NightOwl88

A very cool story Dolores, sort of cautionary tale on the dangers of technology. I like the Sci-fi touch. I admit I'm not familer with the majority of you're work but if it is anything like the caliber of this story I'll have to look them up. best, NightOwl

Simply wonderful Cia, I loved it. The mystisim, the romance, the intrigue. The touch of light and dark, mixing, mingling. I just...I don't have the words to adaquetly say how much I thought of this story. Wonderful, Best, NightOwl

A very sweet story. I loved it. The way you ended it was very beautiful, very powerful.

This is one of the best stories with older/adult main characters that I've read. I've only read one or two of your works to date Altmexis but this is the best so far.

I actually a few favorites, if that is allowed. I like Green, white, black, dark blue , and silver. I'll take green and black though any day of the week if given the chance.

eh mine is pretty basic. I do my best work (writing you pervs lol) at so I adopted the title for my SN. Plus I really like the night, stars, the moon. Quietness...plus Owls are cool, symbols of wisdom and all that goodness.

I don't think thats too strange, I mean one persons' strange is anothers normal. We only clean our shower about once or twice a week depending on useage. lol.

You know this is creepy. That little set of rules can actually be applied to a large number of gay guys I know. I wonder if that is sterotypical or just plain truthful. Rule 3 is my favorite though. Good song. Best, NightOwl

Hello Andy, I am glad that you enjoyed my rendition of first person POV, I think it allows for depth to the characters, but thats just me lol. William Sr. has garnered some interest lately with his lack of 'redeeming' qualities. There maybe some in him some place inside of him but then again some people are just evil. We'll have to wait and see. I tried to balance out the chapters as to who was talking but I'm not surprised you ahd issues with Chris' background it hasn't been very developed until the recent chapter. I'm glad that you liked the development between David and Billy, I've often wondered it didn't take too long to get to this point but that is just how it had to be. I promise to have the next chapter out to you (and everyone else) as soon as i can. Best, NightOwl

Hey Guys, I would have responded sooner but I caught some trouble yesterday, so I hope a mass reply will work. Hello Madam Nephy, I a glad that you stopped in. I noticed you're review for the chapter, I am glad that you liked. Walker is cute, very very cute...but thats probably not what you meant lol. I'm a fan of Walkers philosphy myself, I've practiced it in minor fashions. Perhaps it is a little unrealistic but I liked the idea so i went with it, I am glad that everyone found it agreeable. I hope you enjoyed the future chapters as much, best, NightOwl BENJI Dude it's been ages. I'm glad to see you here. I actually considered using *Coming Out Party* as the title but I thought that might be too much of a give away. It does seem a little unrealistic at first blush but you've got to think, David isn't from there, and Chris isn't from the Zenis area like Billy and Walker. I guess to put it Chris would live in the town that corolates with mine, which is about ten to eighteen miles outsider of Zenis. They all just happened to be at the dance together lol. Yes David is in SOOOO much trouble, and I love every second of it. I think that would be emergancy material but he might not, who knows? William, i hate to say it but it will be a bit longer before he gets resolved. I have so much more planned for him. Best, NightOwl Ceadus, thanks for coming man, I am glad for you're thoughts on the chapter, i did want it to be funny under the seeming drama. I don't know the population of Zenis but my home town (which you could say is Chris's) had a populationg of over 6.000 as of the 2000 census and is the largest town in Jenning's county. I know that doesn't help much but i'm trying lol. Candy, god I love to hate that chick, and love writing her. I assure you she gets her's in the end. But with a hint, it won't be Billy putting her to rest. I really did want to take Billy and David's relationship up a little bit with this chapter. i thought the best way would be to make Billy a little more physical, a little more tactile with him. Annie, suspicious? NEVER lol. I am glad this is one of your favorites. Best, NightOwl Ramon, so good to see you again, Yea I hate to put the kybosh on your speculations, but they had AWESOME merit. I was hoping the reasons for his silence would be a surprise, I really did. The interaction between the boys is my favorite part of this chapter, it's I dunno, endearing. Yea that scene was something for me to write. I've written Billy to be very tactile with his affections/comradery but I wanted to do something more than just a hug or a handshake. i figured the kiss on the forehead would not only be appropriate but add an element of humor, as well as a sort of sign of Billy's progress. Best, NightOwl I just want thank you all again for stopping and giving me you're thoughts, you know how much I appreciate your feedback.

