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Aleela was almost killed by the winged creatures before Kalloh saved her. All of them with powers have been shunned in some way. And have also made friends. They are a chosen family now.
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This was beautiful, such tenderness.
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The outfitter knew what she was doing, he’s setup for success. Although I didn’t see a description of packing any food. The sunset scene at the beach was fantastic, and the waiter helped him gently.
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Chapter 4 Cowboy & The Picture
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 4 Cowboy & The Picture
It’s going to be interesting when the brothers figure out they are chasing the same guy. The sex was delicious, but Marcus is still grieving. It’s good he is getting counseling. -
Great beginning, love cowboy stories. Morgan had a rough start to life, but things are looking up.
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Wonderful winter story in the middle of summer, at least in the Northern Hemisphere. These guys really needed to meet and connect.
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The acting in town went well, once the boys got together they talked and agreed to help out their friends who were in trouble. A good decision. Roland had news about switching to beef, much easier than daily milking, and the market being what it is would be better for them financially. He is a great father.
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Chapter 24 Boy Meets Aftermath
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 24 Boy Meets Aftermath
Sam just could not imagine that Emory would want to be anywhere but with him… not considering what an opportunity he would be passing up not going to Columbia. And now meeting the parents. When is he going to tell Sam about his decision? And Peter already knows… that’s not going to end well… -
It’s interesting that 3 of them went to look at the fire. Only one mentioned seeing someone alive in the courtyard before going there.
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Interesting that a specific sauce recipe would unlock memories, and a portal to another world.
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Very sweet ending. The disappearing was for a very good cause.
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SA, excellent work, getting what is needed, not what you want.
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Loved this story. It’s so sad when people thing they have a slave making them money because of a contract.
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This is a beautifully written piece about what could be. The reason the original crew decided to leave and let James remain was very interesting. Silas officially being recognized in both places was powerful. Thanks for sharing this amazing story.
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Part XIX. Combustion Chamber
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part XIX. Combustion Chamber
Wow, that heat was amazing. Chad is figuring out what is going on in Robert’s head. Hopefully he will be able to break the walls down. -
Chapter 7: The Leopard’s Spots
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7: The Leopard’s Spots
We know from an older Jason that he follows that path to become a minister, but very different from his father. And is very non judgmental. So this seems to be the beginning of that. And that he married a woman so some of this manipulation does apparently work, for a time. Will has a key to Andrew’s condo? Did he tell Andrew he was going to be there? I can’t see Andrew going to the townhouse if he knew Will was in his bed… -
Levi is so loved, and the people around him know him well enough to get gifts that are right for him.
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This was a hilarious chapter, Andy is officially a part of the family. Dad was amazing. Stop rubbing my leg… Those big boats did have enough room to have sex in, and not be a pretzel.
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Drinks at the Shard, lunch with Mother
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Drinks at the Shard, lunch with Mother
What a fun time shopping in London, drinks with a view. A very public display of affection from Neil. Lunch with Mother was interesting. Love all of these characters. -
I loved this chapter with the very open discussion of sex with the dads, and the later discussion of particular labels that Martin and Nathan were both struggling with. They love each other and that’s all that should matter.
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Good on Jasper not giving in to getting drunk, and helping Simon home. Who cheated? Simon or his wife? Jasper is not taking Simon’s advice. I bet Beth overheard Blake and Ryan talking about Ryan proposing and thought it was about her. Or maybe they are both working on it, but Blake really didn’t sound like he was ready yet…
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Interesting start, Oliver’s life has been rearranged and he is doing something he has wanted to do but never made the tome to do before. New shoes for a long hike seem like a mistake, hopefully not.
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Interesting that the true Wisdom tree is appearing to Jack and Vee, but not to Theo, yet. And Skarg ran back to his people.
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Great ending and epilogue to tie things up.
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In Part one Silas basically asked to be terminated rather than to have to live alone. This could be why they left 1 human on the ship as they left. Just a guess. Silas did seem a little jealous over James’ new relationship… it also seems the ship was being decommissioned so Silas agreeing to help them escape was self preservation. Hopefully Silas can possibly transfer into the android body, and leave the ship if they find the descendants of the original crew.
