22. VBlew

    Chapter 57

    So Alan did need some help preparing for his show. 😉
  23. VBlew

    Chapter Eleven

    Off the bus in a beach tow asking an old flame for help. Will Zeke turn them in? Or help them. He seems a little jealous. Need a new burner, and a Craigslist add. Nina is helping. Is D good at disguises? May still be able to get the info from the safe house. I feel Carmine isn’t going to live very long…
  24. VBlew

    Chapter 32

    I think they need to find others willing to part with their watches, before Dottie thinks about this place. And then that leaves the two agents they gave their watches to stuck….
  25. VBlew

    Chapter 7

    Wow, amazing chapter. Max still has Sam on his brain though he’s now Ben’s. Hopefully Roman will sink in enough to replace that. These two are good together.
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