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Lovely chapter. I was thinking Matt could be the minder, but maybe Vince is a better option, lawyer and all helping negotiate things. The piano is a huge success. This cult is something that definitely needs to be looked into.
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Interesting chapter, wonder what’s happening with his father?
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Is Klaus a white wolf? And a psychic? He is a sword fighter instructor, I gather. Very interesting chapter, with the three musketeers together.
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The setup for taking Jamie to see Luca’s film project was perfect. The reaction to seeing himself as the subject of the film, then the emotional unfolding afterwards, brilliantly done. So much in this chapter. Jamie is seen and loved.
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Terrific chapter, will finally comes out and it’s not pretty. At least he already he’d move out of his parents house, or would likely have been kicked out, or worse kidnapped to a “counseling” camp… Joey really was not a friend, seems like he liked the attention, but when it came to his “best” friend he turns into even more of a homophobic asshole. Fortunately he has Aiden and Laura as friends. This is all leading up to murder…
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Interesting ending to this part of the story.
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Part One: I Have A Bigger Secret
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: I Have A Bigger Secret
So Matt has more “queer” friends, even a best friend since high school, who looks very familiar to Brandon. Why was Matt so insistent that Jesse know Tyler was Brandon’s boyfriend? I sense a red herring here with an implication that Jesse is Tyler’s “Old Man” Brandon gets a job with Matt. The whole scene with Ashley was hilarious. Brandon is taking his relationship status seriously, refusing to do anything with Ryan, even to the point of getting hurt. -
Walter looks like he is going to make it. Will this life changing event have him come out? Who else did Mr. Sampson want dead? 4 people? This Wolf is going to get caught. Micah’s time as boy ended. He was a hero.
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Ray gets trotted all around by a very proud Gabriel. The change back to human form now accomplished their Mate desire for each other is full on. Seems like some pleasure is coming up.
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Scarlet deserves the evil one in her. Now with a nights rest, the Queen is back, Lachlan’s death didn’t kill her too, was it because their bon was so weak and he had married Scarlet? On with the Fae elders to the lake to crown Rory.
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Luca is helping Jamie let his light shine in the world, getting him out into an artistic community where he can see more potential in himself. Love the development of their relationship. They both like watching the other sleeping. Jamie just captured his impression on paper.
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Chapter 7: Gael and Ian are in a game of chess. Who will win?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: Gael and Ian are in a game of chess. Who will win?
So this is a huge redemption from the last chapter…. Who is Gael’s secret partner? Alex? He just destroyed two families with one move. -
Will finally admitted out loud that he’s figuring out his attraction. Nikki sees talent in his work and shows him what good framing can do, and he’s surprised. Seem like living away from his parents is a good thing. Aiden is very good for him as well.
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Part One: You Have A Secret...
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: You Have A Secret...
Friendly banter in the bathroom. I’m still thinking Dylan was crushing on Tyler. Brandon does have some mental work to do with his new relationship status.- 46 comments
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How long will it be before Ryder figures out that Theodore is not his true mate? Will Danny be able to resist temptation that long?
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Chapter 6: Gael faces more trials.
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: Gael faces more trials.
Wow, just when it seems crazy, you ratchet it up to the next level. -
Beautiful chapter, so much loving support from the family. Kieran has a huge weight lifted off him.
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So, Walter was the target. Who ordered the hit, his father? Will there be fingerprints on the weapon? Will Walter live, and come out? With Micah as a new friend Teyshawn may get pulled into Liberty Academy’s sphere and protection even more than he unknowingly already is.
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Chapter 173 A Hard Act to Follow
VBlew commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 173 A Hard Act to Follow
I think Buffy landed in a tree where everyone could see it. The sex is not worth the drama with Nathan. I’m still rooting for Rory to come out. -
Another fun vacation, then on to business. The newly bonded DuPonts bring an interesting opportunity. Marc is so decisive that he is prepared to leave early and possibly merge the corporation in on the way home. Robin and Pierre seem genuine to want to save the legacy of their family heritage.
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Journey to the Past - Greg
VBlew commented on Bry Bryant's story chapter in Journey to the Past - Greg
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Great chapter, and with Tony sharing the part of his life he never told anyone else about, with Aaron that was huge. I hope Aaron realizes that. They really are good together. I’m betting one of the things he asked Harry about is the abandoned house.
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Funny moment in the past.
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Here at Last, on the Shores of the River
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Here at Last, on the Shores of the River
I really like your writing and having both the Prequel and Sequel here would be good for continuity of the stories. Would give us the knowledge of how the hand came to be. And for sure the Sequel to see what kind of world Alex and Jacques create together. -
Interesting chapter, rich pretentious girls, and boys hiding in the closet. Who is the Wolf’s target? Walter? Interesting to see some of these familiar characters in this new story. Looking forward to where it goes.
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