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This chapter has many things going on. Getting the able soldiers to find their compatriots, Kirian and Ash having a serious talk, Rory being fussed over as a pregnant person. I did wonder what effect the portal travel would have on the unborn child. The Fae healers will let him know. Meeting Ash’s cousin Virelle who is delightful. On to business of being crowned. New clothes, meetings…
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Easter Luncheon Confessions
VBlew commented on DanXWrites's story chapter in Easter Luncheon Confessions
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"The Sorrowful Tale Of The Reckless Prince"
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Sorrowful Tale Of The Reckless Prince"
There is so much to unpack in this chapter, I loved the interaction with Professor Thorne. Nick is getting his students ready for the world. The interplay between Nick and Bobby in this chapter caring and nurturing. So different than Adrian’s almost dismissive attitude. -
The house party was a mess. Victor definitely did something to Will, and if he loves him like was potentially described, then why would you do something to hurt someone you love unless you’re trying to get them back or some twisted sense of morals. I hope Will is OK. Victor is definitely a piece of work trying to get some kind of retribution against Jonah. North Carolina is not an option, they will figure something out. Looking for the next chapter.
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Jon is the strong one here, getting Jim out of his head and spiraling thoughts of endless what if scenarios. He had a bad break up, coming out. His son Alex gave up a relationship that would not honor his father, so, give the boy some credit…he wants Jim to be happy…
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So maybe Toby isn’t the scum Fabian’s father initially thought he was. The young men really have an attraction to each other.
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This is something like I was thinking with all of the missing items and the pentagram. A gay boy brought up on fictional ideals and now wanting to have the masculine boyfriend. Led him to some pretty dark places. The question is are the daemons real or imagined, and if the spell breaks what will happen with their relationship?
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Interesting beginning! Liam may just be enough interested in Tommy, may be bi, if we’re going to label it… Tommy could be projecting his desire onto his hot friend. This also has the potential to ruin their cozy three person relationship. Has Tommy been around Liam longer than Paige? Did Tommy date girls before? This starts with just having come out as gay.
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Was his mother trying to protect him from whoever she got the venom from, abandoning him like that? Interesting that the Vampire DNA is there but dormant. Interesting that they seem to possibly be daywalkers. And have long lives, don’t necessarily need blood to survive. Curious twist on typical vampire lives…
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Wow, slow burn. So sexy.
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"Takes Three To Tango"
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Takes Three To Tango"
Wow. I’m very curious as to where the 5 years ago story is headed. There is an intellectual curiosity there for both, seems like it could be headed to a deeper relationship, whether it becomes physical or not. Nick current day is opening up and possibly getting his husband back. Time will tell. Their long term relationship has endured many trials. Maybe Adrian will be more honest. Will he continue to feel the need to cheat? Is he bi? Or just wanted to have a child which is why he was with Bobby’s mother? Very intriguing story. -
Walter now has a powerful ally on his side. His mother. Teyshawn is now the sole target for the Wolf.. it’s good he came out to Devon, hopefully that will keep him somewhat more protected…
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I’m thinking saving the baby has multiple possible motivations. His Christian upbringing most certainly has some influence as well as thinking he can retain what he remembers of the good times with Joey. as for fleeing the crime scene, he does need some advice. And seeing his psychiatrist is a good start. Aiden was right on target, but Will didn’t really want advice.
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Boyfriends for now, even if it’s just them knowing…
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Fun times whitewater rafting, even the class IV. The boys are bonding, Cliff needed the cuddle time. He was very direct about asking if the were boyfriends, and then wanted to be held. These guys are good role models as well. Everyone is enjoying this vacation.
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Chapter 8 - The Debris Field
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 8 - The Debris Field
So now their mission to get to the library is derailed. Sad that another large city has been destroyed. -
When you get the opportunity to flip the script it can be amazing for both parties… hot.
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Yes, keep going. This was an excellent chapter. But what is Victor up to?
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Dylan Wasn’t Asleep Either
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Dylan Wasn’t Asleep Either
Damn! Leave them wanting more Dylan. Still want to know if Jake set them up? -
Tony did good with the gift presentation. They love each other. Now about that mansion…
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What If You Like It Complicated?
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What If You Like It Complicated?
I’m starting to think Cassandra was leading Ryder to his death rather than his mated HEA. And with Pembrook seeming to be a crime boss it seems reasonable that he may have pull beyond the city…- 27 comments
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More Pool, A Trip North, and Oops
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Pool, A Trip North, and Oops
Boys being boys, who like boys. Seems like a nice beginning to a deeper relationship. Jeff was being better playing with the younger boys after apologizing for his bad language. He is getting ready for the new school, I hope they just don’t promote homophobia there…- 40 comments
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Act II - He Lives In You
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - He Lives In You
Loved the background lore. The man and daughter called by a dream. There will likely be more. With Ray’s presence will they all be able to shift as easily as Gabriel is now? Such exciting times. With a drywalker by his side and Gabriel, they just need a good witch on the team to be complete… -
This has totally captured my attention. Two boys from different worlds, collided for a night. One wants more , the other hiding his past, seeming to want to protect the other. Looking forward to where this goes.
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Discovering his hosts were vampires didn’t really freak him out that much, he seemed to have already suspected that. The fact he might be related was something he is not sure of…
