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Beautiful tragic ending. They both loved each other but Jimmy had to move on.
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Great development, the father may eventually come around… Mom is as supportive as anyone could be. Seems like she’s had time to het used to the idea, before Dallas came out. the scene at the tattoo place is interesting, hopefully the penis parts removal don’t have any snags.
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Great ending to this first part. It was difficult, but there is now some hope of a future together. Traveling companions is a good footing. Glad to know they are part of the same world as Nathan and Brohm, loved those stories.
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Great visit and Joshua’s revelation to Olivia about his past went well, and there is no expectation of sex for the time being, which allows them more time to get to know each other better. Kevin and Daniel, interesting twist. 2 long distance relationships… at least for now.
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Beautiful short story. Seemed like fate did bring them together. Gay twins.
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Josel now informed and confirmed Zdain’s attraction to him has to think about what he know and his feelings, since they are different from what he expected.
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Chapter 2: My First Felony
VBlew commented on Jason D. Karl's story chapter in Chapter 2: My First Felony
The reality of the situation finally hits home. They make a nice team. Hopefully they can find similar tops.. -
I don’t think Luke knows what he wants yet, and this comment by his mother is not helping. And since we’re not gettin his inner monologue we have no idea what the real issue is.
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Chapter 7: Passionate Night
VBlew commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 7: Passionate Night
That bite healed Aelios and gave Adrian some powers, will he be able to go out in the Sun? So far it doesn’t seem to negatively affect him. The sex only seemed to help them both. -
Seth has been told multiple times to talk with Judy. Maybe he will this time. Micah has had experiences that he had to work through and now want to have a good relationship with Killian. And let’s Killian know about that too. They are being honest and truthful with each other.
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School Begins With a Bang
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in School Begins With a Bang
George. Any need to choose his friends more carefully, but you don’t know what will be a tipping point for someone being bullied. Even though the Ax may not have Ed’s prints, it probably has someone’s prints. And the could be falsely accused. -
Love the description of the characters, there are a lot to keep reach of. Looking forward to the story. There seems to be something going on with Luke wanting to distance himself from his friend. Will see what happens with that.
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They finally agree that their love for each other is worth staying together, even if it means not going home. Will they still go after the aggregates? Can the get to a place where Wojciech can heal faster?
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That’s a lot of water to reach to the roof on the 2nd story. Glad they got outside.
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The longest relationship…?
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What happened to the ones they captured? Intelligence? They ran after Sylvie to get their friend back, and are on the move again, but they keep being found.
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They all felt comfortable being together. This can be a beginning of something wonderful.
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That was an amazing challenge and Stoker made it through. Now will they be able to leave this place?
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Beautiful snippets of life. I was laughing when they came across the dildo that looked very similar to someone not in the room….
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The Last Nail in the Coffin
VBlew commented on Absolute Debauchery's story chapter in The Last Nail in the Coffin
When Bruno said that he burned the paternity test for Daniel, I was thinking, Daniel could get the test done for his own knowledge, but is he willing to find out. Peter was devastated having to make the decision to give up his younger brother to save his older brother. Will Lucien realize he needs to live his life and move on from the abuse he had growing up? Will they ever see each other again? -
I thought it was Chris. Jasper needs to tell Ryan about the other photo with his face in focus or that will come back to bite him. The group is supporting Jasper and hi.s coming out. They really should tell the group about their relationship. Blake is awesome in supporting his friend.
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That was a really beautiful first date. For a struggling reporter, Micah seems to have nice things, nice car, nice apartment, expensive restaurant. Caleb’s lying is going to catch up to him. And there seems to still be a killer on the loose.
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Hortensia takes charge & a new opportunity
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Hortensia takes charge & a new opportunity
Gettin the rooms ready for Jacob is a project. I think Gray’s comment at the end about gettin the things valued makes sense, especially if 5he are from their grandparents era… some people see junk, others see valuable items. Matt is all in supporting Gray, and Sacha on this exhibit, which could land them a publisher too. Plus it’s time away together. -
Wow, even though Alan isn’t going to have a sex partner, he is going to be putting on quite a show… will he need a helping dick to get loosened up right before? this is going to be an interesting party.
