vision Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 The wait was worth it for such a good chapter but where's 15?! I think Quinn is doing his typical over-reacting routine and Brad doesn't have any issues with Quinn now, after all Dom writes str8 best friend characters well Bree though....I think she understands it all now and won't be happy, she's a little to used to getting her own way and this time she lost the cute boy to her brother, gives a new meaning to sibbling rivalry. As for Snow Dog's comment about what Brad was doing, he should know better than to tell us what he was doing himself after the second paragraph I wonder if the fact Mark hasn't been around has made Snow Dog so "tense"
NaperVic Posted July 20, 2005 Author Posted July 20, 2005 Well, I said yesterday that it would be worth the wait, and OMG it was!! Each time I think the story can't get any better, Dom surprises me... I am without a doubt sitting on the edge of my seat, biting my nails, pacing back and forth in great anticipation for TOU 15. Thanks Dom for being so amazing...Viv <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Hey Viv (hehe, our names our only one letter apart!) Have you thought about smacking your computer monitor any time when reading one of Dom's Chapters? Have you found yourself cursing at your computer too? If so, and with the symptoms you've described, I believe you are becoming or are already a Domaholic Vic the Domaholic P.S. - If so, WELCOME TO THE CLUB! <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Well, Vic with a C... yes, but my BIG question is why the sad face about being a Domaholic? Like that could be bad... when it is so good!!! Oh, and thanks for the warm welcome to this incredible club... Viv... with a V <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Oh Viv, in public we try to pretend we are self-loathing about being a Domaholic -- thus the sad face. Most addicts aren't allowed to be proud of their addiction. You being new and all, I didn't want to let on how most of us really feel... We all know that being a Domaholic is good, oh so good. Oh yeah, lots of us feel naughty too I'm actually still smoking a post TOU Ch 14 cigarette. The high has been that good. Vic the Domaholic
NaperVic Posted July 20, 2005 Author Posted July 20, 2005 As for Snow Dog's comment about what Brad was doing, he should know better than to tell us what he was doing himself after the second paragraph I wonder if the fact Mark hasn't been around has made Snow Dog so "tense" <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Hey Vision, Snow Dog can relate because he usually needs 'a minute' or less to take care of such things too Vic the Domaholic
viv Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 Well, I said yesterday that it would be worth the wait, and OMG it was!! Each time I think the story can't get any better, Dom surprises me... I am without a doubt sitting on the edge of my seat, biting my nails, pacing back and forth in great anticipation for TOU 15. Thanks Dom for being so amazing...Viv <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Hey Viv (hehe, our names our only one letter apart!) Have you thought about smacking your computer monitor any time when reading one of Dom's Chapters? Have you found yourself cursing at your computer too? If so, and with the symptoms you've described, I believe you are becoming or are already a Domaholic Vic the Domaholic P.S. - If so, WELCOME TO THE CLUB! <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Well, Vic with a C... yes, but my BIG question is why the sad face about being a Domaholic? Like that could be bad... when it is so good!!! Oh, and thanks for the warm welcome to this incredible club... Viv... with a V <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Oh Viv, in public we try to pretend we are self-loathing about being a Domaholic -- thus the sad face. Most addicts aren't allowed to be proud of their addiction. You being new and all, I didn't want to let on how most of us really feel... We all know that being a Domaholic is good, oh so good. Oh yeah, lots of us feel naughty too I'm actually still smoking a post TOU Ch 14 cigarette. The high has been that good. Vic the Domaholic <{POST_SNAPBACK}> I say embrace who you are... we need more love in this world so why not love Dom??? Right, I mean, that is an addiction worth keeping. Now, the whole post TOU cigarette, don't get me started on that addiction... hehe. Viv
Masked Monkey Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 we need more love in this world so why not love Dom??? Viv <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Is this where you start singing Beatles songs and doing a bad rendition of 'Over The Rainbow'? Oh, and yea, Quinn and Jude together gets me pretty um..pumped.. now if you just add Brad and Taylor ... :king: Snow Dog the Domaholic Danderthal
viv Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 we need more love in this world so why not love Dom??? Viv <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Is this where you start singing Beatles songs and doing a bad rendition of 'Over The Rainbow'? Oh, and yea, Quinn and Jude together gets me pretty um..pumped.. now if you just add Brad and Taylor ... :king: Snow Dog the Domaholic Danderthal <{POST_SNAPBACK}> I heard that about you and your um... pumping... haha. Oh, and don't be greedy, really, I mean you know that Jude in his coveralls and Quinn the scared, shy guy is more than enough to get you, how did you put it, oh yeah, pretty pumped!! Hugs... Viv
