Terry P

I' liking this story very much so far. It could turn out to be one of your best.

Frankie's insights are amazing. while a bit extreme I have notice to some extent some of the similarities to today. I guess being in such a small and intense environment makes it even more apparent.

He's getting there, but it has to be on his own time (which better not be too long though, or I'll change my mind).

I hope Carlo realized the situation the guys were in and called the police. Sure doesn't look good though. But, maybe there is a sooner end in sight for Kyle and Mike.;

I didn't know you could do that with Groogle (?) I appreciate the tip.

I'm thinking it's the mother (or mother -in-law) who took it when she touched it. I sure hope it wasn't Daniel. I'm getting to really like the kid.

Wow! What an ending! I'm glad Arnold and Fidel found each other before something terrible happened to one of them. Now I have an answer to a previous question about a story mentioned in one of the later chapters. It referred to a story called "NumbaCruncher". I look forward to reading it, despite the strange name.

A great chapter. Also very nice to see Jarek and Sebastien reappear. While the whole premise of this type of society seems unrealistic we've seen in the past how governments and religions have sought to control the daily lives of their citizens. You've only taken it to a whole different level. Is it possible that something like this could happen? I sure hope so and there are enough good humans around to prevent it from happening provided we make sure that tyrants don't take over. (Let's not get into Trump as he is just a blip) I'm glad we've moved away from Oasis as I was getting tired of that kind of live. I look forward to seeing we're you're going to take us now. I don't recall the story NumbaCruncha. It's not listed as one of your posted stories in GA.

It's so cool to introduce Peter and Jon into this story. At first I was confused since I recognized the galerie, the names, etc. and when the light went on in my head I was thrilled.

This is a most unusual story. But, I am enjoying it.

Ok, now you're really teasing us. LOL I look forward to the next chapter to find out how this young fellow got into the fix he's in. Cheers

This is interesting. I'm curious to see where you're going with it.

Nice to see this chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing what they come up with to acknowledge the slaves who worked the plantation.

I could just imagine what Nan would be like with Franklin. She'd deck him just like Doug.

Great Story! Thanks, and I look forward to reading more from you.

A great story. I couldn't put it down.

I guess I was wrong when I said previously that I thought the Colonel would off himself. Just as well he didn't so that his punishment will be somewhat befitting for him.

Something tells me that the voice at the end is Ryan's father. Not good at all.

Kreek is an idiot. He just admitted to the other killings and doesn't realize it. As for Colonel Stamins he's toast. He's so far gone, he'll crack under pressure. In addition his wife will confirm that Kreek has recently visited him.

Jason will most likely be Kreek's next target. Being forwarned is being forarmed. Hopefully it'll work out well for Jason.

Kyle has some serious thinking to do to ensure this doesn't happen again. I know the problem goes beyond just the Foundation, but if they made Blu part of the Foundation's decision making (make him a director or something) they will have to give him a say and Kyle won't forget to get him involved. The problem is more about Kyle not realizing that Blu should feel a part of it.

Two times the same chapter? Did you forgot the real Chapter 25?

I can understand why Mike would encourage Chet to see his grandparents, but if Chet really doesn't want to I can understand that entirely. It seems his desires and concerns are being acknowledged but not really being involved in the decision.

Good, but too short. You're intentinally teasing us.