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Hey Guys :D

 

I'm setting this thread up as a thread for people to comment on my stories. I will also use this as my "Announcement" forum for the future as well as the efiction announcement section.

 

Any comments about any of my work? (PS at the start of your message can you say what story you are talking about Please and Thank you)

 

 

 

 

Thanks For Reading :D

 

Johnathan xx

 

 

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How about a general comment on all of them? Your stories are unique. Each and every one of them... unique from each other and unique from anything else around them. You have a way of telling stories that makes even the mundane extraordinary. Dramatic, enthusiastic and imaginative. You never knoe what you are going to get, what is coming next or where the journey is going to take you. I love the unique perspective and colourful images. Keep it up.

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Hey Guys :D

 

heres the link to the new chapter of Every Little Thing :

 

http://www.gayauthor...ize=0&chapter=7

 

 

 

 

OH and coming soon...

 

Lonely Differences Chapter 2

 

Trust me... i'm an Angel : PART TWO SECTION TWO : DONT LOOK BACK IN ANGER

 

Trust me... i'm an Angel : PART TWO SECTION THREE : LEGENDS

 

Trust me... i'm an Angel : PART TWO SECTION FOUR : BREAKING BOUNDARIES

 

 

 

 

 

So... you will all have alot to read :D hehe! :D

 

 

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Just to please you all, i have added my last (so far!!!) chapter of Every Little Thing She Does is Magic chapter 7 out of a whim i wanted to write.

 

 

 

 

Don't feel afraid to pm or contact me through here if you are interested or have read the story even to just say "i've read it", then it just all means alot to a writer. :D

 

 

 

 

Johnathan xx

 

 

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I've read some of John's stories, I loved Trust me...I'm an Angel. The subtleties of the storyline are quite intriguing. While I can't breeze through and just enjoy a simple tale in the storyline, I like having to focus and read between the lines and really figure out the characters. It's not all laid out there. I haven't had much time to read lately but definitely wanted to make a comment here since what I have read I have really enjoyed! Keep writing John!

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And now... *insert drum roll* Please welcome PART TWO SECTION TWO : DON'T LOOK BACK IN ANGER of Trust me... i'm an Angel :D

 

 

 

 

https://www.gayauthors.org/efiction/viewstory.php?sid=1350&textsize=0&chapter=3

 

 

 

 

Please could you review :D hehe :D Have fun reading...

 

 

 

 

It's about to get a hell of alot darker...

 

 

  • 3 weeks later...
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Hey Guys :D Here is the next bit to Trust me... i'm an Angel :D

 

 

 

 

http://www.gayauthor...=1350&chapter=4

 

 

 

 

Also just to let everyone in the community know :D I will be taking a short writing holiday during may/june because of my exams :)

 

 

 

 

Now this doesnt mean i will stop writing :) Far from it! :D

 

 

 

 

Because i have stories in the works... That you will all enjoy i hope.

 

 

 

 

Updated list of where everything is�

 

For the people who read my thread, a little preview to what is going to be released or written...

 

 

 

 

Trust me... i'm an Angel : Part Three In Writing. Parts 4-6 Planned.

 

Trust me... you are not Alone : The Sequel to "Trust me... i'm an Angel" In Planning

 

Trust me... it will never be Over : The Ending of The Trust me... Trilogy � � � A Future Project

 

Lonely Differences : To Be Continued At A Later Date

 

A Solitary Kiss : Take The Risk : The "I'd Never Do That" Anthology

 

??? : A Novella. In Writing.

 

 

 

 

You didn't think i would let you know about my largest project? Hell no! :P

 

 

 

 

Future Anthologies�

 

Out of This World

 

No Going Back

 

Haunted

 

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I liked the start you have made with Crossing Blades. The characters are well written, even in so brief a start. I can't wait to read more on this, find out what happens to the injured skater, the other skaters. Great time to come out with this, during the winter Olympics!

 

With 'Trust Me', wow, did you inject a lot of action. This story has a lot of loose ends, so many questions. It seems as soon as I get an answer to one of them, three more crop up. I love that, it keeps me interested in stories when a writers does that. Can't wait to read more, you left it in such an intriguing place!

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Johnathan Colourfield Journeyman Scribe

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Well hi guys :)

 

Sorry i have been away for so long but i am starting to be more regular now with my posting.

 

Firstly i have finished my story Lonely Differences for you all to enjoy.

 

Before my Holiday, i will be posting my final chapters of Crossing Blades so both of my shorter stories are finished.

 

Then i will be focused on getting my ??? Novella started and also Angel 2 posted.

