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Damn good chapter… now that Noah knows what the necklace looks like as soon as he sees Mateo again, it’s going to be fireworks!
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Hearst is still in a negative head space, even after getting a job from Nolan. Jamie and the others got out of their contracts. Jamie now knows what he wants and comes after it. What did he do in his time out? Obviously decided he wanted rabbit.
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The boys are making progress, Dallas has a spine, his father is no good, and will hopefully be out on his arse… Timmy needs to be arrested. Maybe that will change his attitude, but probably not. They have supportive friends when they both get back to school, but it will be different.
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Sam is surrounded by a loving helpful community, they took care of cleaning up the house and preparing the bodies while he dug the graves. Sir Graeme has helped and is a steadfast presence. Hopefully he will stay on longer, and possible help Sam heal. Then if they agree build a relationship.
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Vane through the fight was not on his best, then when he could have helped, did not. Hopefully guilt for this will eat at him, and when Jamie recovers will be promoted for his bravery.
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Beautiful chapter where they can truly be themselves in public. Nice interlude before the next challenge.
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Good deduction on what tool he carried would access the great Dicku. Now a new set of challenges await. Looking forward to them. Our hero really didn’t have a choice but to proceed.
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Terrific ending. MI5 getting all of the detonators secured. Fouling up plans for bad actors to have nuclear capabilities. Will and Andrew, with Jacob headed back to Canada, and the others with enough funds to live well.
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Beautiful story so far, sad, yet inspiring, drawing you in.
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What a beautiful ending to this book. The birth has brought hope back to this family. Please write more, the story of Lucien needs to be told.
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That was almost a Monty Python sketch…
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Beautiful ending to a well thought out story. Glad to finally know about the tattoo. This seems like the end of a book, and on to a possible sequel?
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Finally they’re all out to each other!
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Glad the policemen were just pleasured, sad they won’t remember it. Fun playtime for this trio if a foursome…
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Killian, does need to let people know where he is going on this case… he could have put himself in danger. Finn is an interesting boy… that story about the cult, off the wall stuff… hopefully he will come forward and alibi Caleb. Jake is a little messed up, and seems like could use a real friend, but seems to be in party mode…
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Ryder is back after being frozen in place. Healing kisses from his mate. Anthony is a stubborn old fool, who was once the pack leader…
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Cal and Alan get to the pre party planning section… wonder what role Brady is going for at the party. I’m thinking he may be more conservative like Cal… but maybe more… strange that Alan would be reluctant to get tested for HIV, part of him still being in the closet to himself?
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Great chapter? They finally got to have a real discussion about their feelings for each other. Dallas still has to come out to his parents. And then school… there are people who will support them.
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The First Adventure As Jr. Imps
VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in The First Adventure As Jr. Imps
Someone had the foresight to have Mickey wearing a body camera. This should be interesting when 5he bigoted parents arrive to get their bully of a son. -
Brad was in the bathroom for a long time, doing what? He come to the bar seemingly intoxicated, but not smelling of alcohol, something else perhaps? Luke hanging all over Brad all evening, a big clue…. Did Brad and Alexander have something when they were in college. Now it seems like Brad was manipulating Lyn in college just to help him get through…
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The start of a new tradition for them, Thanksgiving surrounded by good friends, prepared by a chef. Looking forward to the completed masterpiece. Maybe they could do portraits o& each other?
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Deep Chapter, still not convinced that Rachel won’t run… Killian has a rough process to go through about deciding to tell Caleb she is alive.
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Jasper in the afterglow of a very nice night of being with Ryan and his mom, comes home to an interrogation by Blake…He needs to come out soon and put all of that thought processing into something productive, like getting a new manager… Chris is a manipulative jerk.
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That could have turned out much differently if the Shaman wasn’t around. He was brave to try and save the guy in the truck, but outnumbered. Interesting with the tickle torture…
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I just finished reading all of this amazing series, an this is marked complete, but does not feel like an ending place like the 2 prior books… are you still working on this or maybe another book?
