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Nick is a true friend. Jack has some anger management issues, but thankfully seems ok now. The cuddles are probably more support than he’s had in years. Hope this group can include him more.
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Beautiful chapter, Kurt’s heartfelt speech, The Mayor doing a great job of keeping it short, and welcoming new citizens. Tony was a bit surprised by the whole thing.
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Uncle Charlie is a saint…. Adam now has good friends, and is moving on with his life. Eve is an evil bitch.
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Chapter 1: An Unscheduled Arrival
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 1: An Unscheduled Arrival
Interesting start. Looking forward to more of Shawn’s adventure -
Beautiful short story.
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So the coach is interested, and after they’re no longer students, tha woul relieve him of an authority position…. Open for some fun… but he is married, right?
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There Is Always an Easy Way Out
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in There Is Always an Easy Way Out
Great chapter, but I do have to wonder what this missing brother is going to be like. Seems like Bella didn’t want him there as much as she didn’t like Lyn, maybe vying for Brad’s attention? -
We learned from Seth’s POV that the thumb drive was his.. will he tell Adam about that later on after they reconnect? Adam had a miserable life, but had two great sons from this failed marriage.
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Interesting chapter, Zeke waking up in strange surroundings. Magical storytelling pictographs?? Looking forward to the history lesson.
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Venetia returns & Gray talks
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Venetia returns & Gray talks
The reading/show went well. Loved the after party. Graham and Matt finally get naked in a bed… wonderful chapter, even with the witch making an appearance. -
Seems like Josh may be tied to Cerberus somehow… very interesting chapter, he is also recovering at greater than human speed…was he a special project?
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The Things We Can Never Take Back
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Things We Can Never Take Back
Hearst needs to work quickly. He won’t be bunny boy for much longer. Maybe showing his face and a sincere apology would do them both good. -
Epilogue - Dorjin's Spell
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Epilogue - Dorjin's Spell
The brutal ending of the invaders who killed so many good Earthians. What happens on NextWorld? They will have the knowledge of the humans and possibly still have magic? This was an amazing adventurous story. -
Yes… Kieran finally put the clues together and found the traitor. The trials are complete and Rory has strength again, their daughter is protected. Now on to the right for their kingdoms. Was sad to hear that the prior king, Garran’s love was tortured and killed.
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I thought I was in a completely different story, until it started to come together. The biometric key was something Josh was trying to save when he crawled out of the car. So many questions.
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No longer a virgin. They still are just beginning their sexual exploration. Hot scene.
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So in this new time, he’s captured with a very interesting kink suit, led to the chief, and a very interesting interrogation 😉 Was this marking from his boss on earth? That is connecting him to this god.
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Chapter 39 - Reunion and Loss
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 39 - Reunion and Loss
They rescued the last remaining at a huge sacrifice. Now for the rest to go through the portal to Nextworld hopefully bringing the remaining parts of the ship and island with them. So sad. -
Wow, he had to travel back in time, and age regressed as well. Then apparently is going to have time to learn to use magic. It appears Zeke was hidden from this world for a reason. And really may not be as straight as Luke believes he is.
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Adam, being brought up in such a conservative community couldn’t come out… and knowing what he does about himself, can he have a good marriage? I know many do, but it just seems disingenuous.
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Mike certainly enjoyed that. Rick is being really dominant in this situation. Randy’s turn. Is Rick saving himself for Mike to come in him?
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[Memory, Freshman Year, November] – The Usual Letdowns
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Freshman Year, November] – The Usual Letdowns
This was certainly eye opening, you see people how they present themselves, when their reality is quite different. Great exploration of Lyn’s background. -
Chapter 21: Will Gael leave or give love a chance?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 21: Will Gael leave or give love a chance?
It was all going so well all philosophical about love an relationships, then Wham, the evil monster is back… Gael just needs to kill him and get it over with. -
They have done what they can to save the magical beings Othri can feel. I agree with the others I hope the island and the ship can get to nextworld.
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This guy s exactly what I thought happened to Alan’s head. He freaked out about being more on the gay side of Bi than the Hetro side and had to prove something to himself… now that he has and has admitted it. Maybe he will be romantic with Cal. The kissing was something new for him during sex. And he admitted he wanted more from their relationship than just friends with benefits.
