Ron, thank you for the feedback and I hope that possibly I can explain a few things for you. This dyptu was written long before I moved to Gay Authors and was originally posted on a site where the sex scenes seemed to be more important. Even though I did change certain aspects of the story later, after reading William's comment, I merely reduced Justin's sexual involvement, so he did not participate in sex with his brother.
I hope to hear from you again, once you finished reading the rest of the story.