Moggy's Mutterings - 2. Moon Shadows

Memories, the lonely night, love lost, love remembered, the longing ... all evoke powerful emotions ...

10 hours ago, hoaluu said:

I see a man waiting for his lover, under the moonlight

He's not old or dull, he's a shining star, shining brighter and brighter as time flows by

I hope the one he's waiting for will soon come to him

and then they can dance through many moonlight nights 

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Just my thought after I read 

thanks! i like it

8 hours ago, hohochan657 said:

Memories, the lonely night, love lost, love remembered, the longing ... all evoke powerful emotions ...

thanks hoho. diffidently the longing here

Hi Moggy, I know this is a collection, but somehow it reads like a lovely song with different verses to me. I am just looking on the moon through my window and here your song in my mind. Beautiful.

1 hour ago, Lyssa said:

Hi Moggy, I know this is a collection, but somehow it reads like a lovely song with different verses to me. I am just looking on the moon through my window and here your song in my mind. Beautiful.

thanks. i wrote these, at different times about the moon and what i reveals 

You do a great job with variations on your theme. I can see silver light...

1 hour ago, Parker Owens said:

You do a great job with variations on your theme. I can see silver light...

thank. it means a lot that you comment, i'm pretty bad about commenting on stories. i love yours

What is it about the moon and moonlight that evoke such powerful memories?   All of these are well done Moggy.  Great imagery.  

These are all so beautiful moggy.. I'm so happy you shared them with us.. 

2 hours ago, LitLover said:

What is it about the moon and moonlight that evoke such powerful memories?   All of these are well done Moggy.  Great imagery.  

we are 75 % water, the moon moves water and the dark, where the moon lives, hides our rawness. thanks

1 hour ago, Defiance19 said:

These are all so beautiful moggy.. I'm so happy you shared them with us.. 

thanks. don't worry i have more

I see the moon in your collection of poems as a sliver of light and hope in the darkness of loneliness and the remembrance of past loves. I agree with @Lyssa that the poems, although separate, are woven together like a song. 

1 hour ago, MacGreg said:

I see the moon in your collection of poems as a sliver of light and hope in the darkness of loneliness and the remembrance of past loves. I agree with @Lyssa that the poems, although separate, are woven together like a song. 

thanks. it wasn't planned that way, it was just a happy chance

1 minute ago, mogwhy said:

thanks. it wasn't planned that way, it was just a happy chance

When you don't plan it, and it naturally flows that way, that's quite an accomplishment. 

i like this collections of moon poems . the moon is mysterious and can be both good and evil... great little collection 

3 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

i like this collections of moon poems . the moon is mysterious and can be both good and evil... great little collection 

thanks tim. the moon calls to me. it always has. it was safer in the moonlight than it ever was in the sunlight

Your poem captured past love and the feeling of memories remarkably well. Good job Moggy! 🤗

2 hours ago, BlindAmbition said:

Your poem captured past love and the feeling of memories remarkably well. Good job Moggy! 🤗

thanks jp!

Lovely and inspiring. Each one seemed to tell a little story of its own 

4 hours ago, Caz Pedroso said:

Lovely and inspiring. Each one seemed to tell a little story of its own 

 

 

thanks caz. each part of the same one soul brought forth.... ohh that sounds like the start of another verse. thanks!

"Memories of other moonlit nights flit through a mind.
Memories of sighs and slow dances. Of heat filled pleasures."

This lines suddenly made me image a beautiful moonlight night in a beach  

Very beautifully portrayed!!