Nephylim

That was a sweet, tender and just beautiful story. Who would have thought that the thing that took away his wife and daughter would bring him the person than can help him move on and get over it. i wish I had a friend like Danny.. and Dylan is so super cute. He sounds like a blonde version of my son.

Awwwwwww... he is sooooo cute :wub:

Had to pop in remind everyone how much I love this story

What could anyone possibly think... you're probably the most beautiful drop bear I have ever seen (Ssshhh the fact that I've never seen one has absolutely NOTHING to do with it ) Seriously... looking good beautiful

What poll at the bottom. I answered the one at the top. Now where's that ink and paper Seriously I have the greatest of respect for people who actually know what they're talking about when it comes to technology so way to go I wish you absolutely the best of luck in your endeavour.

Hey, Happy birthday hun. Don't celebrate too hard... ok, go on then

I loved it. I'm glad that Zack didn't take Jonny. He was the kind that is often taken... as with the man who came after... lost, alone, hopeless, at the end. I hope that there will be something more than that for him. I love Zack. He is just awesome. I like the way your write. it is fluid and scans well but has a certain formality about it as well. There is definitely an edge of darkness to everything and the beginning set the scene and atmosphere very well. The detail is excellent. You pick out all the little things that make the picture richer without being explicit. And the sex was just one of those details. It's strange... the beginning of this has many similarities to the start of Fallen but it is so, so different. The characters are well drawn and I love the fact that you give away only a few details of what they look like in a natural way without 'listing' them. All in all an excellent start and more than enough to bring me back for more.

And you shall have some pie. Meeow, meeow you shall have some pie.

Whatever you do don't try to cool it off by pouring coffee on it... it just simply won't appreciate it.

I give up on love all the time but thankfully it has never yet given up on me and keeps poking me and saying... of course there will be love at some point. I can't help but still believe in love after the incredible depths of love I have felt. Love is real, love is out there. Love's a bitch but she's our bitch

Welcome Gyrd51 and Philandery Hmmm list of stories I hate putting lists up because I have an awful memory and I'm always afraid of upsetting someone I've left out. There are so many wonderful stories. A lot of it depends on what kind of story you like. I would suggest starting a new thread although I think there may already be one out there. I'm sure one of the mods can point you in the right direction. Lugh and Cia usually have their fingers on the pulse for things like this. If you're stuck pm me and then I can talk about people behind their backs and not get slapped

have utterly failed to work out how post videos into here. I got it then I lost it maybe someone could email me an idiot guide and I can save it. My favourite song at the moment is THe Last Journey Home by Dragonforce who are near the top of my altime favourites. In complete contrast I am also getting heavily into Evanessence again... well I have to really don't I ;P

It was very much a tongue in cheek entry although I was totally pissed off at the time, I most certainly have taken your good advice but I have had good news THEY ARE MOVING OUT ON 1st MAY WOOOO Don't get me wrong I adore my daughter and love Sam like a daughter but 8 months is more than enough. Unfortunately I can't claim anything because the girls are both working. I lost the 25% and don't get a bean off the govt... and that suits me fine (well apart from Tax Credit but figure I earned that Pat, you can pop in for pie any time hun I would send you some but I don't think it would travel well

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SIGH One of my requests for Mother's Day was a corned beef pie. My daughter asked what was my favourite meal and that was it. Now... my daughter has been eating this pie since she was old enough to have liquidised food, My grandmother made it, my mother made it and I make it. Lori and Sam took control of the kitchen all day for the making of the pie. I questioned why they were putting mushrooms in but was ordred out of the kitchen. At about 4ish (we were eating at 6) I went out to the kitchen and there was the pie, well at least the filling. It was orange. Corned beef pie is not orange. I had been looking forward to that pie for weeks and so I decided that I would make my own. There wasn't much of the ingredients left so I made a small one. I was happy, chopping carrots, playing music... and then Lori and Sam arrived and the world ended We had tears, we had tantrums, we had storming out of the house... sigh So we didn't even get around to putting the pastry on because that hit the deck Sooooo today I decided to make more pie. THe girls knew I was doing it because I asked them to get the ingredients. They were out all day in the pub and the park and I made a HUGE pie. To be honest there was probably enough for at least 6 AT LEAST. I am not that well today as I clleaned the house all day tomorrow (something which they are supposed to be doing) and my back is killing me... but I did it because I wanted to do it and, yes because I wanted Sam to see a PROPER corned beef pie Well when they came back I asked Lori if she wanted pie and bang... I was told not to even go there because Lori would have a nervous breakdown if we went there again. Now this is MY house and MY food they have been eating for 8 months and MY Mothers Day they spoiled. Not only that but they have TOTALLY failed to keep up the bargain about lving here in the first place which i thought was very fair. They pay for their keep be keeping house. Given that I am disabled and now having to cope with an extra 2 VERY messy adults in the house I thought that was the least they can do.... yeah right. So I guess I was feeling pretty pissed at them anyway and maybe I did overreact when I said that they had better grow up and stop being so selfish. And now no one is talking to me MEEEEHHHHH

I LOVE My Spirit Will Go On but my favourite is Last Journey Home

I am assuming that he's dead. I may be wrong but it makes sense if he is. A life contained. The innocence of death. I like the way you write. You should take a look at Bugeye's poetry. There's a similarity of style Thank you for being brave enough to share

That is sad. Freedom comes at a price

I like that. So many people can't see the dove

Cooking is an awesome way to relive stress. I think it is all down to 'doing' something. I tend to write out my stress.... as you can probably tell from the type of things i often write. I also walk. I feel I have to 'do' something and it really doesn#t matter what i do

Such pain. if your love wasn't good enough for someone then they were the one who wasn't good enough for you. Shine on beautiful boy and one day someone will be drawn to your light who deserves your love

Thank you. That was such a sweet thing to say. I really appreciate your comment. I update this story every Saturday and there is plenty more to come. i am posting another story The Face in the Window every Wednesday so it's quite busy. SOmetimes I don't remember but someone usually kicks me I'm so glad you are enjoying this story. i fell in love with the characters in the first story and they just wouldn't let me go. This is the first sequel I have ever written and I'm really glad that it seems to be working

Fabulous

This is one of my alltime favourite groups and I was wondering if anyone knew whether they have released anything since they got their new singer/

WONDERFUL