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Chapter 17 - Blame
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 17 - Blame
More importantly, how will they hook up with Dorjin or find other rebels??? -
Bobby is getting one heck of an education…
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Something about Jack Taylor isn't ringing true. Could he possibly have had an insurance policy on Joey? The whole thing about misremembering Will's phone number is interesting, seeing as how it was written down for him... Catlin is becoming suspect #1...is she being set up with her bad acting, mysterious ways, is she an all too obvious red herring??? Aiden's suggestion that he see a lawyer before giving her any money is interesting and on point. How will she react to such, seeing as how she won't allow company on any of her doctor's visits??? Then there is Aidien's desire to get married all too soon. Where was he at the time of Joey's death? Wasn't he the one who "found" the misplaced note? Searching that bedroom by himself would have given him time to conveniently 'place the discarded copy...Is he trying to cast any suspicion aside by rushing into marriage???
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If He Thought It Was Bad Before
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in If He Thought It Was Bad Before
I'm looking forward to Gavin getting his just desserts....someone should use their phone to record what Gavin and A-Hole Jr are saying/doing....- 26 comments
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It would seem that everyone's path is leading towards a climatic battle....
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That noose around Jaspe and his brother is getting tighter and the situation a bit more serious...I wonder if there were others on this side of the channel who were associates and not yet apprehended...finding one could lead to having them turn and cough up Jasper's location... Denise's suggestion about the flat with a granny apartment was very insightful!!!!
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Etienne needs to be careful…The priest and his aunt are bad omens…
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The was a kid named Kenny in my 7th grade class, the first time we had to take showers after Gym was an eye opener, as he was a man among boys...there wasn't anything small about his appendage...
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I love, love...that is when I am not being Uncle Cranky... .
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A deepening romance and new powers await to be fully discovered...what of the potential treasure on the recently acquired property??
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I found the part about the gold coins intriguing; a $20.00 gold piece is 1.075 troy ounces, as gold is measured in troy ounces. The price of gold today is $3320.00 per troy ounce. New, gold 1-ounce coins are selling for $3400 to $3500 depending on the vendor. price of gold today - Search Factor in that these coins are antique can raise the value: Used, a $20.00 coin may fetch a bit more than the price of gold today, about $3500 Mint, condition a $20.00 coin could run nearly $10,000.00 An uncirculated $20.00 coin could fetch upwards of $54,000.00 cost of a 1864 Confederate $20 gold coin - Search So the ESW made an appearance and was caught on camera, most likely anyone looking at it will see an emaciated, beat-up wolf... Can't for the life of me understand the neighbor Duncella...she needs to be told to mind her own business, if not charges for harassment will be filed, and appreciate the fact they are the best neighbors she will ever have...
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Monday, March 3, 2025 (II)
drsawzall commented on Celian's story chapter in Monday, March 3, 2025 (II)
As noted above, I wonder if Kellen is suffering from a deep-seated mental block... Kellen needs to find his humanity before I could begin to respect him, or think of him as a potential life partner for Dust... -
Having read a large part of these, my reading list goes phew to the number still left!!!!!
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I can't help myself, with the pillow or in the pillow....
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Twice in this chapter, it is noted that Henry was clutching a paper in his hand, and then his mother revealed that she had left information about Liberty Academy for Henry as she mulled over donating to the academy. Where is that paper now? Damir/Matthew/The Wolf is broken, giving up the ghost and lost. At the same time the noose is beginning to tighten, what they have is scant, but from small clues, the story of his involvement will grow...Can he be saved, rehabilitated? He's making a decision that will anger The Turd. The Turd is in a world of deep crap, trying to delay medical help for his son, looking for another hit man, his conversation with Henry, and now another 'interview' with the detectives.... And what becomes of Henry, his recovery will be as arduous as his brothers, will they find each other in the hospital, and their mother? As Henry becomes coherent and is interviewed, will a description of his clothing be taken, noted? Will that information make it to the police on the streets, leading to suspects? This and so many other threads in this disparate tapestry are slowly coalescing, and the beginnings of a larger picture are forming. Juan is very lucky to have someone like Sam, who, through his dedication to the job, is an asset!
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Another Sleepover and a Sleep-out
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another Sleepover and a Sleep-out
Well, the boys, for the most part, had some fun...others had the kind that proves the theory of Social Darwinism.... Back in my younger days,, when the Philistines were rocking the neighborhood on their velociraptors, I had the bright idea that if I made a slide for the swing set out of a fir plank, I could impress my friends. It was that first trip down that abused me of any such notion. I ran screaming home with a ginormous splinter stuck in my left butt cheek. It was embarrassing to have to lie on the couch as my mother packed the area with ice cubes in a face cloth, which then proceeded to slip out to parts even more embarrassing. Mother could not get the splinter out and off to the doctor's office we went. Had I been previously embarrassed, I was now mortified as I was to drop my skimpy covering in front of Nurse Nancy prior to the doctor cutting the splinter out...Thank goodness it was my father who took over my bathing duties, tho I'm not sure if he really was going to use duct tape to hold the plastic covering in place, score one for mom... -
From the picture at the end of the story...Is that a banana pillow in your lap or are you glad to see me???
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Chapter 16 - The Crash
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 16 - The Crash
While I can't condone mass slaughtering of innocents, I still feel disabling/destroying the whale blimp would have been a wise move. Was she the only passenger on the eel ship? -
More distractions/red herrings...the list of suspects is growing... I'm not convinced it was Keiyara who misspelled the note Aiden found... What was Catlin up to, how far was she from the class she was going to, was it on the way or out of the way? Dorm access was by electronic pass, there will be a record of passes used, were there security cameras in use? And we have more...
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And best of all, it ain't raining!!!! David just can't help himself...
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Matt gets an offer & Kjell is annoyed
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Matt gets an offer & Kjell is annoyed
One would have to wonder what Kjell thinks of the work of Leonardo.... Glad to see Matt is/was accepting of the offer, and as a lover of old cars, I have a fascination for pre-WW2 cars and hate to see it sold but understand why!!! -
May CSR Discussion Day: The Answer by Wayne Gray
drsawzall commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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My mother was from a family of professional cooks, and she made sure I could do so...What most don't realize is that it is so easy to prepare a meal. Thanks for sharing and bringing back some wonderful memories for me!!!
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As the old saying goes, even a blind squirrel finds a red herring once in a while....
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Monday, March 3, 2025 (I)
drsawzall commented on Celian's story chapter in Monday, March 3, 2025 (I)
I was being facetious on the slow burn...Kellen sorta grows on you like wart remover....
