TracyMN Posted January 4, 2009 Posted January 4, 2009 Yeah, I think i'll have to agree with Drewbie about the Dad. He'll no doubt get worse before he gets better. But when our boy breaks free of him, oh how free he will be. Nice work, Krista, and as always, thank you for your effort. Tracy
Krista Posted January 6, 2009 Author Posted January 6, 2009 I'm keep on feeling bad for Corey, the dad is way to involved and at times far removed. Aww. Will the father/son relationship change? For the better.. or Worse? Thanks for reading Drew.
Krista Posted January 6, 2009 Author Posted January 6, 2009 Yeah, I think i'll have to agree with Drewbie about the Dad. He'll no doubt get worse before he gets better. But when our boy breaks free of him, oh how free he will be. Nice work, Krista, and as always, thank you for your effort. Tracy Thanks for reading Tracy.
Krista Posted January 10, 2009 Author Posted January 10, 2009 Chapter 4 is now available on my Hosted Site. Chapter 4 Happy reading, Krista
nellyd80 Posted January 17, 2009 Posted January 17, 2009 I really enjoyed the latest chapter to Standing in Shadows, and I still hold my opinion about not liking Corey's Dad at all. I am anticipating the next chapter to see where Greg has taken him. Anyway, great chapter.
TracyMN Posted January 17, 2009 Posted January 17, 2009 I hate to have to say "me too", Krista, but me too, I read the chapter right away, gobbled it right up in fact, and decided Dad might just be a self-centered prick. And you deserve better for not making US wait. Thank you Tracy
WhatEvs_svEtahW Posted January 18, 2009 Posted January 18, 2009 is there ever going to be a time where your writing isn't wonderful lol these 4 chapters were good can't wait for another chapter in this or are you... XD patience...
Krista Posted January 18, 2009 Author Posted January 18, 2009 Forgot to review, good chapter Lol... bad Drewbie.. bad! Thanks for reading.
Krista Posted January 18, 2009 Author Posted January 18, 2009 I really enjoyed the latest chapter to Standing in Shadows, and I still hold my opinion about not liking Corey's Dad at all. I am anticipating the next chapter to see where Greg has taken him. Anyway, great chapter. Thanks for reading. I've been working on chapter 5.
Krista Posted January 18, 2009 Author Posted January 18, 2009 I hate to have to say "me too", Krista, but me too, I read the chapter right away, gobbled it right up in fact, and decided Dad might just be a self-centered prick. And you deserve better for not making US wait. Thank you Tracy Thanks for reading Tracy!
Krista Posted January 18, 2009 Author Posted January 18, 2009 is there ever going to be a time where your writing isn't wonderful lol these 4 chapters were good can't wait for another chapter in this or are you... XD patience... Lol, thanks for reading my stories.
Krista Posted March 6, 2009 Author Posted March 6, 2009 Sorry about the delay in chapters guys and girls... I've been busy with school.. But! I've been working on this story some.
TracyMN Posted March 6, 2009 Posted March 6, 2009 I was just looking for you yesterday, Krista. I must have heard you coming, or typing, or studying....haha School is important, i'll wait. But feel free to hurry.
writeincode Posted April 13, 2009 Posted April 13, 2009 Oo just started reading this one. Haven't read anything new in a long long time coz i've been far too busy with uni but this is awesome! I want to know where they arrived and how it will progress!
Krista Posted April 14, 2009 Author Posted April 14, 2009 Oo just started reading this one. Haven't read anything new in a long long time coz i've been far too busy with uni but this is awesome! I want to know where they arrived and how it will progress! Thanks for reading! I've slowly, but surely been working on the new chapter.. my college and life has been nutty.. haha.
Krista Posted April 26, 2009 Author Posted April 26, 2009 Hey guys here is Chapter 5, sorry for the long wait. I'll try to get back to work and post a few more soon. Chapter 5
Drewbie Posted April 26, 2009 Posted April 26, 2009 I enjoyed the Dancing lessons how fun. "least I don't have two left feet Could it be that greg likes cory?
TracyMN Posted April 26, 2009 Posted April 26, 2009 And I haven't even read it yet. I'm sosososososo happy to see you Krista!!!! Be back in a bit. And thanks for your effort already! Tracy
Site Administrator wildone Posted April 26, 2009 Site Administrator Posted April 26, 2009 Great chapter Krista I have to admit I had to scan a bit over chapter 4 to get in the right time frame, but the characters immediately jumped out at me. I really enjoyed the dance lessons too. I found it funny that the the senior lady leaving gave them a look and then the instructor asked if they were the grooms. It appears that everybody can see it except for Corey . Hell, even his Dad picked it out by his flip flogs . Ticks , aren't those the pesky little things that give you lyme disease??? Don't be going and killing off Corey or Greg too soon . Thanks again for the chapter, Steve
Zeoanne Posted April 26, 2009 Posted April 26, 2009 Loved the ticks scene, checked them out on Google and EWWWW!!! they can be a P-I-A! They "looked" so cute in the dance studio! The characters can really reel you in with their silliness, the looks they give each other and their shyness. I'm so glad to be able to help you out with the chapters girl! Anxiously waiting for Chapter 6!!
Krista Posted April 27, 2009 Author Posted April 27, 2009 I enjoyed the Dancing lessons how fun. "least I don't have two left feet Could it be that greg likes cory? Lol. I liked writing the Dancing scene.. it actually seemed less awkward than my dancing scene in Are You Christian. - I don't know does he?
Krista Posted April 27, 2009 Author Posted April 27, 2009 And I haven't even read it yet. I'm sosososososo happy to see you Krista!!!! Be back in a bit. And thanks for your effort already! Tracy Lol, I'll try to be better at writing/posting.
Krista Posted April 27, 2009 Author Posted April 27, 2009 Great chapter Krista I have to admit I had to scan a bit over chapter 4 to get in the right time frame, but the characters immediately jumped out at me. I really enjoyed the dance lessons too. I found it funny that the the senior lady leaving gave them a look and then the instructor asked if they were the grooms. It appears that everybody can see it except for Corey . Hell, even his Dad picked it out by his flip flogs . Ticks , aren't those the pesky little things that give you lyme disease??? Don't be going and killing off Corey or Greg too soon . Thanks again for the chapter, Steve Oops, sorry about the long delay. Lol, I promise a few more chapters before I kill anyone off.
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