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Are you just trying to stir the pot? I hope you are planning a sequel to follow your classic Big Paws. Big Fangs does make a good title for it.
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Mantown, Part Three of Three
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Mantown, Part Three of Three
Clever story and Jesse has such a creative mind and is a lovable guy. This is truly an "expect the unexpected" type of story.- 11 comments
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Chapter Four - Julian's POV
dboggs9700 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Four - Julian's POV
Interesting comment, guess we will wait and see exactly what it means. I kept expecting Julian to grab Ben's crotch to see if he had any balls. -
Once I looked up QRF things made a little more sense. Wonder exactly what they are headed into? The letter from Ken said very little but seemed to hit Kent emotionally.
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Chapter 15 ~ ‘Breach of Peace’ ~
dboggs9700 commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 15 ~ ‘Breach of Peace’ ~
I assume Matt and Reed are together, and Dixie Mae is there to give her opinion on the matter What is in the pack? -
Thank you for your great informative replies when you quote me. I am open to learning especially in areas I really lack knowledge (the military and war). The comment you made to me regarding training in the last chapter I especially appreciated. Thank you!
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Thank you for the welcomed advice. I've read two chapters of Strings, and I already know I will read everything @jkwsquirrel has written over the next week or two.
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Good start, interesting characters. I am going to binge read Strings now to catch up.
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Mantown, Part Two of Three
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Mantown, Part Two of Three
Jesse really deserves to be with someone like Terrell. I hope this is not a onetime deal for either of them. Lyssa treats Jesse like shit and takes him for granted. He deserves more. Can't wait to see how you end things tomorrow. As always great characters and story. -
Chapter Three - Ben's POV
dboggs9700 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Three - Ben's POV
100% agree! Guessing Mason will be the worst since he has the mother as backup and always wants money. Why does Ben have Mason's mail? -
Chapter Three - Ben's POV
dboggs9700 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Three - Ben's POV
I am excited for Julian to arrive. Ben seems like such a good guy although he overthinks everything and is a doormat for his family. Hopefully Vera and Sophie will be around after Julian arrives and give Julian more particulars on Ben's life. -
Mantown, Part One of Three
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Mantown, Part One of Three
“All wars are about resources, Jesse,” she continued, swirling the red wine in her glass. She wasn't angry. If anything, she looked slightly bored by his existential crisis. “Land, oil, or in this case, sex. If you men could just fuck each other, you wouldn’t need my resource.” Great start! You have so many great quotes in this chapter. I chose this one because it just shows she doesn't give a fuck about Jesse being happy, it's all about her happiness. Excited to see where you are taking us in part two and three. -
I am foreseeing a Will and Marie discussion followed by one or both of them on a surprise visit to see Travis. I am sure the haters will see whatever happens as Will's fault.
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Great to see Johnny and Violet get what they earned.
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Great chapter @Tony S.. Sadly, our guys are stepping into war in the next chapter.
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Chapter Two - Ben's POV
dboggs9700 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Two - Ben's POV
It is only chapter two, and you have given us three villains to hate. Ben needs a wakeup call so badly. Hopefully the companion will be what Ben needs to break the ropes his f...ked up family has him tied up with. Great start on this story @mastershakeme. -
Absolutely fantastic story telling by you @Wayne Gray. You took an idea that most would have made an average story and with your words, you turned it into a classic. Thank you @Wayne Gray.
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Great story and I loved the characters @Paladin. I'll watch for your stories since I favorited you.
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Chapter One - Ben's POV
dboggs9700 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter One - Ben's POV
I like the way this is starting out and I will keep reading. I have a feeling that Vera will be an important character in the story and I love her attitude regarding the rest of Ben's family. Big question, will the robot have the balls to put Ben's family in their place and quit using him? -
I want to give Casey the benefit of a doubt. Meanness and nastiness are not inherited traits, and we do not know the environment he is being raised in or his outside influences. Levi has been warned enough about Casey that he will proceed with caution if he chooses to associate with Casey. Levi is a smart kid and not as naive as we think.
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Another great sensual chapter. Henry's becoming more and more comfortable with himself and the guys. Henry truly accepting himself is allowing him to enjoy Ivo and Nico more thoroughly.
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Chapter 14 ~ Stench so Acrid ~
dboggs9700 commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 14 ~ Stench so Acrid ~
Great chapter! Very surprised none of the ranch guys recognized the drunk just by the rest of the description Jake had given them. I hope Mannly does not go into a panic when he speaks with the sheriff. -
Great opening chapter! I am excited because this will be first story of yours, I have read as it is posted.
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Ordinary Days and Rumors
dboggs9700 commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Ordinary Days and Rumors
I am right there with you scared. I have never been in the military. Has their training really prepared them to survive? Are they strong enough mentally? -
You were absolutely correct to recommend this as my next read @Summerabbacat. Thank you my friend. Beautiful story @Paladin! I had no doubt I would love it because of how much I have enjoyed your other stories.
