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If our victim was suspected intoxicated, was or will there be a blood test or look for other signs, like under his fingernails?
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Loving this…
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Another Brick in the Wall
drsawzall commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Another Brick in the Wall
So…that’s what happened…looks at self in the mirror… I’m not exactly the poster boy for boulder gyms. I’ve got… layers.” He gestured vaguely at his midsection. “Factory work keeps the arms and back decent, but the rest of me decided to get comfortable.” -
The Risky Business Variation
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in The Risky Business Variation
Great…memo to self…make the appointment with the chiropractor before emulating the dance… -
If careful, not only will the good scripts come but the awards that recognize the work, work that is history in the making .
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Growing up is never easy…Rather Captain Underpants than a toilet bowl swirly
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Germany – Munich for the day
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Germany – Munich for the day
Neil’s education is expanding and life Neil, I love nothing better than traipsing through museums and local historical sites…even better, I will be in Munich in mid-November…. -
The gauntlets have been thrown, o the fun to follow…
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Sad but a truth over eons, think Jim Baker and Tammy…and don’t forget the selling of indulgences either…. It is a lie!" he thundered. "The Church has become a whore, sitting on a throne of gold while the faithful starve! She blesses the swords that cut down the poor! But God sees! God is not fooled! God is sharpening His blade!"
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I was reading The Arms of Krupp, and came across that little nuggett. Their business model was to create an armor that was superior to all others, sell it like hotcakes then sell something that could defeat the armor. This really took off after gunpowder was in widespread use…it was a cycle of “new and improved “ armaments that went on for few centuries…
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Don’t forget Ashot has his own band of feral munchkins, once they are aware, I suspect a lot of ghostly mayhem….
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Wylan is more than capable and don’t forget Bran….Let’s see what the Ladies come up with…
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It’s been what…five days and so much to still discover ….there are however, multitudes of red herrings…. And we have met the killer, if not Larry, how about the gardener?
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Malik and Rhaelce need to stop this childlike behavior and truly sort things out…their current behavior is not helpful…accept what has happened and understand it for what it was….Malik is a bit disappointing ATM….
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The real test will come when Levi is tossed in to the hormonal swimming pool called school….
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Bartos is growing in strength with his use of the might. If we couldn’t have a house fall on the witch, or a pail of water, I’m happy with her finale… What will they be up against when this journey is over?
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Chapter 2: Leonard and Elijah
drsawzall commented on irivera's story chapter in Chapter 2: Leonard and Elijah
Oh my goodness…enough teenage angst to, fill a small swimming pool…this should be very interesting! -
Chapter 13 Strange New World
drsawzall commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Chapter 13 Strange New World
Hopefully Joel and Hank take it slow and with the blessings of the children. -
Thank you for taking the time to read this and many thanks!
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Now…I’d pay money to see this….
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Chapter 9 Back to class: Monday January 7th- Friday 11th, 1974
drsawzall commented on Gary L's story chapter in Chapter 9 Back to class: Monday January 7th- Friday 11th, 1974
Looking forward to the next chapter…as you wrap up Book 2. I had to look up the following…..attempted 'golpe de estado' of 1981 -
Chapter Five: The Memorial
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Five: The Memorial
And with Mr Park another red herring lands on the table…. -
Overconfidence is such a bad, ahem, habit…. He is blind, she thought, the realization filling her with arrogant, dismissive triumph. They have a crippled hedge-mage defending them. He reads the dirt like a worm. He cannot see the blood. She smiled, a thin, bloodless expression, monumentally underestimating the man who had just thrown her violently out of his husband's mind.
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I like the description cosmetically challenged tragic skank much better…after all, if the description fits she best wear it…
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Chapter 1: Christian and Josiah
drsawzall commented on irivera's story chapter in Chapter 1: Christian and Josiah
Interesting beginning, let’s see where this goes….
