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My second time reading this story. I loved it - agajn
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Thank you so very much Carlos. Once you began writing this part of the CJ saga My Friday highlight has been reading it first thing in the morning. What a fitting and glorious end to the CJ saga. Sure I'd like to read more about CJ. There's so much more that could be done. It's just that since it's been written in real time we'll just have to wait and see if you'll be inspired to continue it. While not a real person CJ is an inspiration that even us older than him can benefit from. And what do you know that inspiration originates with Carlos Hazday who wrote the whole thing. I know that while CJ's story has ended, at least for now, Carlos will continue to grace us with his own writing.
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I agree with Tonyr. This is a great start to a story I know I'll enjoy - because you wrote it. Eddie is a great friend for Matthew, and if more comes from it, all the more to them. I look forward to reading more.
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Making Changes - Taking Chances
Terry P commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Making Changes - Taking Chances
Congratulations on the successful completion of a great series. I thoroughly loved it. I look forward to your next one. -
A great story Mike. I thoroughly enjoyed it and looked forward to every new chapter. Thanks for posting so quickly.
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I think Harrison made to much of a deal about what the 2 boys were doing. Yes, a good talking to was appropriate and some punishment, but I think he over-reacted. His younger brother is probably gay and it seems he can't deal with that. I guess it's all part of growing up both for the 2 boys and for Harrison.
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Sounds like we're in for some fun and plenty of surprises. I'm really looking forward to reading more.
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Chapter 63 A Brilliant Move
Terry P commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 63 A Brilliant Move
I lost my bookmark for this chapter and followed through on a message from Headstall. I decided to read this last chapter and probably laughed as much as I did the first time I read it. Headstall is an amazing writer. Hopefully he'll get better soon and be able to write a new chapter. Best to you Headstall. -
Oskar's track record for lying and deceit do not help me to believe he is on the up and up with Will. Regardless if it is right or not WIll should take the next plane back to England and never look back. It's not worth it.
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What Lloyd went through with Nicholas is terrible. However he is punishing the wrong person. Jeremy and & Angela have been really good to him, so why isn't he speaking to them to let them know what happened. He owes that to them and I think it was a bit irresponsible for him to run away from the whole thing - particularly by pressing charges against Nicholas and sending him to jail.
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Chapter 23 Santa I'm on the other list
Terry P commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 23 Santa I'm on the other list
I was really surprised by the reaction everyone had to what happened between Sam and Jamie. It wasn't even a kiss for gosh sake. Yes, I think it was good that Jamie spoke to Ben about it but even his reaction was over the top. Everybody was really immature about it. Jamie put a stop to what Sam wanted to do and rather than be commended for it everybody jumped on him. -
I feel so bad for Felix. I hope the dream he had is a good omen. This is an amazingly interesting story and I look forward to every new chapter.
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Lewis never ceases to amaze me. While Sebastien is very controlling and obviously has a bad temper Lewis never appears to confront him on it. Instead, at the first sign anything seems to go awry he runs away. And he does this with other things happening in his life. A very immature way to act if you ask me.
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Chapter 37 - We are family
Terry P commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 37 - We are family
I enjoyed the little trip into the lives of Don, Marco and Gwyn. But I missed Derrick and Gabe and am happy to back to them. -
I'm enjoying this story very much. As far as the editing is concerned you're doing an excellent job. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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I'm looking forward to more from this family. What a great one at that.
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Hope you're well Mark!
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That ending sure took me by surprise. Although, Think I know the answer to the question Grandma Asta asked. Great story.
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Really? Is it April 1st yet? (You know April Fool's Day?)
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An excellent chapter with so much happening. I love it when chapters are on the long side. I am concerned about this "United Sates being brought into God's Kingdom" bit. I hope that doesn't happen because I don't think it is necessary to resolve the underlying issues that the United States faces (even in real life today). But, it's only a story, so if it does happen it's not for real.
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6 months isn't very long on this job - an important one at that. However, the danger of burnout was indicated so Lewis has to think of his health first. Kudo's to him for doing that.
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I was looking forward to reading this story but only got partway through this chapter and decided I'd had enough, but did finish the chapter. I don't agree with how Charlie has responded to Bobby's demands for sex. Hopefully that will change with Stan joining them. The kid needs serious counseling. The kid has been through hell and back, but still needs proper guidance. I'm not so sure Charlie is the best one for it.
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I was getting notifications whenever new content was added, but recently I'm getting notifications about all kinds of things, i.e. when an author makes changes to previous chapters (even on stories that are completed); whenever someone makes a comment on a story, etc. I checked how my notifications were set up and I don't see any way to change that.
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I can't believe November really did what I think he did. He actually followed Mikey to the bathroom to tell him Brady was already involved? Really cool!
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