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  • 08/01/2017
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Moggy's Mutterings - 30. Remember Me

I have a memory of me.
The me I used to want to be.
The carefree, dancing spirit.
Before life made me, the child, responsible.
Responsible for the care of adults.
Adult worries and issues heaped high.
All done with smiles, in hopes of love, acceptance.
Never given, just labeled a daydreamer.
But, deep in the night, all others asleep,
slipping out the window, to dance in the meadows.
Frolic in the groves, splash in the creek.
Stars and auroras lighting the way.
All grown, waiting for death,
I carry a nugget of a memory.
A memory of the me I used to want to be.

"in this world of changes, please remember me" The Soldier, Chris de Burgh
Copyright © 2017 mogwhy; All Rights Reserved.
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Headstall

I really related to this, moggy. I was always, always, always the adult. It's a heavy weight, and you express this beautifully... the facade worn, and the imagination needed to get the child through... it wasn't fair, but life often isn't... cheers... Gary xo

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Caz Pedroso

It makes me think about my daughter, and how society is trying to get kids to grow up so fast nowadays. 

 

Very well written moggy :hug: 

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mogwhy
14 hours ago, AC Benus said:

Yes, it's unfair when children are called upon to be the adults in the room. Hugs 

very unfair to be sure, but for me, it was a means to survive. although i could have done without the adventure as a 1st grader helping to feed the schizophrenics their dinners place at the where my mother worked. :P thanks for the hugs

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mogwhy
14 hours ago, Headstall said:

I really related to this, moggy. I was always, always, always the adult. It's a heavy weight, and you express this beautifully... the facade worn, and the imagination needed to get the child through... it wasn't fair, but life often isn't... cheers... Gary xo

thanks gary. so many bear this burden. i take comfort in the inherent unfairness in the world. otherwise the things that have been done to me, would mean i deserve them :hug:and the person who told you life was fair? he lied :)

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mogwhy
3 hours ago, Caz Pedroso said:

It makes me think about my daughter, and how society is trying to get kids to grow up so fast nowadays. 

 

Very well written moggy :hug: 

thanks caz. it was one of the factors in deciding to homeschool. that i was in control of how fast he grew up. i didn't want for him to fend for himself at a young age. he had fun and by the time he was a teenager he was well rounded and adjusted. i hate the over sexualazition of children. what 5 year old needs a push-up bra?

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WolfM

It sucks when kids have to grow up and stop being kids, before they actually stop being kids.  Beautifully done!

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mogwhy
16 minutes ago, WolfM said:

It sucks when kids have to grow up and stop being kids, before they actually stop being kids.  Beautifully done!

thanks. it is so true. too many kids

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Aviana

This was awesome.....very nicely written....to be deprived of childhood before the child could even enjoy it is really hard...!! Wonderfully written :hug:

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mogwhy
14 minutes ago, Aviana said:

This was awesome.....very nicely written....to be deprived of childhood before the child could even enjoy it is really hard...!! Wonderfully written :hug:

:glomp: thanks Aviana. good to see you. 

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