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@astone2292 - that was absolutely stunning! Vinnie's dance was just fantastic. Well done on describing it so perfectly. I can't wait for when Mase & Vinnie get to go hunting/running together as wolves. Every time I logon to GA I always wait in anticipation of this story appearing with a new chapter. Mark xx

And there was I thinking how could you possibly top what has gone before and you went and did it! I won't underestimate you again Aaron. Alpha Tierney as a fire mage is stupendous - what a display that must have been to behold. I'm now looking forward to Vincent's dance even more - he'll knock it out of the park I'm sure. Keep up the fantastic work.

Aaron - WOW, just WOW! What a superb chapter - I can't wait to read about Vinnie's mage dance, it's going to be spectacular. I loved the shower scene - I could envisage it all in my mind and loved Mase's comment about being able to wolf shift different parts of his body, but not that one Vinnie!! Though if he could do that I think Vinnie would probably faint. Keep up the fantastic work and roll on the next chapter.

Hey Aaron, I am absolutely loving this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Mase & Vinnie are just made for each other and they'll definitely be there for each other. Vinnie's Mage dance is going to be spectacular I'm sure.

If you have never read any of @Mark Arbour's stories then you must have been living on Mars for the past 10 years! You need to go back to book 1 of CAP and start from there - although each story can be read individually you will miss out on so much if you do not start at the beginning. Mark brings all the characters to life in every story and describes every aspect of their lives from love to hate to tragedy and joy. Reading Marks' stories (including the Bridgemont series) will take you a while but it'll be worth it - something to add to your bucket list. Although this isn't strictly a review of this story per se I hope I've given you a push in the right direction.

Over so soon! A great story @Carlos Hazday and one that I'm sure will come true one day. Imagine if the Redskins played the Ravens in the Superbowl - what on earth would Phil & Riley have done about that? I always love reading your stories! I can't wait for the next one.

I'm loving this story - if ony we didn't have to wait so long for the next chapter! I'm thinking that Donald's counsellor hit the nail right on the head - him and Conner are going to have so much fun!! Nate & Simon - maybe that will be a great story for the next book? Eddie & Matty - they couldn't possibly get any hornier for each other, though I'm sure Geoff (@FlyOnTheWall) can give it a good try! I'm loving this story - if ony we didn't have to wait so long for the next chapter!

I'm loving this story @garfwiz - keep up the great work! Can't wait to see the results of the two audits and how the Council will then react to Tala's oncoming storm.

Yes Connor seems like a great guy - I'm convinced that he and Donald will become good friends before too long (it's probably already happened as D can use ASL). A great chapter in a great story - well done @FlyOnTheWall.

A great start @garfwiz, I'm really looking forward to seeing where this story goes. Don't be too long in posting the next chapter.

Wow! An early Christmas present - another chapter in the story of our favourite boys (alright - college men) Matty & Eddie. Many thanks @FlyOnTheWall for giving us another peek and promising us another between Christmas & New Year - you know we'll hold you to that! I'm sure someting is going to develop from the "faggot" comment at Matty's first team meal. I love how Nate is growing in to such a fine young man. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to everyone who participates in those festivities.

Welcome back @Bndmetl - absolutely fantastic to see this story back again - I've really missed Ember & Brady!! I had to re-read chapter 20 to remember where we were in the story and I'd forgotten how good the sex scenes were! This is a great chapter and I can't wait for the proposal - Ember has planned it really well so something is bound to go awry!! Please don't leave us hanging so long for the next chapter. 😍

Hey @Mike Arram - great to see another strand of the wonderful Rothenia series. Initial thoughts:- Alex is a complete knob and Ben is better off without him. The sooner Phil leaves Karen, the better for both of them. I'm already looking forward to the next installment.

Until I saw the warning banner at the top of the site page today I never even realised this section existed - hence why I've never submitted a question! I need to do some site exploration obviously. Therefore @Carlos Hazday can expect at least one question from me very soon. It's great to hear from the actual authors themselves other than when they respond to comments posted on their stories.

Thank you @Mike Arram for posting the next book in this saga so quickly after finishing the previous one. I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see where the story goes.

Just one minor point @Mike Arramregarding the rugby game:- "In the meantime, on the other side of England, Danny Hackness was touching down a try for Temple House, to whoops from the touchline. He jumped up and grinned at the Lang House boy he had dodged and tripped. He reached down and pulled up Gus. ‘That’s three points to Temple, Gussie.’" From Google - "Until 1891, a try scored one point, a conversion two. For the next two years, tries scored two points and conversion three. In 1893, the modern pattern of tries scoring more was begun, with three points awarded for a try, two for a kick. The number of points from a try increased to four in 1971 and five in 1992." So assuming this is set post 1992 then it should have been 5 points for the try. But that aside - what a great end to this part of the saga! I'm looking forward to the next part in this magnificent story already!

Cue the dramatic Eastenders style Dun Dun Dun music! Or will it be more like the season of Dallas that was all in Pamela's dream and none of this actually happened! I know I've gone a bit off piste there! No I'm not intoxicated! Great chapter @Mike Arram - now it's only 24 hours until the next pair of chapters!

Well done Danny for reconciling with Wes - at least you will have a chance of now getting through to your parents with his help. And as for Gussie - whoop whoop! I feel that James will be having his collar felt by the police pretty soon once Damien & Matty show Justy & Nate what the "terror-wrist" is involved in!

Oh boo! I hate it when I reach the end of a chapter and realise I won't see the next one until tomorrow evening (assuming the current posting schedule continues that is) as I'll be at work for the first post tomorrow - but then I'll have two to read when I come home! Loving the story @Mike Arram! I hope Danny & Gussie survive their homecoming!! Matt's (and Pete's) offer of paying for Danny to attend Medwardine is excellent news and I'm sure pressure will be brought to bear on Gussie's family to make sure they don't move him!

At least with only being six he will be losing the set of rotten teeth that he currently has and gaining a brand new set. Now he just has to learn how to take care of them - I'm sure his Dad (Justy) and ?? (Nate) will have "fun" doing that!! I'm looking forward to that journey and also where Danny & Gussie will end up.

The age of majority is 18 - so they've still got around two years to go. I'm pretty sure that Damien will melt Justy's & Nate's hearts - even if there are problems to start with (the incessant swearing being just one thing). Like someone (in the story) said earlier, Damien is 6 going on 15! James will get his comeuppance if there's any justice.

My comment on the previous chapter obviously worked @Mike Arram - so I'll try it again! Loved this chapter - hope we see the next one really soon! Danny & Gussie have done completely the right thing in contacting Terry and he won't dob them in. Even though Damien has the mouth of a sewer I already love him and so will Justy & Nate.

I've had a binge read of this story this afternoon and to paraphrase a certain 6 year old boy - its fookin fantastic innit! Can't wait for the next chapter @Mike Arram.

BOOM! That was one hell of a cliffhanger @FlyOnTheWall - well done! I'm really loving this story and am looking forward to the sequel even before this story has played out. I must admit to having the odd tear or two in my eye's throughout the story so far and that will continue I'm sure.

"The End" came along way before I was expecting it. It was a great story - a perfect interpretation of the picture prompt. Now I want more!!