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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    This is going to be one hell of an adventure…and ya just gotta love this mangy cast of ill begotten, flea bitten, cast of characters….
  2. drsawzall

    Prologue

    With so many stories to catch up on, I couldn’t resist…
  3. I worked with some folks those movers reminded me of, sad part was they were upper management…
  4. Steven still has a mighty long way to go, he’s taking the first steps, now to put in the effort to make it stick…
  5. drsawzall

    "Altitude"

    Sideways seems to be a multi-directional hazard…and I suspect the different tangents will have sharp edges…
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 5

    This comment is spot on!!!
  7. drsawzall

    Presentations

    Not all battles of import are fought at sea...Rumor, duplicity, and innuendo are known to travel faster than actual knowledge of the situation, when to tack, when to jibe, and trim your sails... “Alquier does not seem like the kind of man who is good at schemes, so this must have been developed by Villeneuve,” Granger mused. “That is why I find him so offensive,” Cardona spat. “Such a liaison would not have happened without approval from Paris,” Granger opined. Cardona looked at him questioningly. “This is too important of an alliance to France to allow a minor diplomat to wreak havoc on his own.” “I can see your point,” Cardona said. “You are suggesting that Villeneuve was following orders?” “That is what I am suggesting,” Granger said. “If Alquier is not the type of man to set up such a scheme, and I agree with you that he is not, then who did?” Cardona asked. “This entire scheme has the fingerprints of Monsieur de Talleyrand all over it,” Granger said. He could see his scheming French friend putting together just such a plot.
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    This is the part that piqued my curiosity...if it doesn't belong here, where does it???
  9. My goodness…how to convince a soul to come back…
  10. Loved the banter, Mack and Mills are a treasure and had me in stitches…and if I think this chapter hilarious, I can’t wait for the wedding planning…. "You look good in gold, it’s clearly your color, Mack," Parker teased, turning to leave. "Walk away, Parker," Mack warned, though he was already burying his face in a warm, freshly dried combat shirt. "Just walk away and let me have my moment with the fabric softener.”
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    Sam will soon learn the importance of Ser Graeme’s words, the world outside his village is full of danger.
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    Toto…this isn’t Kansas anymore, we got flying (dancing) monkeys…
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    And the plot thickens??? Priya held the vial up to the light one last time. “This is either the most extraordinary find of my career… or something that doesn’t belong here at all.”
  14. drsawzall

    Buck Goes Pro

    Wow in a good way....😉
  15. drsawzall

    School Starts

    Loved this, music in this genre reminds me of my earlier years chasing groups like this as I followed the bluegrass/soft country rock circuit....AND...can't count the times I was told: "I'm going straight to hell"!!!!!!!
  16. This keeps cropping up in my memory banks.... Kitt tried to roll his eyes, but the smile that tugged at his mouth made it useless. He stepped onto the bus and looked back just once—Matt in his hoodie, hair a mess, grin bright enough to cut through the early-morning haze. The doors hissed shut. Kitt leaned his forehead briefly against the cool glass, watching as Matt jogged across the lot toward his car, waving one last time before the bus pulled away. The sun was just beginning to climb, soft gold spilling across the road. &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& Why then does Matt take the bus back? The bus waited with its doors open, engine rumbling. “You ready to go back?” Matt asked, rocking on his heels. Kitt glanced at the bus, at his teammates filing in with drooping shoulders and damp hair, then back at Matt. “Yeah,” he said. “Can I sit with you?” Matt asked, like there was any universe where the answer was no. “Of course,” Kitt said, and meant it a little more than he knew how to say.
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    Chapter 18

    As with others, and my aged brain can work slowly, but early this morning, as I was ruminating on this latest chapter, and it came to mind that Jacy seemed to be inordinately interested (absorbed?) with the collection whilst Killian was engaged with the Mrs...
  18. Small steps leading towards a reconciliation soon.
  19. drsawzall

    Two Worlds

    I can’t disagree with this comment above, and want to reinforce that in all my bitching and moaning, it is because of the author’s skill and talent, that he draws such a visceral reactions from me. And I need to note this was one of the best chapters yet.
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 18

    Forgot to comment on Seth and Kate’s mother, that cancer is particularly horrible, and while I have no love for her, or what she is and did, I can only hope that as her time ends, that she has the time to reflect understand the harm she is responsible for.
  21. One of your best chapters yet…packed full of valuable information… We are reminded that a lich can be killed, yet in Arlo’s case it isn’t so easy. So difficult that many gods are willing and trying to understand what the lich has that makes it so difficult to destroy it. We learn that when Arlo’s time comes, if he is a follower of Densa, he will return to the place his earlier vision showed him. All of this makes me wonder, what is the endgame of the lich that has Arlo’s fate? To become a god, perhaps?
  22. drsawzall

    School Starts

    Perhaps We Willie will see the light while he’s getting a swirly in the boys bathroom…just sayin… It’s a shame in his case stupid is forever…
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 18

    Oh what tangled webs have been woven. It would appear that Killian has relationships like his driving….fast and all over the place. How good are Killian and Jacy as climbing out of Bathroom windows??
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    Chapter 18

    The day draws near, forces are gathering to end evil’s reign will they have the forces necessary to defeat Septimus?
  25. Gossip and rumors…traveling faster than the speed of sound..
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