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Fan-fricking-tastic game your boys played yesterday, Dayne. I was screaming for the Hokies big time. Rooting for Tech was a given; I love to watch an ACC team beat an SEC one, but Rain and Cory kept flashing through my mind. :D

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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

:D :D  :D :D :D

 

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I loved the new chapter Dayne!

 

Will we get a reaction from the Garza's soon? I'm sure Efrain's mom will have a lot to say about Connor Sr.'s treatment of Cory.

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Excellent installment, Dayne.

 

Realistic dialogue which had me tearing up from laughing so hard. Are we sure you're a girl? The way you capture the banter between a bunch of men is uncanny. Not something I see a lot of. Your guys, gay and non-gay, sound like men hanging out instead of simpering wusses. Subaru may object to one of their vehicles being called a breeder mobile but the line had me close to pissing my shorts. Rain's in-you-face protectiveness of Cory was the most romantic scene I've read in ages.

 

'So fucking killing you guys later' is my new favorite line of dialogue. I think I may have used similar language with my brothers at one point or another. :D

 

Keep the chapters coming, my friend.

I fully agree with this, the banter is so authentic, I was actually very surprised when I realized Dayne was a lady. That is NOT to discount any of the lady authors on here at all, who write fantastic characters. But Dayne has a way of coloring the dialogue with this subtle flavor of maleness, I actually thought she was a young guy in college herself for a while.

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Ahhh, nice. I know him from How to get away with murder.. he and Connor had a thing. I remember wondering if it was weird cause they kind of looked alike. Connor is played by Jack Falahee(sp) by the way.

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Sorry :(

 

In other, totally not related news, Netflix has the first season of The Magicians.  I've now decided that Hale Appleman's Eliot is what you'd get if Preston and Indie did the fusion dance. 

 

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Just reread all the Wild Card chapters, I'm having withdrawal symptoms...

  

 

I'm dying of suspense. Again. GAAAAAHHHH

I AM dead, my spirit will hound dear Dayne until a new chapter is posted ...

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A good way to pass time while you wait for a new chapter, would be to leave reviews on the chapters there already. ;)

Of course, then Dayne has to spend time replying, but she usually does that just before or after the next chapter posts.

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