Mann Ramblings Innocence & Carnality

[Carlos Hazday]

So you think someone could explain it to him? Perhaps he would not the the wood for the trees otherwise.

OMG!

 

Did you just say wood?

[Former Member]

OMG!

 

Did you just say wood?

 

just a saying           *gg*

Edited November 17, 2016 by Lyssa

[Timothy M.]

Dude! He lives in a whorehouse!

 

So you think someone could explain it to him? Perhaps he would not see the wood for the trees otherwise.

 

I thought the whole point of going to a whorehouse was you wouldn't have to deal with your wood yourself.

[hohochan657]

I thought the whole point of going to a whorehouse was you wouldn't have to deal with your wood yourself.

Nathan was raised a Victorian, and he wore a chastity device for a few years ! Naturally he'd be shy ... in that department and Rother had f'king BRANDED him AGAINST his wishes, so if I were him, I'd be silently screaming while performing the matrimonial duties !

 

I HATE Rother !

I HATE Rother !

I HATE Rother !

 

[hohochan657]

Ive just read chapter 5 ...

 

WHAT the H-LL is going on ? I don't think I'll be able to hold on till next Wednesday ... O my poor Nathan ...

[Former Member]

I sometimes wonder, if there will be an explosion of violence at one point or another from Nathan or Blythe. They got no option of empowerment left, so it seems. And this is could lead to a critical point.

[Carlos Hazday]

Don't y'all just love cliffies?

[Former Member]

Don't y'all just love cliffies?

Says the one, who knows.         lol

[Carlos Hazday]

Says the one, who knows.         lol

 

 

I'm still reading each chapter as they are posted and enjoying myself. It's nice to revisit what I read a long time ago.

[Former Member]

 

I'm still reading each chapter as they are posted and enjoying myself. It's nice to revisit what I read a long time ago.

I heard first times are overrated. Obvious I enjoy reading the chapters the first time... still a tiny little bit jealous of your greater experience.  

[Mann Ramblings]

Last week, we were left on a cliffhanger. What will happen now?

 

Chapter 6

[hohochan657]

Argh ... just read it ... (screaming but no one is here to hear it)

[dughlas]

I think they tumbled over the cliff ... the landing is gonna be interesting.

[Timothy M.]

I think they tumbled over the cliff ... the landing is gonna be interesting.

 

I was going to say hard... but that could be misunderstood.

[dughlas]

I was going to say hard... but that could be misunderstood.

It's likely someone wood ...

[Timothy M.]

After the most recent chapter, the suggestion by Rother in the previous chapter is rather ironic.

I’ll even let Blythe audition the applicants to keep you from being jealous of me.

[Carlos Hazday]

After the most recent chapter, the suggestion by Rother in the previous chapter is rather ironic.

I’ll even let Blythe audition the applicants to keep you from being jealous of me.

 

Poor, poor, Rother: Histed by his own petard. He did insist Nathan be accompanied by the bodyguard whenever the young man stepped outside Delaga House. Little did he know how well Blythe would perform his duties guarding Nathan's body. That boy's a nympho and a size queen!

[Former Member]

Poor, poor, Rother: Histed by his own petard. He did insist Nathan be accompanied by the bodyguard whenever the young man stepped outside Delaga House. Little did he know how well Blythe would perform his duties guarding Nathan's body. That boy's a nympho and a size queen!

soooooooooo many ways to answer this....tempting.

[hohochan657]

Poor, poor, Rother: Histed by his own petard. He did insist Nathan be accompanied by the bodyguard whenever the young man stepped outside Delaga House. Little did he know how well Blythe would perform his duties guarding Nathan's body. That boy's a nympho and a size queen!

I object, your Honour, Nathan is not a nympho. He was just, er, enthusiastic with Blythe is all. Honestly the man just saved his life ! A little show of appreciation on his part is more than justified. As for being a size queen, you all be the judges ...

 

BTW, I have to look up the word "petard" to understand the context, not being well versed in the classics is one of my many personal flaws ...

[Timothy M.]

I object, your Honour, Nathan is not a nympho. He was just, er, enthusiastic with Blythe is all.

 

Nathan may not be a nympho but Blythe certainly is most insistent and enthusiastic.

Edited December 12, 2016 by Timothy M.

[Former Member]

Insistent!

Edited December 7, 2016 by Lyssa

[Puppilull]

Maybe Nathan should construct something similar and have it give Rother a nice, tight hug...

 

[Mann Ramblings]

Just in case you didn't see...

 

Chapter 8 is up!

[Timothy M.]

It's interesting to see how I&C2 takes a completely different direction than I expected. I actuallt liked Rother quite a lot in book 1, and thought Nathan should get his act together. My main objection to Rother was the fact that he didn't give Nathan any instructions, either personally or via Samantha. Nevertheless I expected him to somehow make amends and redeem himself, at least right up to the moment he branded Nathan   - and I even thought you might pull it off in spite of that terrible act.

 

Now it seems as if Rother is getting worse by every chapter: selfish, cruel, unthinking, greedy, uncaring (about Nathan as well as his staff), obsessive and agressive. Did you always intend him to be this way, right from the start of book 1, or did he surprise you when his flaws were revealed?

[Former Member]

Could it be the first-person perspective the story is written in. We see Rother only through Nathans eyes. Nathan wanted to get a good husband, so his hopfully prospect was in this direction, but this changed via his experiences in his marriage and the prospect became a totally disenchanted color after the events with the branding.