Terry P

For some reason when I first looked at this story when it was first started , I wasn't interested in it, But whenever a new chapter was posted I got the notification. Finally I decided to look at it again and for the life of me I don't know why I didn't have interest in it because I got hooked and ended up reding from beginning to end in the same day. It was captivating and I look forward to the second part tomorrow.

This story is amazing. I live in Canada and have never read a story like this happening (not real, but realistic). It`s riveting.

This story is so good and intriguing.

This is probably the best chapter so far in this story. I loved it all.

This is the same chapter as the one you posted earlier.

A great chapter too - especially with that little cutie - Chelsea. I'm sure the guys will buy the place and perhaps get unexpected help in paying for it. They definitely deserve it after what they both have gone through.

We knew the truth before hand, but when it is revealed to Carter I really felt his pain. The only question now is: What is he going to do with the truth. Ideally it will be to reveal it all to Jeremy, but how long will it take and what will the impact it will be on Carter and Jeremy as a couple. I think the longer it takes to reveal it the worse it will be for them. Remember Dexter and Laura are still in the background conspiring to kill Carter. The sooner the truth is revealed the safer he will be.

I find it really weird that Uncle Carl is even thinking of using a switch on his adult sister, especially when she has a husband who probably wouldn't even do it (not that he might think of it sometimes). The woman is bad news, but the example that is being left to the kids is not very good.

Things are going to get realy rough now. There is no way that Dexter is going to let this go. He's done too much harm to get Jeremy to love him that he won't go further. Now it's Carter's life that is in danger. There is no telling what he is capable of doing. Of course we have to go through witnessing this to get to the end. Great chapter!

You sure know how to do a cliff hanger. When I realized we would have to wait to see how Roger would destroy Charles I was so disappointed. This chapter was amazing though.

Wow. What a great first chapter.

I can't believe that I actually loved this story. Good work.

Okay. that was different. It should be interesting to see who this unfolds. It obviously won't be the last we see of Pax.

My sentiments as well. Who else could it be, but why Elena?

This story gets weirder by the minute. But, I am hooked. Bring it on.