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Jack is still emotionally fragile, and that dream of Theo not recognizing him was harsh. Theo asks the moon for help and she does come to him. Now he is off to get his companions.
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Interesting, I accidentally read chapter 11 before 10. It takes both of them together to make sense of this. Which of these new wolves but Lucas? Seems like Declan. But they have no idea Andy is a vampire they’re messing with. And with the gargoyle on Andy’s side it’s going to be very interesting what happens to this three pack.
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Jared is a very good friend. Getting Will out of his head and having fun. So, axe throwing? And Will is good at it? How did Andrew know Will was up?
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Chapter Four - Julian's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Four - Julian's POV
Hopefully Jillian will be the companion that Ben deserves, because nobody else in his life is interested in Ben, just what they can do for them. Where is the mother living? Seems like she could be doing things for Mason, rather than pestering Ben to do them… -
Chapter 25 Boy Meets the Hortons
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 25 Boy Meets the Hortons
I have a feeling they are not going to be apart for 3 years, if Jude has anything to do with it. -
The writing is amazingly captivating, pulling the reader into the action. I could really feel like I was there right beside them on patrol.
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Chapter 15 ~ ‘Breach of Peace’ ~
VBlew commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 15 ~ ‘Breach of Peace’ ~
The chapter was doing well right up to the end. Wonder if the attackers are related to Daisy Mae. That could be trouble for her son as well.. -
It’s getting real now, being deployed. It’s the small things that people remember.
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Mantown, Part Two of Three
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Mantown, Part Two of Three
Jesse really had this worked out and his wife unsuspectingly gave him permission to explore. Looks like she may regret this soon. -
Is Mark having feelings he can’t express except in what seems like anger? Seems like he is the one who walked away from their friendship.
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The reunion of father and son was great, the healing room was interesting, seems like the injured will heal. Zenial could sense something else going on with Jacob, but he’s not ready to reveal Skailer yet. Soullen was hilarious, wanting to spar again. He was trained by Q after all, so it could be good. Ow for a story about Jacob’s fathers…
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So someone was playing with the lifesize chess pieces before the murder? Very interesting.
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Chapter Three - Ben's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Three - Ben's POV
Julian was designed specifically for Ben. How much more data did the company dive into for this design? -
Looking forward to this. The family dynamic is a mess. Looking forward to the companion arriving.
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I think that Marty’s nose would know the difference from a typical dog bite and a wolf bite… The question is why was Lucas targeted?
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Chapter 11: The Gearhead's Leverage
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11: The Gearhead's Leverage
Andrew took to the shark outfit pretty well. This chapter really gave him confidence. Problem is he’ll need more suits… -
Great chapter, being alone walking on a trail gives a person a lot of time for reflection. And being physically active makes one pay attention to their body. He is growing internally.
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Is it too late to stop? Is there anything Gary can do? He knows the location. Poitr does not want his love to be sacrificed.
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The nervousness about the awards was palpable, winning for best actor and best picture is huge. That may give them clout for making the next film.
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Patrick was traumatized from seeing Sakis, and instead of talking with Marcus decided to be angry with him…
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Part XX. Reduced to Cinders
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part XX. Reduced to Cinders
Robert, man, talk to someone, even Chad about what is going on mentally. Using sex as a drug is not good and has been ending badly for both guys. -
Awesome ending. The auction scene was tense, then Taggert started bidding and Zane tried unsuccessfully to outbid his son. Back at the ranch Eric is surprised that he not only has his homestead back, but is a multimillionaire. Thanks to Taggert. Ash is surprised to learn that Taggert used almost all of his wealth to buy into Nasser so that he could stay at the ranch and be with him… then the dancing at dinner in public. What a lovely ending.
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Fun podcast episode. They have plans to meet during the tour so it won’t be all of that time apart.
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The trek to see Bastien, just to tell him to not come over tonight turned into sex in the hall… Ali’s poor eyesight is a huge clue. Is he farsighted, he seemed to be having trouble writing…
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Greg is not a morning person. He is a man of action when he saw the man of the couple who jumped not come to the surface after the cliff dive. A literal cliff hanger. Will Justin follow or call for help?
