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Evan made the first move and then traveled south to Cian. They talked and seemed to work something out. The sex was better with the asking for what was wanted. Great chapter.
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Chapter 3: The Rhythm of Ruin
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 3: The Rhythm of Ruin
Jonas is practical, saving for their future. Something has changed in Edwards gambling. More of a shark now. They are good for each other. -
Tom is easy and open, letting Karl deal with his world at his pace.
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Being very protective of the relationship, but in a very bizarre way.
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Danny was right to call out Ryan out about his behavior. Kyle is gettin busy, and life in college is Dothan high school, but he needs to think about his relationship with Jake too.
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Accidents happen, and Julian was prepared and knew what to do. Fortunately they were close enough to a road to not have to spend days getting out of where they were. Hopefully it’s not broken, but will take some time to heal.
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Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
VBlew commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
Great beginning. Making your own story on top of the backdrop of this area and its people seems to be working. Looking forward to it. -
The dynamics of Evan and Cian are interesting. Cian stood his ground and refused to be used. He wanted his partner to be mentally as well as physically in the room if they were having sex. He did travel a ways just because he was asked.
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More houses & drawing a line
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in More houses & drawing a line
This place sounds great for all their needs, just a ways out of the way for conveniences… can’t wait to see what the decision is, and what they do with the place. -
Chapter 20 Honey and God's Glory
VBlew commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Honey and God's Glory
Beautiful chapter, talking about the future and all of the additional things the are finding around the property. They are all very hopeful. Looking forward to the visit to town.- 40 comments
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So the ladies know Noah is into men, but they think they should set Jackson up with a woman… they are just being themselves. Blind to what is right in front of them.
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Luke is trying to be subtle with the extra milk. Then asking for help. The fact he came out and wanted confirmation about Nick being gay was actually nice. So he was not proceeding on a rumor. Kit seems interested too. Asking Nick to come to the game. Then coincidentally driving by to give him a ride home…
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They got some money, not from their mark, and Edward was terrified. Jonas’s keeping him warm and safe for now.
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Chapter 25: The Breather Episode
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 25: The Breather Episode
A very touching chapter, Vex panicked when the young started hatching. They are very active and curious. -
Kaleo is recovering well, just needs rest. Niran is so protective. Doryu is a terrific young man and wants his dad to have a great husband.. that was a fun conversation. They are building a circle of good people around them. Luke seems a little stiff, but given his fiancée was hurt badly you can’t blame him. It will be fun to see Doryu on the farm with the cousins.
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Dragon Breath and High Society
VBlew commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Dragon Breath and High Society
Noah had an excellent speech. Now Shiloh knows who is funding his education. Still not sure if he’s sorry about dumping Noah the way he did. Noah has Chase, but if he moves to the west coast, will Chase be able to go? Is the news possibly more about Parker’s family? Little B is so mischievous. -
Loved the story, finally in the depths of despair, he chooses himself and paints his feelings. Then with the posting of the picture is made an incredible offer. Who is this wealthy investor who wants the painting? Looking forward to where you take Peter.
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The best day in six years seems significant. The flow of this story is gentle and easy, like how Oliver has stopped compartmentalizing everything.
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Interesting chapter. Duncan seemed to have been watching Will and Benji, in the shower then afterwards. I’m thinking this will take Benji out of the pledging… but Will really needs the room, and Hunter doesn’t, no matter what Carter would like to rekindle their relationship…
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Cade is attracted to Jared, Sable recognizes it. Sable has some ability to make plants grow, purify water, and who knows what else? The data on the drive may have clues. Jared know something and has saved them for now. A week walking outside for boys who have never been in the sun will be brutal.
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Fun first game, they finally hit their stride. Ho long are they going to remain clueless?
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Chapter 6. What the Storm Carried
VBlew commented on Mark Paren's story chapter in Chapter 6. What the Storm Carried
Slowly, the veil gets thinner and the ghost is becoming real. Will he be corporeal on Halloween? Then they can truly meet and converse, or more? -
Chapter 24: The Cosmic Horror Episode
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 24: The Cosmic Horror Episode
It’s interesting that this anomaly only affected the humans. Good thing, it’s a mixed species crew. -
Chapter 35 ~ Songs, Sketches and Secrets ~
VBlew commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 35 ~ Songs, Sketches and Secrets ~
After a playful time fully clothed playing in the River, the subject of taking off their pants on the ride back stops Kidd.. is he wearing a cage? Doesn’t seem like a buttplug would have been an issue. Both Jo and Kidd demonstrate their artistic abilities, and Kidd gets a good lesson on self worth. Mannly is so seemingly innocent. But he actually might be into some play time, as long as he knows he is cared for. We don’t know if Jake is even onto that, or just supportive of the others who are. -
It’s interesting that Mom knew who Kent was making the call to and acknowledged it. Subtle acceptance. Ken was afraid to tell about his boyfriend, Kent told him about the kisses. Neither knows where the future is going to take them, but they love each other enough to make it ok. Now that Kent has admitted it out loud, will he say something to Randy?
