NaperVic Posted July 13, 2005 Posted July 13, 2005 It's almost here I can taste the marshmallows myself!!!!!! Latest word from Dom about TOU Chapter 14 I'll be a little torn because I get my Book Six of Harry Potter on Saturday, I hope TOU Chapter 14 doesn't come out at the same time. Vic the Happy Excited Domaholic!
Ann Posted July 14, 2005 Posted July 14, 2005 Hmm... read Harry Potter or TOU... whatever will you do, Vic? I guess if it comes out the 14th we'll all know if you're really a true Domaholic, now won't we.
Mark Arbour Posted July 14, 2005 Posted July 14, 2005 I'm reading TOU, screw Harry Potter. Hmmm. Now there's an idea.
Masked Monkey Posted July 14, 2005 Posted July 14, 2005 (edited) Given that no matter how much time Dom has spent writing between TOU13 and 14 it will not be longer that HP6, I'm stuck with TOU until I get that new job and move and unpack and fix the computer and ... :king: Snow Dog Edited July 14, 2005 by Snow Dog
Alan Posted July 16, 2005 Posted July 16, 2005 Given that no matter how much time Dom has spent writing between TOU13 and 14 it will not be longer that HP6, I'm stuck with TOU until I get that new job and move and unpack and fix the computer and ... :king: Snow Dog <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Only unfortunate duggles could prefer HP to TOU.
fatboyfat Posted July 16, 2005 Posted July 16, 2005 Well I got my copy of Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince today and it's sitting unopened so far. Instead I've been re-reading TOU in preparation for Chapter 14. I'd forgotten how good the story is so far! Silly really as all Dom's works are great Now I'm looking like this until chapter 14 appears! I was going to say I'm looking like this but I think that dude just looks constipated. Cheers, Neil
joana_imago Posted July 17, 2005 Posted July 17, 2005 hi there guys, me too that is: I also re-read TOU over the weekend. And it's such a bloody good story. Amazing. Knew that before, yet reading it again made me "more aware" of it ... now I'm impatiently waiting for chapter 14. will it ever be out there?? :wacko: speaking about HP: totally forgot to order the new book. myomy did it today and my lovely online-book-shop (not being big bad amazon!) told me, it will be here in two days. might give me a little distraction from waititng for TOU #14 take care all of you. joana
NaperVic Posted July 19, 2005 Author Posted July 19, 2005 Posted on Dom's Yahoo group: To: DominicLuka@yahoogroups.com From: "domluka" <domluka@yahoo.com> Date: Tue, 19 Jul 2005 23:10:42 -0000 Subject: [DominicLuka] Re: Desert Dropping/The Ordinary Us/ The next chapter of TOU will be out tonight or tomorrow night. I'm finishing it up right now. ------ Let the anticipation begin!
joana_imago Posted July 19, 2005 Posted July 19, 2005 Posted on Dom's Yahoo group:To: DominicLuka@yahoogroups.com From: "domluka" <domluka@yahoo.com> Date: Tue, 19 Jul 2005 23:10:42 -0000 Subject: [DominicLuka] Re: Desert Dropping/The Ordinary Us/ The next chapter of TOU will be out tonight or tomorrow night. I'm finishing it up right now. ------ Let the anticipation begin! <{POST_SNAPBACK}> yippie!!!!!!! can't wait hopefully it will be out tonight, then I might be able to read it with a nice cup of coffee in the morning - gotta love those different time zones take care, joana
Caliboy Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 WHAT A GREAT CHAPTER !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JoleChristopher Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 awesome chap dom it was perfect i really hope that brad does not become another adam and i hope that bee does not turn into janie. poor quinn what will happen when his mom finds out?? god i love you and your meanie pants ways JC
lobaiga Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 FABULOUS Dom!!!!! I loved the chapter and am so anticipating the next........glad you are working on it! Lore
NaperVic Posted July 20, 2005 Author Posted July 20, 2005 WOW! All I can say is WOW! I'll have to re-read before I'll be able to put down some coherent thoughts, but WOW! That was more than just a Domerific Chapter, that was...that was just...WOW! If taking 3 months between Chapter 13 and Chapter 14 gets us that kind of quality, please take 6 months before you put out Chapter 15! Vic the Domaholic P.S. - Uhmmm, don't take 6 months to get out Chapter 15 P.P.S. - That scene with Jude and Quinn by the marshmallow fire was probably some of the best erotic stuff you've written. It seemed so real, so intense (and HTF do you do that when technically, no release was had by either Quinn or Jude ) I don't remember wanting to go rush to J/O in the middle of a chapter before P.P.S. - You're the best Dom! I can't say it enough, but you are the best Gay Fiction writer out there!