Rocketcnj Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 Dom without a doubt you are the "King of the Teenage Psycho-Drama."I find you stories well thought out and compelling, great entertainment. The characters are interesting and likable. Two thumb's up. The only criticism that I would levy would be your use of the word "incredulous." Dom get a thesaurus! I can't recall a chapter (Although I'm sure there's got to be one) that you haven't used the word at least once. If I see the word "incredulous" in any form used again I'm going to scream! Oh no there it is!!! Arrrrrgh!!!! Arrrrgh!!! See what I mean? BTW I really like your stories, keep up the good work. Rob ps: Please find other words for incredulous <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Rob...now come on...Chapter 14 is perfect...so give Dom a break....it was perfect..even with the incredulous...it was incredible....don't you think? even the first part of the chapter was far from incredulous..well it was WOOFY HOT:) now, I know you are an Editor..but hey, I say it was incredibly perfect.....now don't go bitch slapping me..but Dom can use "increduluous" any time he wants with that kind of perfect writing:) Just my humble opinion.....and what would be incredible (hmmm..I best not repeat that..no need to be wisked away to some incredulous reparative therapy camp for those kinds of yummy incredible thoughts as well the Jude/Quinn ooh la la perfect scene.....all I can say is "more please" and I won't find it incredulupus...just WELL...yummy and to increduluously borrow a word (or a sound) from Snow Dog< "woof" and um, sorry to tease you..but I simply love Chapter 14......it is perfect...(ok please don't ban that word.....) Michael
NaperVic Posted July 20, 2005 Author Posted July 20, 2005 If I see the word "incredulous" in any form used again I'm going to scream! <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Robbie, I've been smirking at your note for the last 5 minutes. Vic the Domaholic
joana_imago Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 If I see the word "incredulous" in any form used again I'm going to scream! <{POST_SNAPBACK}> looking word up in good old LEO... ah, that's what it means, always wanted to know! can't even recall that Dom uses it that often. anyway, new word for my vocabulary. thx ROBBIE for making me aware of INCREDULOUS take care, joana
Cris L Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 Thanks Dom for C14, so can I start harassing you for C15 ?
AFriendlyFace Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 So where is Chapter 14? I don't see it posted?
joana_imago Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 Maybe because I read most of Dom's witting back to back, if you do that it becomes abundantly clear that he has a fetish for the word. Chapter (space) Chapter you probably would notice it hi rob, thx for making my day... well, no, actually that was Dom anyway: if you are Dom's editor, could you pretty-pleeeeease tell him to stop write "righting". come on, he's a writer, not a righter! whatever that might be in the first place... :wacko: okay, maybe I'm being anal (love this expression ) about this and I guess he only does it, when writing posts, but still..... thank you au revoir, joana
Rocketcnj Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 So where is Chapter 14? I don't see it posted? <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Hi..the same thing happened to me...its the weird browser thing..you have to go to Chapter 13 and open it and to the very end of Chapter 13 and for some reason there is Chapter 14...I don't know why that happens..but at least you will find the chapter that way... Enjoy the reading of it! Michael
Mark Arbour Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 Don't worry Michael I won't bitch slap you but arrrrgh!!!!! Maybe because I read most of Dom's witting back to back, if you do that it becomes abundantly clear that he has a fetish for the word. Chapter (space) Chapter you probably would notice it Vic and Joana I'm glad I could amuse you guy's I don't know why people told me that whenI left this place I'd be battered and bleeding. :2hands: You Domaholic's are all right Regards to All Rob <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Some editor. It's "writing" not "witting". Witting means cognizance. The reason they said you'd be battered and bleeding is because most of us don't appreciate supercilious twerps coming in here bitching about grammar and word choice. It's all about the content. :mace:
Mark Arbour Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 Maybe because I read most of Dom's witting back to back, if you do that it becomes abundantly clear that he has a fetish for the word. Chapter (space) Chapter you probably would notice it hi rob, thx for making my day... well, no, actually that was Dom anyway: if you are Dom's editor, could you pretty-pleeeeease tell him to stop write "righting". come on, he's a writer, not a righter! whatever that might be in the first place... :wacko: okay, maybe I'm being anal (love this expression ) about this and I guess he only does it, when writing posts, but still..... thank you au revoir, joana <{POST_SNAPBACK}> He can't help you with that. He can't spell it either.
