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    mogwhy
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  • 06/30/2017
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Moggy's Mutterings - 16. It's Raining

It was raining.
You were my boss, my ride.
You offered dinner at 3am.
We talked til sunrise.
Told you, I didn’t want to go home.
You offered me your place.
The squat green trailer.
A one night stand.
It was all I wanted.
You were so virgin, I was so used.
But the craving for human touch was much.
We exploded.

 

You were to be a one night stand.
You had other ideas.
Pulling me in, day after day.
Transferring me to hide our coupling.
I tried to protect me, but you gave good chase.
I fell hard.
You fell harder, scaring yourself.
I return from an out of town errand.
Found you gone, lock, stock and trailer.
You may not have left word,
but you left me, plus one behind.
It’s raining again.

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mogwhy
13 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Such a sad poem; a story wrapped in sorrow. 

thank you. nice description 

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Headstall

Wow... so real. A complete story here, played out before my eyes. Sad, reflective, and powerful. Well done, moggy... shook me up a little. :hug: 

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mogwhy
52 minutes ago, Headstall said:

Wow... so real. A complete story here, played out before my eyes. Sad, reflective, and powerful. Well done, moggy... shook me up a little. :hug: 

thanks gary.  i may have lived it, and wrote it but having others read and understand it, moves me the most

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Aviana

Wow..I don't know what else to say...In few lines you told a complete story!! Just...WOW!!

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mogwhy
1 hour ago, Aviana said:

Wow..I don't know what else to say...In few lines you told a complete story!! Just...WOW!!

thanks. writing these tings is cathartic for me. keeping them short and poem like is the challenge 

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mogwhy
On 9/15/2017 at 7:12 PM, LitLover said:

So much raw emotion in this.  Wonderfully written, if sad :hug: 

thanks:glomp: painful then, bittersweet now. everything i've gone through, goes into making me, me. and i don't think i'm such a bad me, sometimes i even like me

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AlexLittel

I don't usually care for poetry but these are excellent.  I write poetry for myself just to clear my mind.  However, I identify with so many of these.

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