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An interesting first couple of chapters @quokka - I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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I've never suffered from the mental, physical & sexual abuse that Daniel has endured but I was bullied by some boys when I was in UK primary education - that's now about 45 years ago! I can't even remember their names now as it was so long ago but I do remember the fear of going to school and the relief when It was eventually reported to teachers (and then to my parents) by some girls in my class. I can't remember what their punishment was but the bullying stopped so it must have worked. Thanks for this story @Thorn Wilde as I've been very much able to empathise with Daniel. If only I had had a friend like Michael back then - though we were much younger than the group portrayed here. Mark xxx
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Chapter 20 Paris The city of Love, Lights and ...
Howzat commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 20 Paris The city of Love, Lights and ...
@FSELL with your wonderful descriptions of France and especially of Paris I really thought I was there with Jamie & Ben. I'd got behind with my reading (having no computer for 2 weeks didn't help) so I've only just caught up. I love both Jamie & Ben - they are just so right for each other. Now we just have to get Ben a job as an EMT/Paramedic in Australia and we're set! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter in this wonderful story. -
Maybe just for a couple of minutes, but once she sees how Noah & Jordan are together then she'll forgive Jordan. Great chapter @Ethan - I'm looking forward to the next one. I wonder how Sebastian will react to Noah & Jordan being together? Or Jordan's team-mates?
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@Ethan - you little so and so! Fancy giving us that last section without telling us who the two participants are!! I suspect it could well be one of those (in)famous "dream" sequences where this is all in the mind of one of the two protagonists and not "live" action. It could well be Noah dreaming but is it Jordan or Sebastian that is his fantasy guy??????? Anyway, another great chapter!
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I really like when a new chapter gets posted - thanks @lilansui. I'm looking forward to the next chapter already. Regarding your question to us - yes I have absolute loyalty to my family. Ranging from trying to help my nieces with some of their school homework to lending my sister a sizeable amount of money. I expect my sister to pay it back but I haven't set a deadline or interest rate - I did it because they needed help and I could help them.
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Mmmm the thot plickens!
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I'm really enjoying reading the story from this POV and I can't wait for the next chapter. So get your skates on @Fantasyboy69 Though I'm not looking forward to the Gene dying part of the story-line!
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Well that ending kind of snuck up on me! A great story @Ivor Slipper - well written. Could there be a sequel? Maybe from the Paul & Chris side of things and then taking the story forward with the occasional contact with Troy & Adam.
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Thank you @Thorn Wilde - I feel sorry for Loz as he is a victim too, but of a different kind to Daniel. Not that I'm in anyway defending what Loz has been doing to Michael.
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Loz is most definitely in the wrong by the horrible things he is doing to Daniel, but I think he is in desperate need of help. Not sure where that help will come from - Mr Griffiths, Michael, his Dad - but it's going to take a long time to sort him out. Daniel, as the actual victim, will also need help and I'm sure Michael will be involved. A great story @Thorn Wilde.
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Sebastian seems to be a bit of a dark horse - was he hitting on Noah, or at the very least testing the waters? And whatever he was doing, what will Jordan think of that - will it prompt him to go for it with Noah? I'm looking forward to the next chapter @Ethan - so don't dally with posting it! Mark
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Michael will become Daniel's rock and will eventually trust him to tell him about Loz. But quite how Michael will control himself when he finds out what Loz has done, I just don't know. Though in the end I'm sure Michael will help Loz to sort out his troubled life (including coming out to his father and brothers). Then eventually even Daniel may be able to help Loz despite the terrible things he has done. A great story @Thorn Wilde - I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Keep going @lilansui - this is a really good story. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
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Echoing many of the comments above, I too am enjoying reading this story. Once Jordan finds out that Jenn is not Noah's girlfriend I think things will develop more quickly. Though Noah will need to not act like a rabbit in the headlights when Jordan makes the first move. Keep up the great work @Ethan.
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I'm really liking the POV switches as they really work in this story - I've read others where that is not a good format choice. Anyway, back to Noah & Jordan - great story @Ethan - keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to reading Ch3 already!
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I too was confused when Gene made a reappearance like a modern-day Lazarus but then I had missed the "flashback" message at the top of the chapter. Doh! What a great story @Fantasyboy69 - can't wait to read the next installment.
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Looking forward to the next chapter @Ethan.
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Excellent chapter @Bndmetl - can't wait to read the epilogue (though I can't believe the story is ending). I think a follow-up story for Cam & Justin is a superb idea ((c) @1brokNangel). Mark
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Well I didn't see that coming! Well done @Geron Kees for such a superb story which I have enjoyed reading. A sequel to this story thread may not work as already suggested but I'll definitely be reading your stories in the future.
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Aww that was so sweet. I knew Ryan & Killian were meant to be together.
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Great chapter @Geron Kees - can't wait to see the denouement of their plan! I hope Zombo/Barney gets what's coming to him! And on a different matter, this story is now being read by some characters in another GA story (not Zombie related) that I'm also reading - Unbeaten by @Ivor Slipper - but not until chapter 31 (so you've all got some catching up to do!).
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@xTony Only two chapters left?
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Death comes to us all - even to Lycans RIP Gene. Angus is going to get what's coming to him so he'd better start running! Great chapter @Fantasyboy69
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Freaking hell! What a chapter!! Don't think I need say any more! Great work @xTony
