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Chapter 21 - Let's Have a Kiki
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 21 - Let's Have a Kiki
You need more Queens in your life... -
Chapter 21 - Let's Have a Kiki
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 21 - Let's Have a Kiki
Let's hope that the Queens can pull this off. I think that Teshon City needs a place like this. They can have rooms for medical treatments and then individual rooms to fit those with special needs. It will be Wonderful... -
Chapter 20 - Sumi & Harakin
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Sumi & Harakin
A new person joins our merry little band. Muunith seems like a great addition. Hate that their parents turned on them like that; but at least that will not be an issue any longer. I guess we know what Auntie Peg and Dottie are going to be using the new building for, wonderful ladies both. -
Honestly, Greg must be purposefully obtuse. All the signs are there, yet he chooses to ignore them. Great interaction between everyone, really like how Greg handled the situation at Scott's house. And the comeback about the cougar was just about perfect. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Glad that Jubal realized that Lucas doesn't seem to be bothered by their morning erections. Some men are just relaxed about that, and they both seem to be. Hope they realize that both are at least marginally interested in each other already. Although I still wonder about Lucas and the Sheriff. Let's hope they have enough of the right supplies and can get started on the roof and other changes as soon as possible. Let's hope that Jubal can climb as well as he says and no issues arise and not injuries either. Amazing how a place can look different in the light of the morning, just gives everything a certain sheen. As always amazing descriptive writing, can't wait to see what happens next.
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Chapter 18 - Lonklam & the Other
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Lonklam & the Other
Riam is evil, and she found two other truly evil creations. They must all be destroyed before they destroy any others... -
Chapter 17 - Unadi & Olona, Part Two
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 17 - Unadi & Olona, Part Two
Sometimes going home isn't what you really need to do; looking back is rarely the answer. Move forward, to the future and what you are meant to be. -
Chapter 16 - The Kids & the Queens, Part One
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 16 - The Kids & the Queens, Part One
Can hope that Lahari is getting the best of care, you know that she is; and will be better soon. So glad to see Auntie Peg, Dottie, and Ninyani again. Not much a couple of Queens can't handle. -
Chapter 15 - Saved?
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Saved?
I am going to be so upset if Pelipi is truly dead. I am glad that Kosephaji and Relliduna are safe; but to lose their friend like this is just horrible. And what is it with the guards, hitting people that are trying to get off a sinking ship? What is going on... -
Chapter 14 - Lahari, Part Two
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Lahari, Part Two
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WOW, a scene worthy of a Bond movie. What a rescue and escape. And I am sure that JP had everything figured to the second. Love Charles and Elise, and I do think that she is cooler than he is. LOL. Have to admit; I am shocked that the underground and buses ran on time; such a rare occurrence. Eurostar is usually more in time. Being at sea as long as they maintained the proper distance would put them out of reach; but in the Mediterranean that is not going to be easy. Glad that Travis kept his files mobile, may prove useful at some point. Travis and Will have a lot to catch up on. This could turn into a floating bacchanalia.
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Chapter 13 - Bivon
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Bivon
And how will this return effect Bivon and the children? Or will it effect them at all? -
Chapter 12 - The Journey North, by Land
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 12 - The Journey North, by Land
Although they faced danger; the two children are know in a safer place. What happens next we will have to wait and see. -
Chapter 11 - The Journey North, by Sea
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 11 - The Journey North, by Sea
Are we sure they hit a reef? It takes centuries for a reef to grow enough that if it hadn't been there at least partially before that it would cause a problem. I have to believe that sailors would know the area they are sailing into; or at least enough to know that reefs were in the area. Let's hope they only lost the one man and that everyone else can get to safety. Really, why can't we have one declaration of love without a mishap... -
Wonderful chapter; I was sure that Charlie was more than aware; happy that even if he doesn't fully like the idea, he loves his son and will support him unconditionally. Secrets are hard to keep at that age, kids are more perceptive than they often give each other credit for being. Sounds like a great meal, and the perfect wine. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Chapter 10 - Pleasure Island
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Pleasure Island
What a delightful chapter; so nice for all of them to be in a place that they can truly be themselves. Mama was a delight. So open and friendly but then a good barkeep has to be. Hope they get away from the storm, no damage to them or the ship. -
Chapter 5 Lay of the Land
centexhairysub commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 5 Lay of the Land
Traveling so late on reading this update. I loved this chapter. @Headstall is just amazing at descriptive writing. Truly felt that I was seeing what he was writing as they rode along on the way to the cabin. Lucas is rightly proud of what he has but isn't afraid to admit his mistakes on building the first cabin. How many of them back then had issues; no drawings and google to help learn something. Jubal needs time to get over what happened and decide what his next steps are going to be. He will do what he can for Lucas but then will have to make some decisions. Would be nice for him to recover more of his money, but not holding out much hope for that. Truly wonderful chapter... -
So Will has figured out what Travis was trying to do; but the problem is that someone else that Travis was relying on has done the same thing and is attempting an end run around this plans. Brad will fight it out and if the deal makes sense at all; will come out on top. How will Travis react to the fact that Will and his family bought out his Grandfather's company. Yes, I know they plan on arranging him to get it; but still. I love how JP is such a teacher with Will and everyone; it is just truly who he is. He and Will are so much fun when they are together. Plus, with everything going on with Travis; JP keeps Will grounded and offers these delicious little hints on things to do. The Great Escape, London version, I can't wait to see what happens and how JP and Will help Travis get away. JP will have it planned down to the second. The things that almost killed Will when he ran don't bother Travis, and find Travis's musing to be very telling. Can't wait for the next update.
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Oh, Hell, someone better have a few explanations ready. I do love how this group seems so open and truly happy with each other; rare in boys of that age. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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A delightful tale full of wit and wisdom. Take a moment and enjoy some cheer; I did not find it sad but full of glad and happy thoughts when I finished it. Well written and paced beautifully; hope you all enjoy it and get the meaning behind it and give it forward to all.
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Holiday Short Story
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Holiday Short Story
What a truly delightful tale. I loved how the old man never forgot that special moment; he looked back on it fondly his whole life. Then at the moment of his end; he finally meet the woman again. We need to remember that chance meeting can change a life; for better or worse. Always try and make sure that your meetings leave a wonderful memory like this. -
Not sure that Greg's dad is as clueless or as rigid as he thinks he is. What a great group of guys, just hope that they can all stay friends once the secret is out. Do we start a guessing game about the secret? LOL. Chapter flowed beautifully, and the writing was first rate as well. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Lovely chapter, we got to meet the Sheriff and his deputy and got a little better description of the town and area. Sounds lovely with the three rivers coming together; but I would worry more about flooding. The Sheriff didn't start of trusting; but then with his profession, would not think he would immediately. Jubal was lucky that he had Lucas to back him up on so much of his story. Never thought about a reward for the two they killed; but then, if they had killed others, would stand to reason. Glad that the woman's family that they killed will get some of her things back. Something going on between Lucas and the Sheriff? Ah a tangled web could be ahead.
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Greg or Stef could be the Daddy??? Yikes, talk about having family issues; Travis and Will would never survive that. I bet it did happen at Claire and Jack's wedding; but just who could be the Daddy? So glad that Jack decided to come for supper; and especially happy with how everyone acted. I do hope that Claire and Jack can make it work, they both have issues to work out but they always seemed destined to make it. I can't believe how stupid Curtis Buck is; he obviously doesn't understand either Will or Travis at all.
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