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  1. I’m late to the party tonight as I am on the road…returning home tomorrow… Some thoughts… all of the comments above have hit the nail on the head, stating their thoughts much better than I could…. Travis White has crossed the Rubicon, will his wife follow? Perhaps an intervention with Juan’s mother, the Generalisamo in charge of the kitchen will help…. The following truly bothers me as we see the introduction of a new thread in to this tapestry. Assuming Mark isn’t from the Chicago area, the octopus that this insidious business is, has grown new tentacles… I don’t have a mom, and dad got fired from work. We had to move into his car. I hate my dad.” Mark’s overwhelmed and exhausted mind summarized the details it had taken the FBI hours to learn in a few short sentences before sharing the thing he had kept secret from everyone but Oliver. “My dad left me at the farm. I never want to see him ever again.” I’m now a broken record, as I keep saying this was the best chapter yet…and it is!!!
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    Bob's Dilemma

    Bob should think about what his better half would want for him in this situation….
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    L & O Chapter 4

    The prosecution has left themselves wide open to a lawsuit….
  4. Anduin is a snake in the grass and Claire is no better...both need to go...ASAP
  5. Just saw this and was hooked from the start!!!
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    L & O Chapter 3

    Don't forget the bears too!!!
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    Chapter 31

    Oh boy...it is going to get ugly real fast...Once they understand where the financial bodies are buried the fireworks will start...Did the she-wolf-step-witch get her hands on Drew's trust, or will it be used to help saving the company???
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    Try, Try Again

    My thoughts as well!!
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    Introductions

    My senses tell me there's a throuple in the future....
  10. And thereby the history of that particular place in the world, explained...and sadly we in the US aren't immune either these days... Much like Survivor or more tellingly, the Apprentice...
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    Chapter 13

    Well dang if that info dump don't beat all....like @Al Norris, I thought early senility might have started... Alex is a conundrum to say the least; several timelines/lives, far-sight, multiverse, and alternate dimensions...and just does he do on his 'vacations'??? An intriguing addition to the worlds of Baron Gereg...
  12. Not sure who the fu$k Jackie was fooling with the following comment..... He stared at her, “I don’t think I have the energy for this. It’s long past the time when we should have talked.” There was silence, but she didn’t move away. Finally, “I wasn’t planning on abandoning you?” Say what????? “Well, it certainly looked like that. Those photos.” “Andreas’ idea. Put the police off the scent, we could leave, set up new identities and you could join us later.” “Us?” How long later???? After being 'framed', possibly incarcerated, Damian in foster care at the worst, do you think either Ludo or Damien would want to join you...you selfless bitch!!!! She gave a snort, ‘Christ, nothing like that. Purely a business venture, he’s devoted to that hausfrau of his.” And what to do with the rest of your life Jackie whilst living in some 3rd world country, there's no frigging way she wouldn't be climbing the walls after a year or so of hiding out!!!! Therapy...therapy...and more therapy for all is desperately needed!!!! Fantastic chapter to say the least!!!!
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    L & O Chapter 3

    Are they really policemen? Let's hope whatever was written is of help...the nurse should have called for a doctor to stop the discharge once the signal was given to the nurse....
  14. What a remarkable thing for Michael's parents to not only contemplate, but do, along with Madiline and Colin to adopt him. A sad commentary on our healthcare system, where we go screaming like heck to avoid 'socialized' healthcare and eagerly embrace insurance that denies lifesaving coverages, 99% of the time because of the effects on profits....Sorry, not sorry for the rant... I'm loving this story even tho we had this little tid-bit...
  15. Tom is a royal pain in the ass who needs to learn that no, means just exactly that.... Frank, has a crush on Dante, it is plainly obvious... And just where are these 'other' religions practiced??? "Angels are beings appearing in other religions, used as messengers and protectors for humans by their deities. Your divine namesake, Dante, would probably pass for an angel in other religions."
  16. Glad to see you posted another chapter and one with quite a twist!!
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    Chapter 27

    Any man who comes bearing a 5lb bag of tater tots can...well you get my drift, (have his freaking way with me)...till the tots run out...Let's not forget the rib eyes either... Absolutely an amazing landscape...
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    Chapter 30

    My point exactly, whatever assets she has is subject to forfeiture if in fact there was some skullduggery at play here... My concerns here is that if they go to court, the Judge assigned will be the one who hated Mickey at the competition in DC...I hope that Judge is blatant with his biases giving grounds to take it to SCOTUS, where Mickey and team will ream a whole bunch of a-holes in winning the case...it's gonna be a bumpy ride folks!!!
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    L & O Chapter 2

    Trouble ahead folks, hope Dalton gets help quickly...
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    Chapter 30

    I have to wonder if there is anything left in Drew's trust fund...if it was looted, that's whole nother can 'o worms
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    Chapter 30

    As suspected the Step-bitch, which was/is much more than she seems, her reaction to seeing Drew’s father’s back was telling. One has to wonder if the destruction of the company is actually a programmed looting of assets to the benefit of her’s…. Needless to say, there will be some rough sledding and vituperative personal attacks from the “holier than thou” crowds…to me the key will be in the details..they will need to dig deep into past transactions, emails, and meeting notes…somewhere in there will be the silver bullet and hopefully a bucket of water to toss on the witch…. It is fantastic news about both becoming uncles!!
  22. A sad state of affairs when folks can't be what they advertise themselves to be....
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    Paris

    Thanks for this chapter, it is appreciated.... The best I can say about Cornwallis is he's a twit, dolt, and will fall short of the task at hand... I think George is correct in his observation of Talleyrand, commerce is his motivation.... Waiting eagerly for the meeting with Napoleon, watching Grainger keep his powder dry till the right moment will be fun to see.... Happy new year all!
  24. What more needs to be said, a fitting tribute worthy of your time and attention...
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