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Everything posted by drsawzall
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Met his sorrowful end as was his due.....
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Will the recipients of Lucien's blood notice any difference in it? Or is Lucien able to prevent them from noticing, as he does when establishing a bond or not? While I also understand that the blood keeps folks alive for centuries, is it just for the old folks? The following makes me curious as to how it fully works...and what would happen if it stopped. And....has Eli been down to the records Lucien mentioned to see if he can break the bindings? Now, with Lucien’s blood sharpening his perception, he could see it for what it was: residue. The accumulated effect of generations of vampire blood, bred into the bone structure and the skin and the specific way the light caught their faces. They were beautiful because they’d been built on stolen material, and the beauty was a receipt.
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Back to the beginning
drsawzall commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in Back to the beginning
Has no one noticed the electrical bill going through the roof? This 'garden' must consume a lot of electricity, and whose meter is the power connected to? -
Well wadda youse guys know... @Summerabbacat ‘Uncomfortable is allowed,’ Luke said. ‘You don’t have to decide what you think about everything before you walk through the door.’ Matt nodded in agreement. ‘Go and have a look if you want. Seeing how other people live never hurt anyone. Straight, gay, whatever . . . it doesn’t matter. You might learn something. You might not. Either way you’ll know more than you do now.’ That night, Levi thought about it some more, then the next day he paid a visit to Father Costas on the way home. The priest said almost the same thing as they sat in the quiet of the garden, only with fewer words. Levi had just finished edging the path. Father Costas was sitting on the low brick wall, a cup of tea in his hands. He was wearing another t-shirt with a band on it. ABBA . . . Levi had never heard of them, so he figured they must have been old. And why was one letter ‘B’ back to front? So very true...I think Levi understands this so much better now Father Costas nodded, then added, ‘Sometimes the most useful thing we can do is simply refuse to look away.’ And a tissue warning should have been issued... especially for those with certain forms of "Hay Fever" That was a well-written and very powerful last half of the chapter; it sorta hits home...
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Chapter 4: The Ghost Station
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 4: The Ghost Station
Simply a brutal tale of survival, and proof of Vane's philosophy that we are only beasts, cannon fodder, weaklings, only Vane gets it backwards, as the boys do find shreds of their common humanity. -
I would have to agree with both commentators, and again, I realize the age of our protagonists plays a huge role in their actions; that Miles felt he could not say goodbye, as we are left to believe, speaks volumes. All of that and the comments above hinge on a supposition, so the questions are: did Miles leave a note, have that difficult discussion with Troy? If he did, then other things become clearer, such as checking in with Eric. Will we see the answer to these questions when we next read Troy's POV? If he just walked out, then I find myself in the "I don't like Miles camp." I'm just on a fence here.... And simply along for the ride....
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And their hearts will go on....
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Perhaps offering himself instead of Eli? We know he is extremely upset with his so-called family life and his grandfather...
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A short but moving story about love and the beginnings of a precious, fragile love. What more can I say but...Read this story!!!
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Thank you for this, one of your best yet! Perhaps at the same time, that big ol' wrench could be used as a toothbrush, for whatever teeth remain....
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Chapter 26 ~ Rectal Retribution ~
drsawzall commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 26 ~ Rectal Retribution ~
Agreed @Wiyot. I wonder if anyone has a guess or two as to his outcome. One might say Buford has a 'bug' up his ass.... -
Back to the beginning
drsawzall commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in Back to the beginning
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Well now, what we don't know is if there was any communication, verbal or written, left for Troy when Miles left. If there wasn't, then I would consider that to be a very shitty thing to do. It may/might be best if both boys simply moved on with their lives: Miles finds the therapy that works for him, and the same for Troy. I could see at the end of this story, both finding different partners, and being not only happy with their lives, but with each other's new life. I suspect that there will be many humongous bumps in the road to come, and thankfully, I'm just along for the ride; now if the driver of that Uber turns into Kage, I might have to start drinking...
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Has Adrian condemned others to death, if not...will he do so, is his easy-going effort with Eli just a ruse, or is he falling for Eli? I am curious what is or has been done to the 47 others to make them so compliant? If the blood is tainted by drugs or drink, would that have an effect? There are so many ways this could go in, and I am loving it!
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And the tension builds very slowly. When trouble comes, how will Gnaeus comport himself, at the enemies in front of him, or those he perceives to be weak???
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This should be interesting to see how the rest of this date goes
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Chapter 2: The Pressure Cooker
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2: The Pressure Cooker
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Chapter 3: The Friction of Stone
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 3: The Friction of Stone
One asked where Vane's crack is...one wishes it was the one he sits on but alas...it is between his ears.... "An interesting subject, Calloway," Vane's voice murmured, close to Elias's ear. He hadn't heard him move. "The physiognomists would have a field day. The delicate bone structure, the fineness of the hands. Biology whispers of predisposition. But psychology... psychology is the clay. He is weak clay. Prone to malformation." Physiognomy - Wikipedia sapiosexual - Search -
Chapter 2: The Pressure Cooker
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2: The Pressure Cooker
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Chapter 2: The Pressure Cooker
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Chapter 1: The Geometry of Cold
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Geometry of Cold
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Yes indeed!!!! And cousins, second cousins, and a whole bunch more of cousins....
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Bubba has a lot of bruthers......
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And the author as well..... Julian needs to sit with Mr Clarke, look at the figures, and ask themselves what the plantation nearly brought to its knees is actually worth...I imagine much less than recouping the funds he lost through mismanagement. The second question is what it would actually take to restore the plantation to profitability... I would subtract that number from the asking price, and then make a realistic offer. Best yet, have a few other 'plantation' owners make an offer, if they were to sell, to truly gauge the actual value. Use both of those figures and quotes, and offer his father pennies on the dollar...ensuring most of the 50K remains, not only to restore the plantation, but to expand... Lastly, find a way to get Miles out to the islands....In 1848, fortunes were made and lost overnight in San Fransciso due to rampant speculation. I have a sneaking suspicion the reason for the sudden demand is that Father may have found his balls in a vice of his own making and needs the funds to meet the call on his untimely 'investments'...and faces ruin.... I consulted my investment advisor for this advice...so ya know....it's gotta be true....
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I have to agree, it has been nearly four years, whether Eil gives it freely or as a sacrifice by the Vesper society remains to be seen.... And what is in those archives, and what about the successful law student, if I remember correctly, that was spoken about.... This is getting better and better...
