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Love how supportive Brian and Gordon both are of Toby and his projects and passions. Great that so many from the extended family was there for him as well. Hate that the girls parents were like that; but stupid is as stupid does. Smart to touch base with the teacher, and she seems amazing. Toby is getting to the age that some independence is needed and a good thing. Each step builds confidence and helps him to grow. Excellent chapter.
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The Berger/Burlington Transition Continues
centexhairysub commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Berger/Burlington Transition Continues
Derek was probably right about needing to get this behind him; but I think that Jeremy is going to stay pissed for a while, especially because his father is about to make a surprise visit. The DA's being a hard ass. Well done. -
Oh honey, don't you just love dinners at Escorial. Hate that Jake isn't Travis's father, but never really felt that. Only two explanations though, so this birthday meeting is gonna be as good as a dinner at Escorial. Will's gift was perfect. I think he just knows Marie better than maybe anyone. The connection they share is amazing and will stand then in good stead later in life no matter what happens. Curtis is going down, with his reduced ability to pay off people, a hitman turning on him will send him to jail. Love this...
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Even with the gut feeling, Caleb and Asa simply could not leave before they did what they did for the hybrids. I was afraid they were going to be too late. Why Corbin's place though, because he had rescued the twins? So glad that they were able to at least do something for all of the hybrids they treated. We can hope the ones like Johnny are able to recover more when they hit puberty. I do think that Caleb should tell Vann, as Silas said, he is old enough to know. But no one can rush that, Caleb will have to feel ready.
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Chapter 14 Blood Stains
centexhairysub commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 14 Blood Stains
Glad that Jubal found the last mare; being hobbled would have made it an easy target for predators or getting hurt trying to get to food or water. How someone cares for animals says a lot about that person. Cleaning the blood up would have been a hard job, not just because of the mess and the fact it had time to dry out some; but because of what it would have represented. We can only hope that Lucas will be okay when Jubal gets back to Bearpaw. At least Jubal will really have his stake back; don't know what he is going to do with it, but can hazard a guess. The rest will be harder to return, the money at least; the jewelry might be easier if they can find someone that can describe it. Wonderful chapter has always, no matter when we got it.- 90 comments
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Have read many or maybe even a majority of these stories but found a few I would like to check out. I do love anything historical. Mark Arbour's story, " Chronicles of an Acedemic Predator " was what originally brought me to this website. I will have to start trying to work through some of these other authors, of course, some are old friends so to speak. A couple, dkstories and Mawgrin are of course gone way to soon. Looking forward to checking out some of the other stories posted here.
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Lawyers, Apartments, and Trucks, Oh My
centexhairysub commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Lawyers, Apartments, and Trucks, Oh My
Well, so far this is smoother than I was anticipating. I really thought there would be more blowback from the DA. Not sure how the IRS will be, they are always difficult to deal with. I do think this is the smart thing to do, clearing everything up before the truck title change would be smart. Not sure how the job will take all of this, but you never know; if he was a good enough worker, they might be okay. Glad they are moving forward with trying to find a place to share. Nice chapter, let's hope the a-hole father stays away, but betting he doesn't. LOL -
OMG, I really thought that Phillipa would have put a stop to this idea. She is my kind of gal. I don't know about business cohesion with anything like this but makes the day more interesting. Russ Kahn is going to prove interesting. He has been mentioned before and now we are going to find out what he will bring to the story. Great job, and what an imagination. LOL
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Chapter 13 If He Ever Does
centexhairysub commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 13 If He Ever Does
Excellent chapter, the emotions just rolled off the page. You can tell how much Jubal truly cares for Lucas, which considering how short of a time they have known each other is rather amazing. Sometimes you just know, it doesn't take longer than a moment. Reid will head out and get that damn Prescott off the land. Then he is going to have to have a fuller explanation. Reid obviously cares about Lucas as well, but we still don't know that full backstory yet. Let's hope this Doc from back East is better than the average doctor in the Old West. I am sure that he will be. Jubal has to take care of himself so he can take care of the land, stock, and most importantly Lucas when he starts to get better. Wonderful story... Think nothing of it; we will all survive the mix up. You take care of you.- 54 comments
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Learning that danger is coming, and many could be lost, then hot sex, then healing; damn, a lot going on in this chapter. The meeting was informative. I think Sebastian is a great Alpha and think the fact that he truly wants Caleb back says so much about him. He is truly worried for his people. Every moment that Caleb and Asa spend together just pulls them closer together. They are truly fated mates. And that scene was just hot. You would have to be a sociopath not to understand the fear and even terror that the hybrids and their families are feeling. The kids have been scared not just physically but emotionally and mentally. I am sure that they are in counseling but even with that, it will always be hard for them to trust strangers and others. Damn, this was just a great chapter.
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I think that Tommy will be a great addition to this group. He obviously is powerful and will be a great protector but his knowledge may be the most important thing he brings to the table. Have to wonder what other nobility is nearby and what rank? Can't wait for the next update, this has been so good.
