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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Bravo...encore...the sound of hands clapping...encore...Ross is wondering why the curtain wasn't falling, then noticing the old stagehand was slumped over...or was he asleep... Just love the heck out of this, and Asro needs a bigger part...hint...hint!!!
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    Chapter 16

    Who knew red herrings wore watches...
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 18

    Dover, a besieged city, finds two intractable forces in a stalemate. The King in the west, though ill, is attempting to raise a substantial army, and our Knight and Squires watch to see how all of this plays out, knowing their loyalty may not be to the crown per se, but to the realm and opposed to the thought of a French victory. And among all of this, ill winds blow, certain to test the resolve of our knight and squires...
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    First Blood

    Simply practice for the main event???
  5. I so want to get a copy of Lewis and Charles Discover a Murder....
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    I'm not liking the wife, she seems to be a manipulative b*$ch...it will be interesting to see how they will 'find' each other again...
  7. drsawzall

    Chapter 3: 10/10

    A picture of a family living on the margins, I am puzzled that part of the father's owed salary was held back. The company I worked for carried an insurance policy on its employees; it was part of our benefit package. When an employee passed away, the family received a full year's salary and the remainder of the employee's salary for that year.
  8. When you don't talk to each other, but at each other... He had been right to call out the dishonesty. He had been right to demand respect. But as he sat up, the silence of the room told him he was currently the king of a very small, very cold hill. Miscommunication can be deadly... Anchor, he thought, the word a silent, desperate pulse in the dark... Anchor.
  9. Sounds like the Korvosan Four will be throwing a party for Vencarlo, tho there's still the sword to destroy and a crown to steal...
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Ohhhh, the good ship Tanya isn't too pleased...she's gonna be trouble....the question is, is she really the iceberg? What Tom can’t see is Tanya at the window. She is staring hard at Arjan and Tom. Staring very hard with a large frown on her petite face.
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    Chapter 4

    From what I remember, and I may be wrong, but the Ksingis are not evil monsters, and when provokedhey will do their best to eliminate the source of the irritation. Perhaps our esteemed author @Lupus could remind us of the chapter when we first met the Ksingis and their unique means of traveling...
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    Chapter 1

    And they take one look at me, wave the wand, toss my shoes and belt, and urge me to move it... they didn't appreciate my move-it dance tho...
  13. Gosh, Grams is a hero!~!~! Now, where are those damned tissues??? All that melting snow has released mud pollen...
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Well, no pesky TSA security lines to hold one up… Like this very much and let’s see where this goes…..
  15. drsawzall

    Alice

    Jeepers…talk about a confluence of shitestorms…here’s hoping Alice manages to keep a clear head given some time and rest…talk about body blows!
  16. drsawzall

    Alice

    What time does the meteor hit the hospital?
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Thanks, there a few ideas percolating in my head, as it stands there will be another segment , and hopefully this summer!
  18. Interesting… Hunt traced it with his finger. Unknown to him, Sterling watched quietly from inside the house. For a moment the wind stood still and the water in the pool barely moved. The coach felt his eyes burn but was unable to blink, they glowed with a red inner light. The statue seemed to be looking at him with a merciful gaze.
  19. So much fun!
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 6

    Can’t add to what’s been said other to say thank you for sharing this with us, thanks!
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 11

    Seems to me we have a “retired “ special ops team that freelances from time to time, and those after Jessie are in for a world of hurt…
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 15

    Changes to the left of me, changes to the right of me, and it is time to stop prevaricating…you have college, a growing career, and responsibilities that you won’t have in NYC….that you can’t give Micah an answer speaks volumes… "When can you deal with it, Killian? It seems to me you're just avoiding the issue altogether. Last night was incredible, right?" "Last night was incredible," I reluctantly agreed. "It could be like that all the time. Just say yes." "I...I need more time." Micah's face fell. "Time's running out."
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    Chapter 16

    I suspect this is but a small step in a series of increasingly difficult steps. ‘And what is it exactly that you see in our futures, old man?’ It was Garrett who had eventually asked the question that everyone else had been thinking. The answer didn’t come directly, but it did come. ‘I see the road to Jeebath . . . but there shall be much that will need to pass before that particular journey begins.
  24. There’s gonna be more separation and the boys are going to have to deal with it….
  25. Difficult to understand what is going on when we only hear one side of a tenuous conversation….
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