 

My other project is a rewrite of Trust me... i'm An Angel which is in editing at the moment.

 

Lots going on for lots of reading.

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Hello Johnathan Colourfield!

As I crawl through these GA corridors I usually come across some interesting people.As I now have.

Johnathan. Your link led me to your poems!

I *want* to love your poems, but I cannot say that I do.

I have a different perspective of what is "poetry*.

Johnathan, your poems are extremely serious and deep. That is NOT a bad thing. It's easy to see that you have put a LOT of thought into each of them. Bless you for that!

I am curious about one thing though. Why so much about "war"? I'm just askin'.

For one so young you have a 40-50 year old way of thinking and expressing yourself! And I'm sure that we ALL appreciate that.

I haven't taken the time to check out your stories yet, but that's coming up!

You are *deep* Johnathan Colourfield!

Stay creative and enjoy!

Thanks dude!

ps-no way could I not like your stories p

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Hello Johnathan Colourfield!

As I crawl through these GA corridors I usually come across some interesting people.As I now have.

Johnathan. Your link led me to your poems!

I *want* to love your poems, but I cannot say that I do.

I have a different perspective of what is "poetry*.

Johnathan, your poems are extremely serious and deep. That is NOT a bad thing. It's easy to see that you have put a LOT of thought into each of them. Bless you for that!

I am curious about one thing though. Why so much about "war"? I'm just askin'.

For one so young you have a 40-50 year old way of thinking and expressing yourself! And I'm sure that we ALL appreciate that.

I haven't taken the time to check out your stories yet, but that's coming up!

You are *deep* Johnathan Colourfield!

Stay creative and enjoy!

Thanks dude!

ps-no way could I not like your stories p

 

Hehe :P No worries :) I always take a unique view on poetry :) I hate poems that are boring and i don't like rhyming poetry personally

 

With war, i studied it in english and i got insired by it :)

 

I like to have a mature way of thinking :) Thanks :$

 

Enjoy reading! :)

 

 

 

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Hehe :P No worries :) I always take a unique view on poetry :) I hate poems that are boring and i don't like rhyming poetry personally

 

With war, i studied it in english and i got insired by it :)

 

I like to have a mature way of thinking :) Thanks :$

 

Enjoy reading! :)

 

 

 

 

Johnathan,

I was so afraid that I might have hurt your feelings!

Apparently not. I'm very glad about that. :)

Only a day or two and I'll be begining your stories and I am really looking forward to it!

Cheers! hip hip or whatever it is that you guys say over there. :blink:

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Johnathan,

I was so afraid that I might have hurt your feelings!

Apparently not. I'm very glad about that. :)

Only a day or two and I'll be begining your stories and I am really looking forward to it!

Cheers! hip hip or whatever it is that you guys say over there. :blink:

 

Hehe :)

 

Nah i'm fed up of taking things to heart so if people think my work is bad they should read some of their own :P hehe :)

 

Oh thats going to be great phana :) Thank you so much :)

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Hi Guys Its been over a year since i've posted in here :)

Alot has happened over the last year. My A2's took over my life in general, i started to post alot more in the forums and i have an awesome boyfriend ^^

Now back to my stories. Alot of stories are now finished with Angel 1 and 2 being posted and alot of my shorter stories in the new system :)

I recently took part in the anthologies with my 'People are Strange' Entry in there entitled 'Passing Things On' and then my 'Walk On The Wild Side' entry entitled 'Stetson Boy', a story i'm very proud of :) Now my writing is going quite slowly lately. I have been doing ALOT of planning lately :)

 

 

 

But i'm now very proud to announce:

 

COMING SOON

 

 

TRUST ME... THIS IS THE DARKEST HOUR...: A PROLOGUE TO THE THIRD BOOK IN THE 'TRUST ME...' SERIES: Fall Anthology 2011: Legends. This legend will finally discover who and what he was. And why he keeps returning and returning with no loss of life...

 

AND

 

TRUST ME... YOU ARE NOT ALONE... : THE THIRD BOOK IN THE 'TRUST ME...' SERIES - The Conclusion of the Trilogy. Alot of questions are answered but so many are raised...

 

AND

 

THE WOMAN'S GAME: THE BOOK OF GENESIS. - The start of a whole new collection of stories in line with the legend of the mayan crystal skulls and one woman that will rule our planet; have everyone destroyed or have the planet infected with the never ending face...

Future Projects

The Womans Game: The Book of Revelations

Aftermath: Winter Anthology 2011

 

Then who knows?

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