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lotusland - Word of the Day - Sun Apr 30, 2023
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Unfortunately, I've yet to find or reach Lotusland. I've come close a few times, although it never lasted. -
I will do my best to get to Blackbird Singing, but right now I'm busy working on another story and preparing to attempt something for the secret author contest. I'm one of those people that takes a long time writing each chapter, because not only do I write it, but I rewrite it, and then proofread it a minimum of three more times before I'm satisfied. And with the book I'm currently posting, I totally reorganized and rewrote that, moving parts around to hopefully make it more interesting. I'm surprised I've been able to take this much time out so I could get to the Poetry Anthology entries, but as you see, I got to them late and it's taking me a long time to get through all of them.
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What an interesting and beautiful look at a collection of old coats you've had, or possibly still have. It reminded me of two jackets that belonged to my grandfather that I took after his death. I still have them 30 years later, and now I'm looking at them in an entirely new light. Thank you for sharing, Parker.
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Take a Leap! was sad, yet hopeful and presented a positive message. My Thai was very lovingly written and very romantic. I'm glad you found someone who makes you complete. Congratulations to both of you.
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If these poems were about the same person, then maybe it was about more than just friendship. Merely my opinion, but they were all very touching.
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Poem Entry - New Sights.
Bill W commented on Midnightwolfpup's story chapter in Poem Entry - New Sights.
A very delightful and uplifting poem, and a nice reminder that you're never too old. -
From making me hungry in chapter one, to adding the spice and making me turn on the fan after reading this one. It was very romantic and humorous at the same time. Loved it.
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You should have included a warning at the beginning, "Only read this on a full stomach, otherwise you'll be raiding the fridge or running out to the store for snacks - possibly both." It was a fun read and I thank you for sharing.
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A beautiful and wonderful tribute to nature, your childhood memories, and your grandparents. I truly enjoyed these poems. Thanks for sharing.
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I've got to finish reading the poetry anthology submissions. I'm a bit behind on them.
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Hmmm, the tarantula has a good PR person.
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As long as he doesn't bring the tarantulas into work to feed them.
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I thought you were to leave the mailman a tip every now and then, not a task.
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Good advice, and don't get married when you're drunk either. You could end up with similar results.
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I enjoy a plush blanket on my bed as well.
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Thank you for your comments on this issue and you've brought out some very good points. The 'key issue' may just be Mac asserting himself to gain equal footing in the relationship, and he has been more sheltered and suffered more losses than Devin, so this may be his way of not getting lost as a non-important member of this partnership. I thank you for the feedback.
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Pavarotti not only had a orotund voice, but he was quite rotund as well.
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Did he get it out again before it melted?
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Bible Sex Laws in Limericks
Bill W commented on Refugium's story chapter in Bible Sex Laws in Limericks
Having grown up attending a small country church the followed very strict Baptist beliefs, reading this was much more enjoyable and just as informative of those long hours sitting in the pews, and that's exactly what I thought of many of those sermons - PU. This was brilliantly hilarious. -
It seems they'll have to build a larger board or get smaller letters it they want to make it an ANNUAL EGG HUNT. Or is it just a very liberal Homeowner's Ass...ociation?
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Is that where they're hiding the eggs this year? That should be interesting, as well as fun to watch!
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It was very easy for me to relate to Drudgery, because I've been fighting that battle all of my life and it never seems to change, although modern devices have lessened it somewhat, but still those same chores are there to perform. I loved the haikus again. Very well done.
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Chapter 1 The Scenic Route
Bill W commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 The Scenic Route
The Scenic Route was beautiful and lovingly written, and very erotic at times. Well done, Gary. And the haikus were like little snapshots of life. I truly enjoyed them. -
Very thought provoking, and the glimpse into you mind and what it see is at times very prophetic, enlighting, or downright scary. I enjoyed it nonetheless.
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As far as the day looking for Devin and seeking revenge later - why would he be looking for Devin? He'd be looking for the tall, muscular guy that had stopped him. There are advantages of being able to do things like that anonymously. As for the conversation between Devin and Mac, I'm sure there are a lot of gay men who feel the same way Mac does.