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Lovely chapter, and I really do hope that Toby and Noah stay friends. Don't know at that age that much more is warranted but who knows. Noah's parents seem okay, usually upper middle class. I do love that both Toby and Noah are so into ecology. A topic that I think is truly important for us all. Brian and Gordon continue to find themselves and figure out not only their relationship but those with Toby and those he has brought into their life. Not sure about the dress down Monday, would think you are running a huge risk; but truly telling if they pull it off. Keep up the great work.
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Great chapter, I cannot imagine how hard it was for Jake to deal with all of that and trying to come to terms with his sexuality. His parents may be some of the worst that we have seen in this saga and that is saying something. The bond between Will and Marie is amazing and I think will always be there. I can't wait to see what Will got her; it has to be jewelry but knowing Will there will be something special about it. Jack needs to rush this test. I just can't see Jake being Travis's father. Well done, Mark, well done.
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Just WOW, I loved everything about this chapter. I am so glad that Kage's essence is still around and still dishing out surprises. The mating was hot and loving all at the same time. I still think the person that poisoned Caleb is still around. I think it is about to get super exciting and dangerous for all involve. Extraordinary job @kbois
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Derek, and Letting the Dominos Fall Where They May
centexhairysub commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Derek, and Letting the Dominos Fall Where They May
Great chapter, but that said, a big issue ahead. Jeremy committed fraud, there is no two ways about it. He got a job using fraudulent identification, the hospital may not be as big of an issue depending on the insurance used to pay for it, and there are a few other things as well; after all, just having the fake identification is illegal. Derek is making some big changes in his life; he is growing up. He probably does need therapy for dealing with all of this, never a bad idea. He has a great family, too bad not everyone does. Chapter flowed really well, can't wait for the next update.- 16 comments
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A truly wonderful addition to the Running with the Pack saga. You will need to have read the earlier books to get the most out of this story, but what a joy that is in reading them and joining this wonderful universal story. Great characters and we get to meet up with a few old friends and a few new ones as well. Story is great, but ties into the last book in the saga. Sit yourself down and start with the first book if you haven't read them and end with this delightful little tale, you will not regret it for a moment.
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What a real treat on this day especially. I loved it, Randy will never be alone. He will always have members of the pack to stand beside him. Skyler and Trevor will be with him as long as they are all alive. So many wonderful things to like about this chapter and the story as a whole. Great characters as always, the writing and pacing were spot on as usual, and we got to meet a few new players. I do hope that we get to see more of all of these wonderful characters again, sooner rather than later. I hope that we get more of Seth and Glen and all the Betas.
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So glad that Toby found Noah, nice to have a guy closer to his age to talk to about things. Plus, they both are into ecology and green issues so that gives them extra to talk about. WOW, Kostas and Bruno are a bit bold. I mean, in the work garage, seems like a little bit more than risky, Excellent chapter, can't wait for the next one.
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What a delicious chapter. I am so proud of everyone in the group with how they have stepped in to help and protect Seth. And I am happy that Glenn decided to ask him out for more than just dinner and a movie. Randy failed to realize that his parents were going to stand by him no matter what. Sadly, not everyone has that experience. I understand his parents wanting to have grandchildren, but that is not out of the question. Now, how will they handle him being in a three way relationship with another man? Great chapter, flowed just beautifully. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Looks like everything went well; and let's all hope that the mating goes just as well tonight. I am so happy not only for the twins but for Elijah and Tyler as well. I was worried about Caleb coming face to face with Vann. I hope that goes good for both of them. Even if they are not together, Caleb needs to find a way for Vann to be in his life more than he is now. Lemon Cheesecake? I demand the recipe...
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Excellent chapter, lot's of information provided and we are getting a look at more of the players. I think that Greg is absorbing what he needs to know rather well, but there are going to be issues that pop up that are going to throw him for a loop. I am going to have to make a scorecard to try and keep everyone and everything straight. Well, at least we know that Thomas is up to the job. LOL
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After That, Can Anything Be Normal?
centexhairysub commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in After That, Can Anything Be Normal?
Well, got some background on Jeremy. I was worried after the last chapter that no one gave him any updates that we could tell. I understand why he was upset but understand why Derek also just lost track of everything. Excellent chapter, can't wait to see what happens next. -
What a hot start to a new story... I loved how Trevor was there in spirit and watching even if he wasn't in person when Skyler turned Randy. And love that Randy blew his load, so funny, sweet, and hot. The transition is never easy, and the last week before he turns will be hard on him and those around him. Well, Randy thought about accepting the fact that he was going to turn; but never considered talking to his parents and family about the fact he is dating a guy or two? I guess one is so unexpected and the other just has some ingrown issues that he never considered. Great start to this new story...
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Wonderful chapter, so descriptive and full of good advice. LOL. Really quite hot and thoroughly enjoyed the chapter, well written as always and I have had a few friends like Connor that wanted to know how to, never had a conversation as hot in real life though. I am glad that Brian and Gordon are so open with each other; I know couples that never get to that point.
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A really interesting take on a subject that is hard for people to find common ground on. The writing is excellent as always; and the character development was first rate. Really enjoyed this short story and the perspective it presented. Well Done.
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