It seems young Phillip is keeping busy and getting some much needed relief as well as giving his share too. Really effective grief therapy for a teenager!
Yeah, the unexplained drama is irritating, like a back door cliff hanger.
The earlier part of the chapter was fun and I can see Fitzpatrick being a mentor to Romeo.
A side note that you wrote a whole chapter and no one got laid. Disappointing...
Being a celebrity does have its tribulations and Will is beginning to be proactive in addressing them.
Loved the chapter...just wanted about 3k more prose!
Granger was perhaps more honest in sharing his opinions than he planned, but it was perhaps for the best, especially if it made the future tsar a bit more cautious with his fleet.
Somehow I'm wondering if we will get a bit more from the perspective from Daventry.
More please!
Ritch, I mean Romeo, is developing a reputation and he does know how to party. As long as he keeps being a leader and keeps his grades up, and has Miranda to keep him in line,he should be fine.
As someone else already mentioned, the chapter was a fast read leaving us consumers wanting more!