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Great chapter Tim. There'll be tears, tantrums and shouting (and that's just from Louis) before we go much further but I love how you've got this story set-up. I'm sure Max will grow to love being with Don & Louis - eventually! Looking forward to the next chapter (have we really got to wait a whole week?). 😃 Mark
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Many thanks Iarwain (@Palantir) for posting such a great story. I only came across it yesterday and finished it today as it was so easy to read. All of the characters were so easy to envisage in my mind and I'll miss reading about their antics. Thanks again. Mark
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Awwww! This is such a brilliant story @lilansui - I'm going to be really sad to see it end. Though you must be writing a sequel?
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I was in the same boat as you but I have now read the whole of the first story this afternoon and it's absolutely fantastic! It will give you a lot of the background to the characters and their relationships. Enjoy your reading @Fae Briona.
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Have just read this and then realised (from the Author comments) that there was a previous story in the life of Don & Louis - which I'm now speed reading so I can get all the background straight in my head. I'm looking foward to reading where this story goes so I hope it's not too long before we see the next chapter. Well done @Mikiesboy on writing such an interesting story. Mark
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Yep, saw that coming! Great chapter @Ethan and a very nice way for me to end Sunday evening here in the UK (11.48pm).
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Thankyou @lilansui - what a great chapter. Rory is Alpha of Portento and will be for many many years I'm sure - with Milan at his side. Though before we get to that the mating ritual and Milan's first shift will have to happen - I'm looking forward to you describing that. Goodbye Rick - I hope you never darken our pages ever again.
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Safe but not out of the woods yet methinks!
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And there was I thinking you couldn't possibly fit any more drama in to this story @lilansui ! Great chapter - can't wait to see what happens next. Cue dramatic cliff hanger music........
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Crikey @JayT - how could you make us wait almost 4 months for an update to this great story? Anyway, as forgiveness seems to be the in thing; I forgive you. 😍 Fantastic chapter and I love Granma! Now that TJ and Scott have spoken to each other I can now go ahead and read Ch 1 of the second story in this saga (as judging by the story summary it will make more sense now). Now stop reading all these comments and get back to working on Ch 12. Mark xx
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Ha! That's for me to know and you to find out!! I'm pretty sure @Myr will deny everything if you ask...... 🤣
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See - I told you Ozzie would be fine! Okay, a broken wrist isn't "fine" but it's a lot better than some of you were thinking! I love reading about CJ and Ozzie and everything they (and their friends) get up to - thankyou @Carlos Hazday for another chapter in the lives of these young men.
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I suspect that if Henley had been a real ass when asking Drew to go then Drew would have ignored him and would probably have told him where to go! But as Henley was calm about it then Drew couldn't deny what his true feelings for the boys were so being the honourable man that he is decided to accede to Henley's request (as he knew that he should).
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The boys will find you Drew so you can't hide from them for ever! Excellent chapter @Nephylim - I wonder what you've got in store for Ben?.............
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21 - I thought they were 18? 😍
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@Ethan - Happy New Year and thanks for the new chapter. Jenn did the right thing in getting the two of them to talk to each other. Now Jordan has taken the plunge and actually moved in with Noah we'll have to see what solutions they come up with to avoid Aiden (and anyone else) finding out about their relationship. I'm 99% sure that they're worrying about nothing and that Aiden will be fine with them - he'll probably be more upset that his best friend didn't tell him to start with! So hurry up and post the next chapter!!
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Great to see the guys back again but what a cliffhanger! I'm sure Ozzie is fine. @Carlos Hazday - I do have one minor nitpick (which seems to have been missed by Reader1810, Mann Ramblings and Kitt). In the very first paragraph "Now that he was old enough, he was more interested in getting ready for his maiden solo fight as a student pilot on Monday." Now all sorted. But it's still an excellent story - I read all the previous stories over on CRVBOY as I didn't know they were on here until recently.
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Wow @travlbug, that is some deep analysis of the precarious situation we find Milan in - I hadn't thought of any of that when I made my OP. So to reiterate the final part of your post - "Come on, Sui, write faster!"
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Awwwww that's so sweet @Thorn Wilde. Looking forward to the sequel to this prequel! Happy New Year.
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What a cliffhanger @lilansui - you are so mean to us! 😍 Can't wait for the next chapter when hopefully we get to see Rory take down Principal Rick. It may even be necessary now for Rory to turn Milan (depending on how serious that knife wound is). Happy New Year to everyone out there in GA World.
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Great chapter @Thorn Wilde - don't make us wait too long for the next one (please!). The big test for Stephen and/or Lewis will be the first time that they have to say "No" to Daniel. It could be something really trivial. How Daniel reacts to that situation could determine how the relationship with Stephen/Lewis develops.
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@quokka - thankyou for not making that train accident a lot more serious! Great chapter (again). I thought for one minute that Glenn was going to end up being the son of one of the police officers - now wouldn't that have been embarrassing!
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It's now just after 4.30am UK time and I've just finished reading this story @Geron Kees - "damn you" with your single chapter! I loved it!! 💓 I hope you've written a sequel (I haven't looked at your story list as yet) and I wouldn't mind in the slightest if it was a single chapter again. Thanks again Mark
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If he's underweight then that's more to do with his home situation and the complete absence of parental care by his mother. Daniel just needs to be taken care of properly which Stephen can do. If Daniel does confide in Stephen about Loz then that would remove Loz from the situation for a very long time as he would probably be expelled from school and almost definitely prosecuted for what he did to Daniel.
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Thankyou for responding to my comments. I don't think I ever got to the point of considering suicide but to even attempt it as you did at age 10 - OMG, what hell you must have been going through. Some stories on here are obviously pure fiction and then you come across others (like this one) where there is some semblance to real life that is being portrayed by the author. I hope that if anyone who is being bullied is reading your story (or our comments) that they tell someone about it - a friend, relative, teacher etc. so that it can be sorted out. Mark xxx