Masked Monkey Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 WOW! All I can say is WOW! I'll have to re-read before I'll be able to put down some coherent thoughts, but WOW! That was more than just a Domerific Chapter, that was...that was just...WOW! If taking 3 months between Chapter 13 and Chapter 14 gets us that kind of quality, please take 6 months before you put out Chapter 15! Vic the Domaholic P.S. - Uhmmm, don't take 6 months to get out Chapter 15 P.P.S. - That scene with Jude and Quinn by the marshmallow fire was probably some of the best erotic stuff you've written. It seemed so real, so intense (and HTF do you do that when technically, no release was had by either Quinn or Jude ) I don't remember wanting to go rush to J/O in the middle of a chapter before P.P.S. - You're the best Dom! I can't say it enough, but you are the best Gay Fiction writer out there! <{POST_SNAPBACK}> I um had to stop after the second paragraph for a um break... I guess I've been a bit 'tense' lately :king: Snow Dog
NaperVic Posted July 20, 2005 Author Posted July 20, 2005 I um had to stop after the second paragraph for a um break... I guess I've been a bit 'tense' lately :king: Snow Dog <{POST_SNAPBACK}> You? Tense? <said the one who has the scars on his back from all the whipping he has taken from Snow Dog today>
Masked Monkey Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 (edited) I um had to stop after the second paragraph for a um break... I guess I've been a bit 'tense' lately :king: Snow Dog <{POST_SNAPBACK}> You? Tense? <said the one who has the scars on his back from all the whipping he has taken from Snow Dog today> <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Awww Vic, I'm sorry, you can have your job back if you want it . Maybe I was just jealous I don't like gin anyway :king: Snow Dog Edit: Oh, I guess I heard wrong about you liking whips and all, sorry Edited July 20, 2005 by Snow Dog
joana_imago Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 oh my gosh!!!! what a great chapter! thank you so much, dom. take care, joana
dbene Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 Thanks for the new chapter! Well worth the wait!!!!!!!!! ~~Deb~~
Elizabeth8338 Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 Thanks for another excellent chapter, Dom! And I had finally gotten to the point where I wasn't checking your site every day for new chapters...now I'm addicted again! I hope chapter 15 is easier to write. I thought the scene at the railroad tracks was incredibly well-written and true to character (not to mention very hot!). It was nice to see Quinn lose a little control and just go what he was feeling. He didn't completely overthink things the whole time, but he wouldn't have been Quinn without those little interruptions of him freaking out. I was so thrilled to see Quinn finally admitting his sexuality to Brad. It was a major milestone for him, and I think your description of Brad's reaction was completely realistic. While as Quinn's best friend he should have noticed how terrified Quinn was and been more supportive, he was completely shocked by Quinn's revelation and understandably needed a little time to adjust to the news. I think if he had been really upset or disgusted and unwilling to remain friends with Quinn, he would have said so immediately. I think the fact that he was just going aside to wrap his thoughts around the idea was a good sign for their friendship. I wish he had realized how nervous Quinn really was and that leaving him alone probably wasn't the best idea, although that was definitely better than him speaking up immediately and saying the wrong thing. Again, thanks again for sharing your writing with us! This story is definitely my favorite of yours!!
viv Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 Well, I said yesterday that it would be worth the wait, and OMG it was!! Each time I think the story can't get any better, Dom surprises me... I am without a doubt sitting on the edge of my seat, biting my nails, pacing back and forth in great anticipation for TOU 15. Thanks Dom for being so amazing... Viv
NaperVic Posted July 20, 2005 Author Posted July 20, 2005 (edited) Well, I said yesterday that it would be worth the wait, and OMG it was!! Each time I think the story can't get any better, Dom surprises me... I am without a doubt sitting on the edge of my seat, biting my nails, pacing back and forth in great anticipation for TOU 15. Thanks Dom for being so amazing...Viv <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Hey Viv (hehe, our names our only one letter apart!) Have you thought about smacking your computer monitor any time when reading one of Dom's Chapters? Have you found yourself cursing at your computer too? If so, and with the symptoms you've described, I believe you are becoming or are already a Domaholic Vic the Domaholic P.S. - If so, WELCOME TO THE CLUB! Edited July 20, 2005 by naper_vic
NaperVic Posted July 20, 2005 Author Posted July 20, 2005 Warning: possible* TOU Chapter 15 spoiler - What if Brad 'needed a minute' because he's really gay, he's attracted to Quinn, is happy to find out that Quinn 'likes guys', but is pissed off that Quinn is attracted to Jude and not Brad? Luckily for you Dom is writing this story and not me Vic the Domaholic
fatboyfat Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 Brilliant chapter... but what a cliffhanger! Dom, you need to apologise to the soft furnishings in my room that took a beating when I realised I couldn't scroll down any more and you had left poor Quinn in such a state! Ah well, I did eventually calm down enough to function normally - so now I'll just have to wait for Chapter 15. Please, please, please make it soon! Cheers, Neil
viv Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 Well, I said yesterday that it would be worth the wait, and OMG it was!! Each time I think the story can't get any better, Dom surprises me... I am without a doubt sitting on the edge of my seat, biting my nails, pacing back and forth in great anticipation for TOU 15. Thanks Dom for being so amazing...Viv <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Hey Viv (hehe, our names our only one letter apart!) Have you thought about smacking your computer monitor any time when reading one of Dom's Chapters? Have you found yourself cursing at your computer too? If so, and with the symptoms you've described, I believe you are becoming or are already a Domaholic Vic the Domaholic P.S. - If so, WELCOME TO THE CLUB! <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Well, Vic with a C... yes, but my BIG question is why the sad face about being a Domaholic? Like that could be bad... when it is so good!!! Oh, and thanks for the warm welcome to this incredible club... Viv... with a V
Masked Monkey Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 Warning: possible* TOU Chapter 15 spoiler - What if Brad 'needed a minute' because he's really gay, he's attracted to Quinn, is happy to find out that Quinn 'likes guys', but is pissed off that Quinn is attracted to Jude and not Brad? Luckily for you Dom is writing this story and not me Vic the Domaholic <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Fine, if we are gonna play with the spoiler thing. Brad 'needed a minute' to go take care of himself because the thought of being with Quinn and Jude got him too hot and he couldn't admit it :king: Snow Dog the Domaholic Danderthal
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