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Lucien keeps messing up getting a recording of the acts…. Daniel waking up and discovering them was an interesting twist. With what was being said at the time on this recording, there is not much evidence of Bruno wanting Daniel to be the object of his affection. Twisted as that is.
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He Thought It Was Just Bingo...
VBlew commented on Rafy's story chapter in He Thought It Was Just Bingo...
Nothing like drag Queen bingo… hilarious! -
Running towards a train wreck… telling Jack he was his best friend and that he loved him was huge. The disappointment coming when Jack finds out Noah was invited home for the weekend and he wasn’t is going to be a mess.
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Act III - It's The Hard-Knock Life
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - It's The Hard-Knock Life
All of your list of titles hold lots of possibilities. I vote for all of them 😏 This chapter shows the decrepit state the witches coven is in. Masked by a mirage that Ray was able to pierce. Unfortunately this is not where Gabriel is. So it’s curious as to why he was guided here? Was it to gain the knowledge of how weak the witches really are? And it seems that maybe the vampires were on another mission and not following Ray and Renato? They escape, onward to find Gabriel, and Renato has an idea of where to look now…. -
Jason just isn’t feeling it
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Jason just isn’t feeling it
Seem like we’ve now been introduced to all of the main characters. Loving the story so far. -
Sometimes like this story says, the cure is worse than the initial problem… great short story.
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It would seem that the 2 bonded pairs get even closer…. Seemed like there was a prophecy about them in one of those ancient Fae books. Maybe it take that to enhance their magic further?
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Beautiful chapter. Getting their health status clearance was a great step. The meeting wit the contractor and Architect went well and they may even have a short term place to lease while the work on the house and barn are completed. Such a loving couple.
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Beautiful story, love and caring from a harsh family environment to a loving chosen family. These young men earned respect along the way.
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Good thing Jasper answered the phone. Ryan needs some help. Was he feeling abandoned after Blake got Jasper too drunk to stay at the venue? What happened with Chris, did that trigger Ryan. He needs some love and a good friend, which hopefully is Jasper.
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They graduated High School and are working over the summer, looking for more fun with Brian and Jim, there has not been a lot of discussion about school in the fall, I thought one of them got a swim scholarship, but don’t remember if they are going to different schools… will be sad if they have to break up.
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Chapter 1: Noah's nightmare!
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Noah's nightmare!
I love your work, but the characters always leave something to be desired…. Noah seems like a good guy, what made him so special he could get pregnant? Jace is a piece of work. Very moody, and abusive. Will the child being born make any difference? -
The Governor's Agony, The Healer's Restraint
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in The Governor's Agony, The Healer's Restraint
Slowly the pain and suffering is revealed. When the leaches therapy was revealed, I realized how little the Doctors at that time knew. Hopefully Amélie has time left to do what is needed to save the boy. -
Walking a tightrope between two boys he has feelings for, and it seems both are vying for attention, but in very different ways…
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As awkward as this meeting was, there was something intriguing Todd… so maybe he’ll make the first move? 50/50 chance of being right on that.
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Matt & the vinyl records
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Matt & the vinyl records
I loved Jethro Tull, an older step brother introduced me to them. Then Grey playing the piano while Matt got the food ready. Seems strange neither ever learned to cook… does Matt not cook in the shop he works in? But I suppose being more of a bakery, it’s limited. -
A Chapter of Life (Short story)
VBlew commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in A Chapter of Life (Short story)
A beautiful short story. Two young men finding each other and making choices. -
Good Value for the Money
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Good Value for the Money
Danny is an amazing partner. Not leaving, instead staying and fighting for Ryder. There is certainly something extra special about him. Ryder now has his wolf back and is healed again.- 42 comments
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Amazing ending. Loved the cohesive nature brought to this cairn through the worm, the shared pain, joy, the welcoming back of a lost man. The future bright with possibilities, bringing peace to the world.
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Enticing beginning, seems the doctor is self medicating, and trying to hide from himself with these “anonymous” sexual meetings. Looking forward to more.
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Another amazing chapter, love the build up of Hunter and Martin. With Marc and Adam giving them a little shove…. Command of this new Battlecruiser, and the Black Ops site with the Earth like planet, which is where Hunter wanted to work before he got probation.
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I’m still thinking that Alexander is in love with Lyn, since they first met, but jus hasn’t even able to tell him. Especially with Lyn so fixated on Brad…
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This family is amazing. This is like spy kids, Adam adores his older brother. All of the guys get along. Wonder if this is a really special prep school. I have no doubt that Josh’s testing will go well and he’ll be admitted. The Cadillac flashback was something too. The ball should be interesting.
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Wow, great ending to this section, and learning about Seth’s life before meeting Killian.
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Act III - Go The Distance
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Go The Distance
Interesting chapter, Ray travels on instinct, but being followed by something that appears as fog. Seems like it would be hard to fight fog… I hope the get a good nights rest, and find Gabriel soon.
