Crave By Litlover

[LitLover]

Oh Honey, after the love scene you wrote, there is only one word to express our thoughts, and it's "wow"

 

so I'm sure it's a good wow

 

Drew's correct ... wow.

 

Thanks guys

[Timothy M.]

Of course it's a good wow.

I found myself doing the same thing which happens when I read Gary's love scenes. Saying 'Oh I wish I'd written this sentence' and 'I'll have to remember that part and use it in one of my stories.'

[LitLover]

The last full chapter of Crave has now been posted, and I'll be posting the epilogue tomorrow.  I hope you like it

[LitLover]

The epilogue is up and my first story is now complete.  Thank you everyone for all of your support, and thank you, Gary for all of your help in this process.  

Edited April 1, 2016 by LitLover

[Timothy M.]

Well done, LL.  I'll be back to review the last two chapters during the weekend.

[Drew Espinosa]

     CONGRATS LIT!!!       

 

On finishing your first novel

Edited April 1, 2016 by Drew Espinosa

[LitLover]

Well done, LL.  I'll be back to review the last two chapters during the weekend.

 

 

 

     CONGRATS LIT!!!       

 

On finishing your first novel

 

 

thanks guys  I'm really happy with how the story turned out and how it's been received.  

 

I'm still trying to decide if I want to do some prompt chapters for some of the side characters (or even M and J).  I guess I'll have to see if any prompts jump out at me.  

[Drew Espinosa]

Congrats on the new story Lit! Unforgivable began with a fantastic start!

[Timothy M.]

Congrats on the new story Lit! Unforgivable began with a fantastic start!

 

what he said - I already CRAVE more.

 

Oh and your Prologue was chapter 28,888 (4003 stories)

Edited April 13, 2016 by Timothy M.

[LitLover]

Congrats on the new story Lit! Unforgivable began with a fantastic start!

 

 

what he said - I already CRAVE more.

 

Oh and your Prologue was chapter 28,888 (4003 stories)

 

Thanks guys.  

 

I just hope I didn't mess up the Chapter 1 posting.  I have no idea what I did

[Timothy M.]

Thanks guys.  

 

I just hope I didn't mess up the Chapter 1 posting.  I have no idea what I did

 

whatever you do, DO NOT make any edits in chapter 1 until after it has posted, or you will mess things up, so it does not display in the story list.

[Headstall]

whatever you do, DO NOT make any edits in chapter 1 until after it has posted, or you will mess things up, so it does not display in the story list.

Oh, good point... I will be doing a second edit of chapter 1 tomorrow, because of some changes... when I send it back, hold onto it till after posting, Lit!

[LitLover]

whatever you do, DO NOT make any edits in chapter 1 until after it has posted, or you will mess things up, so it does not display in the story list.

 

Oh, good point... I will be doing a second edit of chapter 1 tomorrow, because of some changes... when I send it back, hold onto it till after posting, Lit!

 

I didn't set up chapter 1 to auto-post (thank goodness!)  So no worries about that.  

[Timothy M.]

You Google translated For Fanden da? I did too, and got God Damn !

You must now think Fanden means God - but in fact it means Satan.

 

By the way, did Jase use a condom?

[LitLover]

You Google translated For Fanden da? I did too, and got God Damn !

You must now think Fanden means God - but in fact it means Satan.

 

By the way, did Jase use a condom?

 

Hahaha I did think Fanden meant God.  Funny how sayings are like that.  lol

 

Jase did use a condom.  I was going to mention it, but since was Corey's POV I thought he would be too angry to take in that kind of detail.  

[Drew Espinosa]

I know there have been all these medical advancements in combatting STIs and HIV/AIDs, but damn... It's still scary to think about someone as promiscuous as Jase having unprotected sex. so thank goodness he was smart enough to use a condom, otherwise he could've passed something on to Perri

[LitLover]

I know there have been all these medical advancements in combatting STIs and HIV/AIDs, but damn... It's still scary to think about someone as promiscuous as Jase having unprotected sex. so thank goodness he was smart enough to use a condom, otherwise he could've passed something on to Perri

 

Jason is a promiscuous jerk, but he is smart enough to cover up... thank goodness. 

[Timothy M.]

so thank goodness he was smart enough to use a condom, otherwise he could've passed something on to Perri

 

That was my thought too, Drew.

[Drew Espinosa]

I do hope Perri has better luck with his next boyfriend. Hell I hope he gets the lottery when it comes to a relationship, 'cause he deserves it

[Timothy M.]

I'm wondering whether the story will now (ch.1) jump ahead to contemporary time, making the characters seven years older.

[Headstall]

I do hope Perri has better luck with his next boyfriend. Hell I hope he gets the lottery when it comes to a relationship, 'cause he deserves it

I felt so sorry for the guy... being blindsided in love... there's no worse feeling... well, except for losing a loved one.

I'm wondering whether the story will now (ch.1) jump ahead to contemporary time, making the characters seven years older.

I know the answer

[Drew Espinosa]

I know the answer

Tell us the answer and I'll be a perfect for an entire week

[Timothy M.]

I know the answer

 

Bah

 

Tell us the answer and I'll be a perfect for an entire week

 

  Not even I am naïve enough to believe that, Pi-boy.

[Headstall]

Bah

 

 

  Not even I am naïve enough to believe that, Pi-boy.

I know, right? Drew is pure audacity

[Drew Espinosa]

  Not even I am naïve enough to believe that, Pi-boy.

I know, right? Drew is pure audacity

It was worth a shot