joana_imago Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 Maybe because I read most of Dom's witting back to back, if you do that it becomes abundantly clear that he has a fetish for the word. Chapter (space) Chapter you probably would notice it hi rob, thx for making my day... well, no, actually that was Dom anyway: if you are Dom's editor, could you pretty-pleeeeease tell him to stop write "righting". come on, he's a writer, not a righter! whatever that might be in the first place... :wacko: okay, maybe I'm being anal (love this expression ) about this and I guess he only does it, when writing posts, but still..... thank you au revoir, joana <{POST_SNAPBACK}> He can't help you with that. He can't spell it either. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> *lol* you're so right - I totally over-read it the first time aroung... ciao, joana
joana_imago Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 *lol* you're so right - I totally over-read it the first time aroung... ciao, joana <{POST_SNAPBACK}> well, and I can't type... obviously... :wacko:
NaperVic Posted July 20, 2005 Author Posted July 20, 2005 I don't know why people told me that when I left this place I'd be battered and bleeding.
Mark Arbour Posted July 20, 2005 Posted July 20, 2005 I don't know why people told me that when I left this place I'd be battered and bleeding.
Sugarmag Posted July 21, 2005 Posted July 21, 2005 The reason they said you'd be battered and bleeding is because most of us don't appreciate supercilious twerps coming in here bitching about grammar and word choice.
Masked Monkey Posted July 21, 2005 Posted July 21, 2005 I don't know why people told me that when I left this place I'd be battered and bleeding. :2hands: <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Some editor. It's "writing" not "witting". Witting means cognizance. The reason they said you'd be battered and bleeding is because most of us don't appreciate supercilious twerps coming in here bitching about grammar and word choice. It's all about the content. :mace: <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Mark, where have you been buddy? I'll do the introductions - Mark, this is Rob, Rob, this is our resident Batterer and Bludgeoner Mark :axeman: (notice the fangs on his avatar) ? Hey before you find any other victims Mark, I think Snow Dog needs you. He's had a little too much 'rainbow fun' and is a little off kilter, if you know what I mean. Vic the Domaholic <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Those may be fangs, but I will point out again that the cat in his avatar is yawning, not roaring :king: Snow Dog
Mark Arbour Posted July 21, 2005 Posted July 21, 2005 Don't deprive him of what he needs. In the long run everyone will benefit from it. Rob <{POST_SNAPBACK}> I think he's spending most of his time "getting what he needs" and that's why chapters are few and far between.
fatboyfat Posted July 21, 2005 Posted July 21, 2005 anyway: if you are Dom's editor, could you pretty-pleeeeease tell him to stop write "righting". come on, he's a writer, not a righter! whatever that might be in the first place... :wacko: okay, maybe I'm being anal (love this expression ) about this and I guess he only does it, when writing posts, but still..... thank you au revoir, joana <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Hi Joana, You might be interested in seeing Dom's post here about such errors: https://www.gayauthors.org/forums/index.php...indpost&p=14257 Cheers, Neil
Ann Posted July 23, 2005 Posted July 23, 2005 anyway: if you are Dom's editor, could you pretty-pleeeeease tell him to stop write "righting". come on, he's a writer, not a righter! whatever that might be in the first place...
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