Tim the Traveller Posted March 9, 2008 Posted March 9, 2008 is posted http://deweywriter.com/chapters/dewey/tpw/tpw27.htm
Drewbie Posted March 10, 2008 Posted March 10, 2008 Damn i still feel so bad for these two, I still angry with pete though. Just wish they could sit down and talk but really talk.
Site Moderator TalonRider Posted March 11, 2008 Site Moderator Posted March 11, 2008 It would appear that Brian is heading for another meltdown. Will he wake up in time to save himself? At least Pete and Brian started talking a little bit. I think they both still need each other. They both still have their demons to get past. Apart, I don't think either one is strong enough to do it. Jan
Drewbie Posted March 11, 2008 Posted March 11, 2008 It would appear that Brian is heading for another meltdown. Will he wake up in time to save himself? At least Pete and Brian started talking a little bit. I think they both still need each other. They both still have their demons to get past. Apart, I don't think either one is strong enough to do it. Jan Talon you do have a point, Ray is right though also who is going to save him this time? he's not eating, he's working himself up to death again.
dkstories Posted March 13, 2008 Posted March 13, 2008 Okay, but where is 28? (I love being able to say that when it's not my story!). I really feel for both these guys, and have to say that the perceptions from Brian's perspective are absolutely wonderful. He really is in denial and that's what it looks like a lot of the time.
old bob Posted March 14, 2008 Posted March 14, 2008 Okay, but where is 28? (I love being able to say that when it's not my story!). I really feel for both these guys, and have to say that the perceptions from Brian's perspective are absolutely wonderful. He really is in denial and that's what it looks like a lot of the time. Hey DK, "....I love being able to say that when it's not my story..." Hehe... I will remember that if necessary, but I must say that you are really "in time" now with your chapters and I appreciate it Wonderful story....I followed it from the beginning, sharing the different perspectives of both Brian and Pete, hoping the best and fearing the worst. "They both still have their demons to get past." Thats make the story so "likeable".
Heart Posted August 11, 2010 Posted August 11, 2010 Hi, there, from your reviews, it seems as if its a really good story. where can i find the link to this story, enjoying the story caffe, first time visitor, Heart
Benji Posted August 11, 2010 Posted August 11, 2010 Hi, there, from your reviews, it seems as if its a really good story. where can i find the link to this story, enjoying the story caffe, first time visitor, Heart ...........In here, http://deweywriter.com/
Site Moderator TalonRider Posted August 11, 2010 Site Moderator Posted August 11, 2010 To understand what's going on in TPW, I suggest you read the other three stories first. For The Love of Pete, Brian and Pete, and Brian's Destruction. The Power Within is a continuation.
Benji Posted August 11, 2010 Posted August 11, 2010 .... How right you are, I should have mentioned that!
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