Hey yall, I just thought I would let everyone know that Ch11 of Indiana Summer is up in the Efiction section. I hope you all enjoy it, it is one of my favorite chapters to date. Follow the link and let me know your thoughts. Indiana Summer CH11 Best Wishes, NightOwl

I followed the first season on NBC and the Second through SyFy, i still have the last three episodes of season two on DVR. I don't get BBC with my box *I don't think at least* So I hope that SyFy picks it up again next summer, I've always been a fan of the Merlin stories/mythology so I really like this show lol. BTW Forty-Two fanfiction.net has a good bit of slash work on the two of them, a lot of it is like Modern AU but there are some very good stories there lol. Best, NightOwl88

Hello Jmac, good to see you, I am glad to hear that you are back to reading the story, despite the issues it brought up for you. William Sr is indeed very easy to hate but I had to write him that way. I can't guarantee redemption for William, but something of the sort might happen sometime along the lines. I am glad that you are watching for updates, be looking around the end of next week (if I'm lucky.) Best, NightOwl

I feel I should appologize for the wording of my recent post, looking back at it I feel I might have come off a bit confrontational. People like Max (and I can say this as I am one of those kind of people) get satisfaction out of helping other people, becoming involved in their issues because it is int heir nature, the same as it is to get involved in the first place. They (we?) get satisfaction out of helping or guiding folks through difficult situations or times. Myself (and I worte this into Max) don't try and control a person's life, but try to help them take cantrol of it themselves. It can be a burden though, i fully agree. Feel free to rag on their relationship when you feel the need to, such blantent and honest opinions help me to re-evaluate my characters, to make sure they are sill real. I am hoping that my portrayal of HS life is accurate, having never attended myself. I am glad that you are looking forward to where I take them, and I hope enjoy the direction I go in. Best, NightOwl lol no worried Nephy. I am very glad that you're enjoying the story. I like that analogy, ticking timebomb, so very true. The Phantom idea, I STILL don't know what inspired me to do that; it just seemed like the right choice. Tom is a true outsider looking in to me. I can promise that his sketches will play a part quite often when he plays a part in one of the chapters, they; above anything else I'll concerning him, show his change in attitude and outlook. His father, good luck with that. You shall indeed see what happens with him, but not for a bit. Max and Josh have recovered from their fight fairly well. Josh DOES seem more stable doesn't he, but I wonder if apperances aren't decieving? Its amazing how often the backround becomes the foreground. I am hoping you will enjoy where I take Max and Josh, and how I play out their development. Best, NightOwl88

Hey Nephy, Ceadus, I hope you guys are doing well. Hey Nephy, glad you stopped in, I am glad that you liked the Chapter. I did want it to be a rich chapter but a little understated, i am glad that it came through. At first I hadn't planned on using any Pagan references until I checked the timestream for the story and saw that it was up to Halloween and I just had to do it lol. I glad that you liked the costume choices, I had a helluva time with them lol. Best, NightOwl. Hey Caedus, glad to see you again It really isn't far off from Max, he does like to help/save people lol. You really can't see why he is like that? I would have thought it would be obvious, maybe thats just me though. to be perfeclty honest I don't know how it will effect Max in the future lol. Tom is a unique character even to me, and I am the one who thought him up lol. I've said it before, he may be the best fleshed character I have ever written. It usually is the ones with the most dratic problems that try to work them out, those with smaller issues are usually just content to let them breeze by. Best, NightOwl. Thanks again Nephy, Caedus, for stopping in; you know i love the feedback.

Hey yall, I know its been ages but I finally have a chapter out to you. I hope you enjoy it as i had a lot of fun writing it lol. So take a look, read/review if you feel like it, you know I loving hearing from you. Max and Josh Ch18 Best, NightOwl

lol good joke, I've seen that cartoon far too many times. No I meant that Keith never seemed real to me as if he was just there to fill in the space. As I said i judged too soon, I should have waited lol.

I judged a bit too soon, Keith always struck me as sort of...i dunno...transparant...not really underdeveloped or anything but...I don't know. i don't have the words right now. *snatches whip and cracks it at Young Sage* I dish out the pain lol

Ok first off let me appologize for not having been around much the last three weeks. I had the day off today so I got caught up on BSC, I love the last three chapters, they were great, I left a review for each of them btw. As to this most recent chapter, I KNEW Keith knew what was going on, I had a feeling. it's pretty cool I have to admit, i might even start liking him as a character now. The chapter with the graveyard and Kimberly was good too, I liked how suspicious she was about Anthony coming with them. I would love to know what Anthony did when he placed the flower on the grave and why he ALMOST stood up for the pledge. I hope we find out sometime. Best, NightOwl

Hey Ricky, I'm glad that you liked the story your second time around. I am currently working on Max and Josh and hoping to have it out by next week but Indiana Summer is up right after that. My house guests will be getting gone soon so it will be easier for me to write. Best, NightOwl

My online persona meshes pretty well with my real life. I'm a bit..louder..bit more confident online than I am in person but I do try. I first came to the net to be everything I couldn't be in real life. Outspoken, confident, gay lol. overtime I've gotten over my simpering peaople pleasing attitude, stopped being and doing what everyone else wants lol.

Good chapter Young Sage. it sort sucks that it is almost over, i would have liked to see some more exploration between Nick and Chad but it is good none the less. Best wishes, NightOwl. P.S I can't do a spin off for Sex god, I'll be doing that shortly anyway...not to mention all the other work i've got piling up lol.

Awesome Chapter cam, very nice. i am looking forward to seeing what happens with Casey once he is back at the cabin with Luca. I like Amy, she sounds funny. Coconut rum, will most deffinatly have try that lol.

hmm, you should be more specific bro lol.

Come on over to my place, I'll show you pecked to death in a good way. i didn't expect an honest answer, but I'm pretty sure I can read between the lines lol.